Transmigrated as the Villainous Senior Disciple in a Plot-Twist Novel

The protagonist's personality is very good and optimistic, with a bit of a bad streak (), and his inner activities are also very cheerful and a bit funny. But I feel for the protagonist and his companions. Especially for Lan Lin, Makura obviously helped her, but she even pushed Makura out of Baiju Arena in order to take revenge. At first, I thought many of Makura's lives were golden fingers, but now I just feel that Makura has endless suffering. Makura always protects others because he has more lives. Xiaobai was angry because Makura risked his life to save him. Makura couldn't comfort Xiaobai after Makura died. Later, Gou'er was sad because Makura went out for a long time and didn't come back. Makura immediately comforted me, but I felt uncomfortable. Makura also needed Gou'er because he was alone when he escaped. They had already sensed the world's ill will toward them, so when Makura arrived at the club, he would jokingly think that at least they felt kindness. Finally, I want to make a digression. It's so embarrassing. The protagonist is simply a walking trap for poor children, hahaha.

It's pretty cool, come on. I originally read the introduction and thought it was about raising a cub without cp, but I didn't expect it to be an upgrading fairy tale, which is also very interesting. The world view feels relatively big, but because it's still in the early stages and the protagonist is still young anyway, he doesn't reveal much, especially the side of cultivating immortals. The seven major demon clans and the four major universities should be very lively in the later period. The writing style has the feeling of a steady flow, which is better than some of the fan fiction I've read. Since you started writing when you were a child, if you want to finish writing, you should have more words? The group portraits are also quite good. I don't know when the decent protagonist was born. I hope the author can stick to it. The author of the book I was reading lost motivation and cut the outline. However, there are also many people who generate electricity for love. For example, there is a book on my bookshelf that writes about my own short story. It has written more than one million words in more than two months. Although the traffic is not very good, it has been persevering. I admire it very much. I hope there will be more scenes between Xiao Xi and the protagonist, but judging from the current pace, it should take a little longer. After all, we have to wait for Ogura to become stronger. But if Ogura traveled through time, as a modern person, he would be a little entangled in killing people, right? Ogura doesn't know whether it's because of the threat of explosion or his own personality, but he doesn't seem to value other people's lives that much? The mission issued by the system seems to be to force Ogura to become a villain, so Ogura's mentality will definitely change, and now it is starting to show signs, I am looking forward to this. The accumulation of fate is a bit like the reversal of death. This creates a kind of indifference to his own life in Ogura, and this kind of mentality that the worst he can do is die. But he has a surplus of numbers, retains the sense of pain, and retains a sense of urgency. I think this setting is very good. In short, it can be regarded as a nurturing article. The author is also very obedient and active. I look forward to the follow-up development [Sending heartfelt wishes]

Come on, look forward to the follow-up plot! I hope that Xiaobai and the others will meet Makura. The brothers and sisters must be good and not have any rifts in their friendship. Sorry, I will read the book first. There are too few. I have read 44 chapters so far. I will give you a 5-star review first. I am afraid that I will die. Can I finish it when I see it? I will write a follow-up review after it is finished. (The following is a personal statement. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. It's just pure friendship without cp. It's cool! Only cp of pure friendship is the best thing to talk about. When will Gouer and Xiaobai meet? I think it will be very interesting to meet!)

It's good to watch. Fortunately, I listened to the advice and didn't give up immediately after reading the first chapter, which was not ideal. After reading the second chapter... I calmed down, no, why did I see the yellow shit button? Give me more quickly!! In short, I like it very much. The characters are well created, conflicts are also reflected, and the protagonist's heart is also deeply explored. I like it.

It's beautiful. Why is the rating so low? To be honest, I was attracted by the introduction and setting at first, and then the more I watched, the more I liked it. There are some minor problems with the expression in the first few chapters, but it can be seen that the author has worked very hard to control it. Later on, it becomes more and more smooth and has its own writing style. It is delicate, gentle, and natural. Every time I read it, I feel healed. The world view is huge, many small details are very attentive, and the characters are very three-dimensional. I like it very much. Ogura is very gentle, and so is the author. They are both at the level of Bai Yueguang, okay... Missing this book will be a big loss in life. Goddess, I will always follow you 😘 😘 😘 😘 😘

The author's writing is very beautiful. Please hurry up and read it, okay? The author's writing is very beautiful. Please hurry up and read it, okay? What the boss wrote really appealed to my taste. Who knew that I couldn't find a good book after looking through it for a long time, but after my unremitting efforts, I finally found this one! The emotional lines in the first dozens of chapters are very warm (although there are some knives mixed in). Ogura is the image of a gentle big brother, and he is kind to his younger brothers and sisters. Can feel everyone's mood changes, and then go over to comfort them. He also gave Hui Yuanzhou to them like jelly beans. Even if he was deceived because of this, Ogura would not blame him. This is simply wife level. The daily routine with Xiao Gou is to run from one place to another to take care of the children. Ogura, Ogura, we like you Some are like upgrading the flow of killing monsters. Ogura and the others have grown up a lot over time, and are no longer the young teenagers they were back then. Although it is a bit regretful that they are no longer the same as before, I am happy for their growth. There is a strange sense of harmony between Xiao Xi and Xiao Gou. On the surface, we pretend that we are all a family, but in fact, we are almost stabbing each other to death (some exaggeration), but this way of getting along is also very good. Ogura's two younger brothers are testing each other and poking each other's guts. How come they don't have a tacit understanding? Who knows that when Xiaobai and Xiaocang met after a long time, Xiaobai was afraid that they would never be able to go back to their past, that the boss would no longer recognize him as his younger brother, and that there were so many problems in his heart that he could not describe. But his worries were unnecessary after all. Why weren't Makura and him going in both directions? (Who knew that my eyes felt like peeing when I saw this scene) Next are some of my questions (actually, they are just what I think, it's okay not to read them) Some people are curious whether there will be some emotional connection between the protagonist of the original book and Ogura? After all, I still like this. If there is a side story, can the author write Ogura's emotional line (it's okay if not) No way, boss, how could you write such a beautiful book? I love you so much. Boss, will you marry me? 💕 The last sentence is: I wish the boss's book will be a big hit, and I hope all the wishes in the boss's heart will come true [top post]

In fact, except for the timeline and plot line, which are a bit messy, everything else is perfect. Oh, I feel that the protagonist is quite cheerful, has experienced so much, and is still so sunny. It feels a bit aggrieved to me. Uh-huh, just watching people get stuck and sadistic. After watching it, I feel that my language organization skills are not very good. Let's talk about the character first. The protagonist's personality is really like an angel. I feel like he likes to pick up children and help others. The protagonist's biological brother is Xiao Xi, and he has a bit of a yandere attribute. To be honest, it would be a bit uncomfortable to be brought into his perspective. The biological brother who has been looking forward to the stars and the moon for so long has another brother, and has been separated for so long. I don't know if I am still as important in the brother's heart, and I feel very insecure. Uh-huh, I feel a bit contradictory, but this attribute is really fragrant. You little pervert, it only takes 0 seconds to accept it. Then there is the one named Qin. I feel that he is very three-dimensional. This person is quite multi-faceted 👍 👍 At least it is impressive. Xiaobai, Xiaodai, and Xiaole occupy more than half of the story about childhood. Well, how should I put it, I feel a little pity for them. The protagonist is quite warm with them, but it's a pity that he took a knife when he left [I almost cried] But now we don't even see the shadow of the original protagonist. The main plot feels a bit slow to start, and it's not good to explain everything. A very promising book 👍👍👍👍👍

Makikura is so cute, light-hearted and funny, it blows my mind. This cp is such a good-looking novel. I must recommend it. The author's writing style is also getting better and better. I just hope that the author will not stop updating, please.

I am not good at expressing myself, but I can see that the author wrote this novel very carefully. The plot is probably quite good, and the descriptions of the characters are quite delicate. I like every character in the novel (except for the hateful people). In short, I strongly support the author and hope that this novel will get better and better♡♥(.´▽`.)♥♡

The author's writing style has really improved visibly. At the beginning, the description was a bit confusing. Later, you can slowly see his writing style. There is really a delicate emotional integration into every word and sentence. Come on, come on