The Male Protagonist That Everyone Hates and Criticizes so Much? Bring It You

After reading the first story, my review of this story: The writing is very good, the description is very delicate, and the emotional transition is very natural. The only bad point is that the setting of love at first sight does not mean falling in love at first sight. It is more about attacking and conquering the recipient on the basis of some emotions, and the attitude of the recipient at first sight is not pure, more like a plaything. In fact, I quite like Gong's character, he is sensible but kind to his lover. The relationship between the two is a bit sadistic. Maybe I mistakenly thought Shou was love at first sight, with pure feelings, paranoia, and strength. However, the settings of the love brain are different from expectations, so the reading is not very good. When I read the second story, I felt that I was being abused. Gong seemed to be abused. In the first story, I was disrespected by his words, and in the second story, I was directly hurt by his physical actions. Fortunately, Gong has a relatively cold personality and will selectively ignore these things. (The above are all personal thoughts) ………… I have seen the content of the new update. In fact, overall, the two of them are more like falling in love with each other, but Gong's status in the world background is lower than Shou's, while Shou has a high position, suspicion, and is affected by the memory of the world's background, so he is the kind of person who does not dare to have a heart-to-heart easily. Therefore, even if Shou falls in love with Gong at first sight, he will suppress the relationship very rationally in the early stage. Furthermore, the story label is about robbery by force, so in the early stage, Shou is more about seeking people with power, rather than trading sincerity for attack.

Is the treasure hunt a heartthrob? Can't tell Although it was a treasure-hunting guide, I didn't have the slightest bit of defense because of the label of treasure-hunting being a heartthrob. Shou is a very, very naughty type, with no mouth. You can't see the physique of Gongbao's heartthrob at all. It's just that he became a special person through his suspected relationship with his past life. This article gives the impression of favoring each other. Because Gong Bao knew little about emotions, he became more and more favored by the people around him... I can't describe how I feel at this moment. When I read the introduction, I would think that the cool part is that Gong Bao doesn't understand feelings, Shou falls in love with Gong Bao during contact (the process is very fast), Shou clearly knows that Gong doesn't love him (or doesn't understand feelings) and he sinks soberly, or after falling in love, he realizes that Gong doesn't love him (or doesn't understand feelings), and Gong worries about gains and losses. The result is not at all...

It's a story that combines sweetness and abuse. In the early stage, Yunxi felt like he was very bland, and then Mr. Lu seemed very enthusiastic, but he didn't particularly like him, but expressed his love very strongly. Yunxi had two psychological thoughts in Chapter 23, but later on, he felt that Yunxi just didn't love him very much. In addition, Mr. Lu had his own ideas and was very sadistic, and then That is to say, if you can't stand the abuse or feel that Yunxi's psychological thoughts are very dull, you can stop watching it, because you feel that you can't stand it in the early stages. In fact, I understand that, but if you don't watch the early stage, skipping it will feel meaningless. I think as long as Yunxi is the one who understands the seven emotions and six desires, it should be enough. After living three or four small worlds, things will definitely be sweet later. But it was still rough in the early stage. Plus, I like to read novels and add them to my bookshelf like crazy. Then this book is updated, so I feel like I won't be able to find this book if I don't read the first Small World and skip it. I think we can add a chapter before the first small world to show that the first world is a bit sadistic, but it will be very sweet in the later stage. Then some people may collect it and let them remember it more deeply. Otherwise, if some people think it is a bit sadistic in the early stage, they may not read it. I think in the early stage, Mr. Lu was crazy because of his illness, so his methods or psychological thoughts may make me think that this is a strong and crazy love. Then Yunxi is calm and does not panic when things happen. This kind of character does not care much about things. This is the relationship between Yunxi and other people written in the article. In addition to Tangtang, in fact, this chapter also wrote about Yunxi at that time. Chapter 23 also feels very good to me, so this is still very good. If you like torture, you can watch it. If it is a combination of sweet torture and maybe sour, you can watch it. It is still very good, so I give it five stars. It is really good-looking. For someone like me who can't stand a little torture, I can continue to watch it, but I feel distressed and have been crying for a long time (ಥಥ)

It's good to watch, and the plot is enjoyable. Yunxi is a beautiful little kitten, and Mr. Lu really loves her. Halfway through, I discovered that saving the villain was also written by the author. I feel like the author's writing style has become better [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Why was it removed? This book is very good-looking. There is one part that I particularly like so far, and it is also a particularly sad part. It's a newly released chapter by the author. The chapter where Meng Tinghan wants to cut off his own glands, and then Yunxi slaps him in the face. Oh my god, I love it so much, it hurts so much. In this chapter, when Yunxi heard that Meng Tinghan was about to cut off his own glands, he rushed over as fast as he could. As Xi confessed to Meng Tinghan, I felt Yunxi's love for Meng Tinghan, and I also felt Yunxi's anger and sadness that Meng Tinghan wanted to cut off his glands. The author's writing style really makes people feel the same. I like it so much, I really want to say 10,000, I like it very much.

After watching it so far, I feel like many things in this unit don't stand up. The first unit is actually my personal favorite, but when I watched it for the second time, I felt that Cong Lu and Yun were very stagnant because of the separation of the stand-ins. This unit feels even more like this. First of all, there is very little dialogue in the first unit, including the use of a lot of words to describe Yun's appearance in the early stage, and the same goes for describing Jiang's emotions. I have always believed that books are like icebergs. Readers have the ability to understand what the work itself wants to express and add their own understanding during the reading process. However, if you describe the same thing too much, it will make me feel that you are a bit like showing us the full picture of the iceberg. This is obviously unrealistic. Moreover, readers already know that He and An have the same soul, not to mention that from what we know so far, they are the main gods who fell in love at first sight. He cannot hurt Yun. Even if An is imprisoned, I feel that it is also a play of a young couple, and they have clearly seen each other now. , The other one I don't know how much I love, but the result has not yet been revealed, those misunderstandings, etc., If nothing else, from our own point of view, just the fact that my partner unconsciously calls someone else's name can make me settle old scores with my partner for a lifetime. What is the difference between this and telling the truth after drinking [staring]. And An is very insecure now. If you can't feel love, it really can't be considered love. It's like a man saying he loves you more, but he doesn't let you take care of your money. Isn't this nonsense? Also, although you update three chapters every day, the pace of the writing is very sluggish, including the little dialogue mentioned before, and there are very few effective plots that can be seen in one chapter. For example, the three chapters this morning are just about ascending the throne. Maybe you will explain these in the future to clear up the misunderstanding, but judging from the number of chapters in the upper plane, I shouldn't write too many. Of course, these are my own opinions and suggestions. They only represent my personal opinions and can be exchanged. If you don't like it, don't criticize it [eating melon] I'd better give it five stars. I usually don't look at the score when reading articles. ——2025.0807 I saw that the third dimension of DaDa is about to write about a doctor with dual personality. I am studying psychology. Dual personality is two people, just like two people living in a dormitory. So this is also a lightning point for me. It feels a bit spiritual (). Of course, I am just a suggestion. Personal preferences are different. Since I have been following it for so long, I might as well write a review. DaDa, I really read the article seriously [crying][crying][crying][crying] ——2025.0807 Two minutes passed between the two comments [stare] [stare] [stare] [punch] I convinced myself [stare] [stare] [stare]

It's really good. Love comes step by step. Even if we fall in love, it's not the reason for me to hurt you. I see my wife trying to suppress herself every time she goes crazy. It's really touching. Young lovers should be together sweetly! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Blowing kiss] What a bastard! [Crying][Crying] Do you know how difficult it is to find a book you like! [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying] Don't take it off the shelves!

Finally there is a great author! ! ! I like this type of writing [crying] [crying] [crying] I like it so much [love] wuwuwuwu [crying] This is my XP! ! ! ! I will always follow the author greatly [Adore][Adore][Admiration] Don't run out of food easily [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Just finished watching the first Small World! Really good-looking! The author is so good at writing! ! I almost dropped my little pearls (´ε｀ )! ! Super pretty! ! Big, awesome! ! (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤The two babies are doing well too! ! Congratulations to the young couple!

How can I put it? The first world touched me so deeply that I couldn't imagine Yunxi kissing or accompanying other people. Maybe it was because the early stage of the second world was that Yunxi didn't know that the protagonists in the two worlds were the same person, which made me develop a bit of emotional mysophobia, especially when Yunxi didn't wear the ring later. I really wanted to cry, but now I'm trying to accept it. I hope that the following story will be sweet, but why do I feel that I will always remember Mianmian [I'm about to cry] And the most important thing is that I felt that the second world was rushed. Yunxi fell in love immediately after knowing that he and Mianmian were the same person. I really hope that world is B, but I have no idea [crazy]

It's really beautiful. The more you watch it, the more addictive it becomes! Hope it will be updated soon! I like it so much. The first one I watched from the outside made me really happy [blowing kiss], and the second one from the outside made me feel a little bit sour [grievance]. Overall, it was really great, and the characters were delicate and silky without any surprises. It gave me a really good viewing experience! I hope you can work hard and hurry up. I really really want to watch it [Sending Hearts] (Of course it would be better if you reply to me greatly) [Animated Expression] Hehehehehehe~~ Damn, why has this book been removed from the shelves? I love this book so much, and I'm still waiting for an update. Why has it been removed from the shelves? ? [Cry]

It's beautiful. The teacher's writing style is delicate. It also has a fresh feeling without any dragging feeling. It's very neat. Yunxi lives up to its name. It floats with the wind like floating clouds and is as clear as a stream. [Blow kiss] [Shy] Come on, teacher! ! !

It's really beautiful, and the emotional processing is very delicate, and then there's this big one. The writing logic is very clear and the setting is very attractive. Anyway, I think it is very good. It broke my understanding of some previous articles. Although this quick time travel is also a collection of soul fragments in the traditional sense, he did not mean that after Gong and Gong fell in love in the first world, they immediately fell in love with each other when they met him in the second world. They are in two worlds. After all, although the fragments belong to the same person, they are two independent and sober individuals after all. Great, great article.

After reading the first two worlds, I can really feel their emotions. I read in the comments section that they always talk bad words to each other, and the second world is even more violent. I want to say that the emotions in this article are really delicate. It is not like other fast-travel stories where two people meet and fall in love at first sight and then everything is different. It is very ups and downs, and it looks very comfortable and smooth. , Shou is crazy and doesn't understand love, Gong's core is very stable and strong, when he doesn't love, he is pretending every step of the way when readers feel wronged by him, Gong is like training a dog, training Crazy into a clingy crying bag, their relationship is step by step, slowly, I hope that the babies who read my book review will also slowly, give them a chance to see them fall in love.

It's well written, why has it been removed from the shelves? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]. Are there more updates? Teacher, [I'm about to cry] Don't leave me alone [I'm about to cry]

This article is really good to read. I really like the first world. It is so sour and sour. The author's writing style is really delicate. He really empathizes with the characters. The emotional lines are also well written. The characters have very distinct personalities. I really like it. The author is great. Please do more.

I feel that the first world is better written, with a little bit of sweetness, but the second world doesn't feel too touching.

I hope I can be more charming and not abuse the main character [crying] By the way, why don't you have the update button?

Don't take it off the shelves, it's super pretty.

Mo Mo Mo Mo Mo is super beautiful. Do you like the first world and the third world? Mo Mo Mo Mo Mo Lu Hemian's world is super beautiful. [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss], recommended

What else can I say? Don't hesitate, just go for it! ! ! ! ! My favorite! ! ! ! Author wife, I want to express my love to you [love] [love] [love] [love] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration]

The first Small World is really beautiful. Please be patient and read the first Small World. How could someone write so well? I can't help it. The back part is really beautiful, but the beginning is a little cumbersome.

The conclusion is that it looks good and I love watching it, and it is acceptable. Guess you're addicted: After reading other comments, I honestly feel that they are right. The timeline is indeed a bit confusing, and the emotional line is inexplicable. Some places are a bit nonsensical, but it is essentially a sweet story. I didn't go into it when I read it. I was very happy to read it. I can't help it. I really like this book.

It looks pretty good now, with minor minor flaws that are innocuous but not many. However, I feel that the author's grasp of Gong's character design is still lacking, but the creation of the second small world is still quite good. But I really like this. Can the author update 100 chapters tomorrow [laughs]

The writing is very touching [laughing][laughing] However, I can't stand the main character, Control, and I don't like some of Shou's behaviors (sorry, my problem), but Yunxi's cuteness [sends my heart] I'll leave now. See you again when I'm destined to [send my heart] [send my heart] [blow a kiss]

What is going on? Why was it taken off the shelves? ! Please don't take it off the shelves, I love this book so much...😱😱😱😱😱😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😱😱😱😱🥺🥺🥺🥺

Very nice ~ Yunxi is like a guiding lover, very tolerant of his lover, knows his little thoughts, and will try his best to give him a sense of security. In the second world, Xiaoyun is very cold to him before he knows they are a person. I think it is very good.

It's very interesting. When the second world was so cruel that I couldn't stand it any longer, the author even gave me a chapter to restore my health [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]. But overall, it's really interesting. I don't know how to describe it, but I think it is much better than the sudden love in many other novels. Yunxi has a good guide to his lover.

The first world is quite good, and the logic makes sense, but the description of the changing places is ignored, so I sometimes feel confused when listening to the book. The second world has many shortcomings in details, and some of the logic is different. If you don't use your brain to see it, it is still passable. I still like the first world [Sending Hearts]

Overall, I think this book is pretty good. The plot is not cliché, but the scenes with Lin Cha in the back are a bit abrupt. I personally prefer this kind of bloody novel, it really grabbed me. And I'm also very curious about the setting. It's the first time I've seen an author who made a mistake in the introduction. When I saw the plot was reversed near the end of the second world, it wasn't about collecting broken soul fragments at all, but the same soul was reincarnated together all the time. In my opinion, the writing style is not as easy as a novice's writing. Anyway, there is still room for improvement. The timeline may be a little messy, but I don't think it's a big deal. After all, I pay more attention to the plot and selectively ignore his time. As for the plot, the first world is not on my XP, but I really like the second world [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]. I like the setting better. It also has a sense of pull and game. In the end, I love you willingly to the point of being promoted to a high position. Jiang Shi'an, the dank man ghost, you really won. You succeeded in letting your kid hug a beauty. Finally, I would like to ask if the author can write about a dude and a general in the small world behind the scenes. The part about Yunxi rescuing the soldiers of Jiang State really impressed me [licking screen][licking screen][licking screen][licking screen][licking screen][licking screen]