Pokémon: Please Choose Your Main Quest

This is my first time writing a story based on an alliance game. Yuna's character is full of personality, and the plot development and emotional line are very consistent. I read it in one breath [Shy]. What I love so much is the interaction between the boys, not the love of lovers, but the bond between companions, opponents, and friends. The author loves every character he writes with great care😍Cheers for Dada [Blow a kiss] Although I really want to watch Shura Field, which is a secret, it's a pity that my child is still young and I don't have a CP, but it doesn't matter, the author, I can make up my own mind and don't take it to heart [sneaky laugh]

I think the writing is very good, but why does the protagonist only have two elves now? [Face-covering][Face-covering][Face-covering] Isn't he the protagonist? Even if you take the road of being less but better, you can't just have one now [laugh][laugh][laugh] The stupid fish still doesn't listen to the protagonist [laugh]

The author writes beautifully. I was surprised when I saw the episode about Benbenyu. It was the first time I saw a Pokémon in Tomato (other than the original) that did not obey orders. When I saw Benbenyu start to trust Yuna, I felt like a daughter would make friends when she grows up (?). It looks good, I love watching it, please update more [please update more]

The writing is very good. The plot and dialogue are not awkward. There will be some technical errors, but they are all minor problems. And there is a feeling that the journey is not detailed. Is this normal for the first time writing? It's rare. After all, there are very few Pokémon fan works with girls as the protagonists. Besides, except for a few excellent works, other works are either awkward in writing, awkward in plot, or awkward in dialogue. The author's is already pretty good. If you continue to write, you will definitely get a score of 8.5 To 9. In fact, if you write a long book and your writing improves later, you can get a score of 9 or above. I don't guarantee it, because many authors just write a little bit and then run away. It is too difficult to make ends meet.

The fighting scenes are exciting, the growth line is also great, and the plot is also very attractive. It's great! ! ! (By the way, will Yuna have Zeraora? The big cat is super handsome [full] [full])

This novel is relatively slow to pick up, and it is different from the normal "leveling up monsters and monsters". This book is really good in terms of narrative. There are normal battles and wild fights. This book is inspired by the excellent Pokemon fan comic "The Festival of the King". For book friends who love Pokemon, this book is worth reading, but this book is really slow to pick up, so you need to be patient to read it [Sending Hearts]

I found another great Pokémon fanfic!

It's quite good to watch. The protagonist is witty and unpretentious, and slowly grows up. The battle plot is also very exciting. But I still want to complain: in chapter 28, the protagonist only has one initial elf. He also fought two gyms with only one elf. Fortunately, he won. The pace is relatively slow. Can you tell me how many chapters it will take for the protagonist to regain the new elf!

It can only be said that it is not recommended to evenly distribute the Pokemon subduing plots in the Pokémon novel. It will be much better to add some links in the early stage and think about the later impressions after reaching two or three.

[Requesting more updates] I like this kind of travel article, and it turns out that the author is a true fan of the King's Celebration. He really writes about that feeling [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

It's very well written, I hope I can keep writing.

It's beautiful, beautiful, and beautiful. My favorite among the supporting characters is Kaori. I don't know if she will appear in the follow-up. Good luck to the author. I love you😘 Come back, teacher. This is my favorite Pokémon book.

It's super, super good-looking, and the main character has a very full personality! Like it so much

It's fun to watch, and it's just fun to fight! She's a growth-oriented heroine. She's awesome. When I watch others grow, I feel like I've grown too.

🍅It's rare to find a heroine in Pokémon who doesn't have such a novice writing style. Fans like it, and it has an anime-like feel to it.

Nice! The battle scenes are well written and very passionate. I feel like I'm watching a TV show [Love][Love][Love]

I've watched half of it, and overall it's pretty good on Tomato, but there are some flaws. I watched it because of the Pokémon heroine's non-CP and group portraits. I felt like there were too few girls in the front, the red and green original game characters. I was okay with it, but I felt like there were no other girls (I remember there was a girl named Wei Lan in the original game). The relationship between the girls is very beautiful.

Very cute, looking forward to seeing some companion elves in the future~

Many plots are just mentioned in one stroke without any real sense. I hope the author can continue to add more details [Like]

The characters are well-developed, the battle descriptions are reasonable, and it's a nice Pokémon article. Don't worry about whether something is interesting or not. It is defined by yourself and not by others.

It looks good, there are no big surprises, and the author took advantage of it. Also, I want to ask if I can do cp (very quietly)