I Can Turn into a Monster Girl Who Kills Me!

Let's change the poisonous point involving cat girls at the beginning. Most of the stories that can still be read now are purely because the setting is interesting, but after all, it is a landmine, and it may explode one day. The following types of book revision suggestions are given: 1. Strengthen the protagonist's previous psychological description, detail the protagonist's uneasiness about his current situation, desire for power, hesitation about behavior, and finally take action in the midst of entanglement. (Requires writing skills) 2. When I was struggling in step 1, I was accidentally discovered and killed by the cat lady. (Save trouble) 2. You can write that the protagonist chooses to give up after hesitating and making moral decisions, and is eventually chased by other monsters in front of the cat lady, and is killed by the cat lady together. (Reasonable) 3. Don't ignore this poisonous point, most people still don't like evil protagonists, let alone hypocritical protagonists.

It's good-looking. I've always thought of this idea in my dreams before being killed and turning into the other person. This work just happened to be available. I hope to update it more in the future [Blow Kiss]

This book is good, I have read the latest chapter. It is recommended that when there are more perfect incarnations in the future, you can call the monster girl by the name of the body, so that it is not easy to confuse.

Overall, the rhythm is quite comfortable, and it's varied. The monster girl part gave me XP, and the rewind and Alice posts left no regrets. The perfect ending is just what I want. If you can accept the system settings, the subject of body snatching, and read without rigor and detail, it will be a very interesting and enjoyable article. I look forward to the follow-up account of the whereabouts of those souls who have been taken away.

Seizing one's body is a poisonous point that cannot be avoided. After reading the book, I found that the story is actually quite good, but shouldn't we deal with the issue of seizing one's body in more detail? At present, only the cat girl's possession is uncomfortable, and according to the introduction, it can be guessed that the subsequent black dragon princess may also be taken over by the protagonist? But the protagonist is the princess kidnapped by the black dragon. If the black dragon is kidnapped again, wouldn't the black dragon and the princess become the protagonists themselves? Then wouldn't the story line of the black dragon and the princess be gone?

It's quite good-looking, the setting is very interesting, and the author is updating it steadily, but why do I feel like fewer and fewer people are watching it.

Quick update, endure the humiliation for a month, and be reborn, it's so cool, my mind can't move, but it's so cool, it's done, add some embellishments, it's perfect!

Phew, I finished reading it in one go. The plot design and character creation are very good, but there are still traces of forcing the plot in some places, especially in the early stage. After each character slowly becomes complete as the plot progresses, these problems gradually reduce. The overall flaws are not concealed, and it is a very easy book to read.

It's really beautiful and very to my liking. But recently, the chapter broke in a very magical place, which makes me feel like there are thousands of ants crawling in my heart, so I told the author to hurry up and update Chapter 100 and fast forward to recycle the foreshadowing, otherwise I can't forgive him. ✅Ah, the legendary writer✅ ✅The gospel official of words❤️ ✅How long will it take for you to update a new chapter❤️ 🌟Relive history! 🌟 🌟Across the ocean of text and data traffic❤️ ✅Bring the hottest updates right in front of me❤️ 🌟The process of reading your text❤️ 🌟It always reminds me of the happy time of studying as a teenager❤️ 📝If there is a one in ten thousand chance that you can update ten chapters a day👍️ 📝My victory will be certain👍️ 📝In the name of readers, I will invite you to step into the prison of explosive updates👍️ epilepsy

Well, so far, the writing is pretty good (laughs). The subject matter seems to be very rare in Tomato, and it is very different from other possessed articles. I hope the author will work hard and don't write too much later. By the way, I quite like your writing about vampire sisters. It's very interesting (it reminds me of the evil group in the East, who are also vampires) Well, come on.

When will the author be able to write a masterpiece like "The Darkened Beautiful Girl Is Myself" on Tomato [crying]

Yes, there is no obvious poisonous point, but the amount is too small. I want to keep it, but I am afraid of feeding it to death.

You know, when you see them, they are all dead. Lies cloud the conscience. I want to continue to perpetuate my will, but then, is it still me? Who am I? Who are we, tributes copied from the template of a deceased person? Although the author did not write about swords, I feel that this setting is very suitable. Come on, come on, come on.

It's pretty cool to leave morality behind. Although I personally don't like the actions of the protagonist very much, it may be due to personal reasons, so I still give it five stars. I think the protagonist's behavior is changing to murder.

A few days ago, when I was browsing old book reviews, I came across an author I liked very much. In fact, I had read this book for a month or two before, but I didn't notice it. Maybe it was because the style and subject matter had changed a bit. What do you say about this book? Overall, I can't say it's bad, but it may be a bit "ordinary". And I feel that one of the biggest problems is that it is a work that is obviously centered on the emotional line, but the emotional line is a bit awkward. In fact, when I first started reading this book, I thought it was another literary work similar to cat meal replacement, but many parts of this book are relatively bland, and I feel that the author is a bit unable to let it go. By the way, let me make a small digression. Maybe you can try to renovate that book? After all, that kind of thing seems to be popular in the past two years? It feels like it should be quite interesting...

Yes, the early stage processing is okay, there is a climax, but there is a very big problem, there is a sense of fragmentation before and after, the transitional plot is watery, and there is a gravity system. It is recommended to raise the book or the author to read more, and hope that we can feast our eyes on it in the future [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon]

The writing is really good, it's gold, but the author's xp is either a loli or a girl, and I don't see a royal sister in the show. This will discourage some people whose xp is a royal sister. I suggest that there be more royal sisters in the future [love]

It's so beautiful, it feels like a fast-traveling fantasy novel. Although it is said to be a body-taking, every time the body-taking is taken, the wishes of the original owner will be fulfilled. It is not like a body-taking, but like a fast-traveling to the female partner to fulfill their wishes, and finally become a god who makes girls stick to each other [blowing kiss]

It's not toxic, it's fast-paced, it's a good book, but updates are too slow.

Ah, the writing style is a bit familiar, look at the author's name, ah, Frog, who is it, Fantasy Sauce? ?

Oh my God, it's Fantasy Sauce 🥰Support support

The coherence of the plot needs to be strengthened. It will not go off topic by focusing on one main line, but it is a small regret that it failed to connect the branch lines well. Of course, the characters are well portrayed, only Avril is a little lacking, but since we have tried our best, no one is perfect, and five stars are enough.

Love watching! The author updates two chapters a day, which is too little for me! ! ! [Adoration]

Very beautiful, the plot is new to Yingying, Lily, highly recommended

It's nice to read. Although it's a story about seizing one's body, it's well written. Please don't get offended because of seizing one's body [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Very novel subject matter, plus there are stickers, the more you look at it, the better it looks.

It's a very good book. I have almost no negative points after reading it, and the quality is quite high! The subject matter is very new, support the author! Don't give me a eunuch anymore Not enough, not enough at all! [Cry]

It's pretty good, she's a rare multi-female protagonist in this book The protagonist's brain circuit is indeed a bit abstract

It's a light-hearted Western fantasy novel, with daily posts and a compact storyline. It's worth a try. Most thunder and lightning people cannot accept the loss of body and soul. This may vary from person to person.

It's so good, but no one has read it until about ten chapters.