Zero Zone: Picked up a Good Cat

Author! Author! Maomao will be like the cat that broke the iron (Saifeier) because of something and ran away from home in anger towards Ling and Zhe. In the end, he was stabbed in the process of helping Ling and Zhe delay time. Before he died, he said, "Even if... I... Am just a ■■" "I... Can be considered as helping you. We must be busy..." "I... There are many things I haven't told you..." "Ling... Zhe... Where are you... Pay attention to me... I'm so cold... I didn't run away from home on purpose..." Or something like that [laughs] [laughs] [laughs] Is that possible [laughs] [laughs] [laughs]

Overall, the writing is quite good. It can be regarded as one of the best among JuZuZero fandoms. The character designs are all online and there is no OOC. However, there are still a few minor problems. 1. In the first chapter, Suzu's attitude toward the protagonist he picked up was not well described. New Elido Chinese and Greek people enjoy human rights and are only different from humans in appearance. However, Suzu's attitude towards a Nekoki who is basically the same age at the beginning of the chapter is more like adopting a stray cat or dog than a suspicious person who suddenly appears in his car wearing tattered clothes. 2. The timeline is a bit messy. Billy and Wright's first meeting should have been when Phaethon went to the outer ring. Yuma Asa's timeline also feels weird. However, because the game does not originally have a clear timeline for each agent, this is a small problem and it doesn't matter. 3. Trigger's commission should be a commission that the brothers and sisters received soon after they became ropemakers. Then during the process of Trigger's commission, they untied their knots and rejoined the Defense Force. However, there is currently no Trigger commission in the plot, and Trigger has already joined the Defense Force again. There are a few minor issues, but I see that they won't have much impact now. As long as we keep updating the scores above 9.0, We should be fine.

It's very good, but I don't know if there is a female protagonist.

Not bad, not bad, he has potential, he will be like an emperor in the future, he is truly a genius of our generation.

It's not too much to give yourself a good review. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Chapter 42 confirms that the single heroine is Ling. I can only say that Sister Ling is awesome.

Well, just from the first chapter it's already pretty good. The rest of it is because I, the author, keep updating it. Is it possible to charge 8.0 Or 9.0?

Author, don't leave~

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good

The author writes well and is very creative. I like it very much.

Delicious, delicious, delicious, delicious, delicious | | |

I beg you, I beg you, update it faster, you are addicted, ah! ! ! !

Look, look, look, look, look

Peerless cat, love to watch

Good luck to the author!

The name is very interesting

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Not bad, not bad, so beautiful.

It's good, but why doesn't anyone see it?

Very good, the author is very good, very good

Not bad, the single female protagonist has good reviews

I gave the author 8.6 Points because there is 1.4 [Crying]

There are no bad points for the time being, just whether Ling and the protagonist will develop too fast [thinking] and the author, come on, don't give up.

Not bad, quite interesting

It looks so good, the innocent cat and the cereal brother and sister have to say a few things [laughter]

Very very well

Yes, brother, yes, it's good-looking, it's included^ω^ This book is also very delicious⊙▽⊙

Well, how should I put it? It's okay for this book to reach 9.0. As a storyteller, I highly approve of your work.

It's good to watch. It's a new kind of plot. [Hold]