Hogg************

The writing is beautiful, and although the cover isn't great, it's pretty awesome. The character description is very good. Hermione retains the original character without being too frivolous - she is really, really cute! Also with Hermione's aggression The structure of the whole book is very good, and the title is also very good, with interlocking links and twists and turns. Especially the settings of the Star Stone and the Moon White Stone are... Well, very... Wonderful?

I've read Chapter 7, and it's okay. I've changed a lot of settings. The Leaky Cauldron seems to have been completely changed. The way to enter Diagon Alley has been completely changed. You need to use a bronze piece. The style of the admission notice has also been changed. This is no longer a HP fanfic. The name of Gringotts has been replaced by another name (but the name of Madam Malkin's clothing store has not been changed. I don't understand why the author changed the name half way). Professor McGonagall has a weird character. Ollivander's wand shop is gone. Magic items that shouldn't be there appear in Hermione's house. The power system is not similar to the original work. I can only say that except for some names, it has nothing to do with the original work. Just read this. It is not the HP fanfic I want to see.

I hope the protagonist will focus on improving himself first and learn all the advanced spells. Strength is the first priority, so that he can protect Hermione.

After reading the beginning, the writing is very good, but it feels a bit like AI. But even if it is really AI, it is used very well. At least it is a good book so far. There are some special settings, such as not going to Ollivanders to buy a wand, and the Leaky Cauldron is no longer available. Although it is a bit weird, it does not have any impact. If you like the single heroine Hermione, you may want to consider this book if you are more interested in daily life.

Professor McGonagall's personality is a bit different

It's very beautiful. It adds a lot of settings and the various scenes are described very delicately, but it's just not that sweet at the front.

It's okay, the plot is very good

This book is really good

Well written, the article is poetic

The timeline is a bit messy, but the content is relatively good

Damn it, this book is so well written.

It's indeed very sweet. The writing is quite elegant, not like vernacular writing. It's really sweet, and those who like it will feel good.

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