"City" + "Funny" + "Semi-System" + "Stable Development" + "Unhappy Article"
Good news: Zhuang Yan has traveled through time, and he still has the system!
Bad news: I've been transformed into a group performer in Hengdian, a parallel world, my cultivation level has been cleared, and I also have a forced facial paralysis BUFF!
More bad news: The system settings are cheating. Want to restore your power? OK! Go act! Act as a corpse, as cannon fodder, and as all kinds of passers-by! The more "serious" you act, the faster your reputation will rise!
Since then, there has been a moving iceberg scenery on the set:
Play the bandit who "died laughing"? His eyes were lifeless and the corners of his mouth were motionless, as if he had been tapped.
The male supporting actor who plays "Emotional Confession"? He recited love words with an expressionless face, and the heroine was frightened and thought she had encountered an AI scam.
Playing the role of a passerby who "gets his toes stepped on"? His whole body was stiff, only his toes were twitching wildly in his shoes...
Zhuang Yan: "I was once a master of millions with one sword, but now I have to rely on my facial paralysis to perform passionate dramas and fool around with lunch to earn my reputation? This way of 'surviving the tribulation' is too strange!" He vomited after eating the lunch, and was numb from the slaps. When his iceberg face, which has remained unchanged for thousands of years, unexpectedly became the "ceiling of contrasting cuteness" that was hotly discussed on the Internet, the real trouble had just begun... What was the plan of this system that forced him to be an extra? A hilarious history of "stable development" in the entertainment industry caused by facial paralysis is about to begin! Click it and reap an unexpected source of happiness!
Reader comments
Um. . I don't want to comment after just reading a little bit, but does it go against the title and introduction from the beginning? I think this expression is quite rich, doesn't it look like facial paralysis? (The sly eyebrows and rat-like eyes, although many of them should be Xiao Jiujiu in my heart, but they are really dramatic, and I am embarrassed to see them.)
And although there is a setting for superficial facial paralysis, there are very few descriptions of facial paralysis. Most of them are relatively rich expressions and psychological descriptions. It is really difficult to deepen the setting of the protagonist's actual facial paralysis. ("Everyone is drunk but I am alone" is really embarrassing to say. It is better to describe other people's feelings about the protagonist. It is really embarrassing to say it directly)
Did you have a certain sexual relationship with the landlord at the beginning? And the character of the protagonist is too vulgar. . (Why do you include an AI-generated description? It feels like I wrote it before I had fully figured out what the protagonist would look like.)
There is a bit too much nonsense in the first few chapters, which makes people less interested in reading, so it is considered a low-key. It took more than one chapter to write about the entanglement between the protagonist and Sister Liu, and to introduce Sister Liu's character and principles. It was too much, too long and vulgar. It's too slow to enter the main storyline. It feels like the protagonist just wants to work hard and overcome the tribulation on the surface, but in fact this is not the case (the facial paralysis attribute is causing trouble, but I feel that I haven't thought about the direction this attribute can take)
The author's parenthetical content (PS) is a bit too much. It is really not recommended for novice writers to add too many voiceovers, as it will also create drama.
There are too many descriptions, and it feels close to the word "water". It's a bit too much to describe one thing in three or four terms. Whether listening to a book or reading an article, it will make you feel tired. It is necessary to reduce it appropriately! (Also, there are too many repetitive plots in one incident, such as when the elder sister picks out people. The people being slapped are different but the purpose is the same. The people watching are tired and bored. I don't know if my laughing point is too high and I can't laugh.)
(There is a lot of subjective content, but the impression is really just average. I don't rate it too low or too high. I can only say go for it.)
Um. . I don't want to comment after just reading a little bit, but does it go against the title and introduction from the beginning? I think this expression is quite rich, doesn't it look like facial paralysis? (The sly eyebrows and rat-like eyes, although many of them should be Xiao Jiujiu in my heart, but they are really dramatic, and I am embarrassed to see them.) And although there is a setting for superficial facial paralysis, there are very few descriptions of facial paralysis. Most of them are relatively rich expressions and psychological descriptions. It is really difficult to deepen the setting of the protagonist's actual facial paralysis. ("Everyone is drunk but I am alone" is really embarrassing to say. It is better to describe other people's feelings about the protagonist. It is really embarrassing to say it directly) Did you have a certain sexual relationship with the landlord at the beginning? And the character of the protagonist is too vulgar. . (Why do you include an AI-generated description? It feels like I wrote it before I had fully figured out what the protagonist would look like.) There is a bit too much nonsense in the first few chapters, which makes people less interested in reading, so it is considered a low-key. It took more than one chapter to write about the entanglement between the protagonist and Sister Liu, and to introduce Sister Liu's character and principles. It was too much, too long and vulgar. It's too slow to enter the main storyline. It feels like the protagonist just wants to work hard and overcome the tribulation on the surface, but in fact this is not the case (the facial paralysis attribute is causing trouble, but I feel that I haven't thought about the direction this attribute can take) The author's parenthetical content (PS) is a bit too much. It is really not recommended for novice writers to add too many voiceovers, as it will also create drama. There are too many descriptions, and it feels close to the word "water". It's a bit too much to describe one thing in three or four terms. Whether listening to a book or reading an article, it will make you feel tired. It is necessary to reduce it appropriately! (Also, there are too many repetitive plots in one incident, such as when the elder sister picks out people. The people being slapped are different but the purpose is the same. The people watching are tired and bored. I don't know if my laughing point is too high and I can't laugh.) (There is a lot of subjective content, but the impression is really just average. I don't rate it too low or too high. I can only say go for it.)