The Talented Boy Started Delivering Food and Became a Capital

Lin Jing in the back is particularly annoying and uncomfortable to watch. Just remove this line and it will be fine.

After reading a few chapters in the early stage, you may feel that it is too cold, but after reading it, you feel like you are not feeling the pain. After reading the latest chapter, the emotional line feels a bit abrupt, and the personal industrial layout is too big (global), which may cause discomfort to "patriots", but the protagonist's personal ability improvement is handled very well, and it will not make people feel confused. Summary: It is a good book

Realism reborn [smile]

If you don't have enough manuscripts, can you use AI?

All I can say is that it's okay in Tomato.

I've only read Chapter 8, and I feel like everything in the book is very hard and unrevealing, except for my mother. It's not bad for now, I can watch it.

I can't stop looking so good

It's very interesting. Come on, author, don't stop.

This book is so awesome

Great, keep up the good work!

? Why is the score so low? , Although I can't understand it, I feel it's very interesting?

Rare good grass

It's okay. It's much better than mindless writing.

Well, a very good technical article. It was discovered early and there are few words.

The writing is very good, the writing style is so delicate, and the characters are well created.

I like this kind of article

Beautiful, highly recommended

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Not bad, keep up the good work

Full of fainting, must be full of fainting, very awesome

It's good to watch, but not many people will read it. I don't know how long the author can last.

Why didn't there be any off-board moves at that time? It was almost impossible for that era.

Eat v ha v J-10 attacks with little me asking ha

The protagonist's behavior is very similar to mine. But I don't have a system or a mother, and I'm not as awesome as him.

Yes, the story is told smoothly. There are basically no poisonous points and there are a few minor flaws.

Still very beautiful

The writing is very good, and the logical conception is very thorough. It makes me, an old bookworm, wonder if it is the vest of some great god. In addition, please update it quickly [smile]

This style is very rare in novels and can be considered unique, but sometimes it can be less blunt. Some people in the comment area have gone too far. Come on, author.

It's very beautiful, but not enough. I hope you won't be fooled.

Nice looking xdm, not fast paced, but very comfortable