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The writing is okay, the pace is a little fast, but the emotional processing can make up for it. It's so sweet that it's so sweet. I suggest it be a single female protagonist. Otherwise, if it is so heavy on writing, it will feel fragmented if there are multiple female protagonists in the future (I personally like to read multiple female protagonists, but this is so sweet that I want to read it alone)

The writing is fluent, the content is good, and it's quite sweet. I just don't know if it has a single female protagonist. I don't know if it will be abrupt if it is integrated into a love apartment later. If this book is reorganized and the initial relationship between the two is more stable, this book will have very good results and get very generous rewards when it is published next door.

It's very interesting, but is it a multi-female protagonist or a single heroine? At present, it seems to be a single heroine, but since there is a love apartment, it can't really be a single heroine, right? Chapter 65, where are the heroines?

Well written, the writing style is okay

The protagonist is a pure love Xiao Chunan. The author will not try to sell it to others. There are many female protagonists in the target, and now the writing is so pure love.

Come on, come on, come on, it's the first time I see someone I like so much.

Many or one? Is the only heroine Lin Miaomiao?

Come on, come on, come on, it's a fan novel about Pi, it's very good

Very sweet, very youthful, making people feel relaxed and comfortable

The requirements are not too much and not too unfinished. It can be completed with 300,000 or 400,000 words. Never run out of inspiration. If you do, create a group and let readers help you think of inspiration. There is strength in numbers.

The writing is really good and the pace is fast. Come on.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Okay, okay, okay

Not enough! Come on come on

Come on, come on, high-quality fan fiction from Pi

Very good looking and highly recommended

The interaction between the male and female protagonists is still okay.