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It's okay, I quite like it. At least the protagonist in it is much better than most Ultra fans in Tomato. Although some of the plots are a bit childish, this is a tokusatsu feature that you must try [Like]

Tomato is one of the few books with a true Ultra spirit that is highly recommended. The world cannot live without Ultraman. Isn't the reason we like Ultraman precisely because of his spirit as blazing as the sun? Just like those revolutionary ancestors, no matter when and where, I can't hate those people who are selfless and glorious! After reading it, I felt a lot of emotions and had a lot to say, but my writing skills were limited and I couldn't express it. It feels a bit regretful.

This is a real encounter with the spirit of Ultra. It is already very good so far. Compared with all the Ultra fan fiction I have read, this one is the best, one of a kind, and the current development trend is very good. According to the current situation, it is at least a masterpiece. As long as the momentum continues in the future, it can definitely be regarded as a landmark work in Ultra fan fiction. After all, I have never seen a novel that implements the spirit of Ultra before. I feel that the writing is very stable and philosophical, and the fighting scenes can also be imagined to be very good.

The growth-type protagonist has a very Ultra spirit, but I personally found it quite depressing. All kinds of conspiracies are coming towards the protagonist, but the protagonist is still growing and no one else is there to tell the truth. The only thing Xiao Meng has survived is still in a weak state. No, I have to find some cool articles to change my mood.

Although the plot is quite classic and childish, it still has an Ultra spirit. If you are not a human being that I like, you will be expelled directly.

This book has such an ultra-artistic spirit, and some good ones have been mined by Shili. Those who have read too much history can read this book, and be patient with this book. I won't say much more, it's really good to read.

This is an Ultraman who is a natural lover, an Ultraman with Ultra spirit. He is worthy of being set as Severn's son. I hope the author can continue to create articles like this in the future, come on＾0＾~

This Ultra novel can be written with a slow-burning feeling. The quality in the early stage is very high. Later on, I feel that it can become a good-looking Ultraman with a score of 9 or above. It is a very good new book. The protagonist is just like Severn and loves people. I feel that the author will make the protagonist as loving as Severn in the future. Come on, author. You can read it patiently

Pure chaff! Pure chaff! The protagonist who is as dazzling and pure as a diamond, the companion who treats each other sincerely and empathizes with each other! Beautiful family ties, friendship, and the inheritance of will! This is the Ultra fanfic I want to see! ! [Almost crying]

As expected of Severn's son, his ability to love is even better than Severn's. What a pure Ultra spirit.

The plot is smoothly connected, and there is nothing to fault. It is as comfortable as wearing new underwear in the New Year (if I insist on saying this book, it is as refreshing as drinking iced black tea soaked with snow lotus on a hot summer day)

The book is very well written, but I still hope to find a girlfriend, the female police officer, I really like her, the description is very good, although the writing is a bit childish, but it is this childishness that makes Ultra Warriors

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Let's talk about the conclusion first. This book is more focused on Ultraman in the tokusatsu drama. Therefore, the language and plot may be a little childish, so if you want to read dark and dark and cool Ultraman fan fiction, you can take a detour. Then there are some places that are unreasonable and toxic, such as the unnecessary transformation of the female prosecutor and the mother and daughter touching the abdominal muscles after the transformation. There may be an initial intention to turn these female characters into heroines, but instead of creating these ambiguous fragments, it is better to create several complex characters like Mephilas and Dark Faust. The most important point is that there must be no heroine in the end (until I posted this comment, it was mostly ambiguous without a heroine, and it was still the kind of ambiguity that was reduced a little bit). But other things are very consistent with my imagination of Ultraman, who is pure and kind, but will cut off when facing some bad guys, such as the dean. This part is probably because the voice of the protagonist being brainless when he was attacked by the Kurt team's plane was too high, so this plot was created to show that the protagonist's character is not a brainless virgin, including the problems of the earth's indigenous people and human beings in the same version of Ultraman Seven, but the dean's part is a bit fragmented and not as well handled as later, but it is innocuous. After looking at the ratings, those with low scores basically said that the protagonist was hit by an airplane and could not fight back. Personally, I feel that this is why he is Ultraman, and they also said that the protagonist is too simple, but this is the real Ultraman, an Ultraman like the Ultraman in the tokusatsu drama, an Ultraman who has an Ultra spirit that needs to grow, with protection as the core, instead of destroying monsters just to pretend to be cool and slap in the face with protection as the core.

I think this book is well-written. But I think the author is quite miserable. First, he has a cold and fever and needs to be updated. Second, I think the comparison is a point of "sympathy" for him. Didn't he spend 500 yuan to design the image of the protagonist. No, I asked a painter at Station B who designed Ultraman, and he wanted one or two hundred. And I think the quality of their work is very high. At least higher than that

The first thing that stood out to me was that the protagonist was better than his father, Seven. It can be seen that the author drew on many Ultraman works. But the disadvantage is that there is too little food. Always stuck in uncomfortable places

I feel comfortable reading this book. It is a very cute two Ultraman. It has the feeling of a TV. It is really good to read. Seeing Mirai's appearance almost makes me excited. The subsequent interactions are also very cute, especially during the battle. The description is so comfortable. Seeing the two of them fighting monsters together, our protagonist finally found a relative besides his mother. I laughed to death when I saw the age. Our Ultraman are such a cute race☺️☺️☺️

It's very beautiful. I can't even imagine what kind of fairy tale this would have been if it had been filmed in ancient times. It must be because of the lack of writing skills. Well, for example, the transformation of Faust was a bit hasty. It's really suitable for watching as a tokusatsu drama.

It feels like having a bucket of instant noodles at night with a pork sausage, a meat sausage, then a tea egg and fried egg, and finally a cup of iced black tea with a slight smoothness. Very good special photo essay

To be honest, this is definitely a good book. It's just that the new book has just been released and the ratings haven't gone up yet. As long as the author keeps writing according to the current state, it will definitely be a 9.0. It's a really good book in the original Ori

As of Chapter 55, I can only say that it's so good, kids. Ultra's spirit is purer than that of the Love King, and there's no problem with the plot logic. The author must keep writing it.

It looks good. It's much more interesting than the novice village in Tiga World at the beginning. I'm tired of watching Tiga World.

A very good novel with a lot of Ultra spirit, but I would like to see the Sai brothers join forces later on

It's very good-looking, but the main character could be darkened a bit. Moreover, I think the attack of the Mephilus star is based on the understanding of people's hearts. Combined with the protagonist's background story, it can be written like this, so that the Mephilus star tells the protagonist what Severn did to Zero. Moreover, Zero's master is the King of Ge, Leo, who has prestige in the Kingdom of the Lord, and Noah sent Zero equipment. And in the end, when the protagonist's mother was killed, Severn did not come to save him, and maybe Seventh has forgotten the protagonist's mother. Suffice to say, the protagonist will turn dark sooner or later.

To be honest, I think this rating is too low for the entire book. In my opinion, the plot coherence, character cooperation, and character description are all excellent. It also contains some jokes and is very interesting. So far, I think it is a very good work. Of course, I haven't read much yet, so I will reserve this review for now.

Brothers, after Natsuki Laoden's novel, another legendary Ultra Kitchen novel has been born [Adored] The son of the legendary lover Wang Saiwen. How can I put it, no need to say more, it is still a Showa classic, and the cunning Planet Q people must be punished. In short, he has the Ultra spirit, and he does not love human beings brainlessly. Well, he still loves people very much. What I mean is that he will expel some particularly evil people. You are not my compatriots [Admired]

The setting of this book is great. It's not like the traditional setting of Severn's son being Zero, but it's similar to a parallel universe that describes the growth story of Severn's son. This plot design can be used as an official story plot style. It's not like the traditional system of becoming Ultraman or reincarnating into Ultraman, where the whole story is a bit entertaining. Instead, it really starts from the story of how a teenager grows up. This is the only Ultrabook written in this style among the more than 200 Ultrabooks I've read. It's great. Come on, author!

I don't know what to say except that it's good-looking. The protagonist described by the author is very Ultra-spirited. He is everything I imagined being a light should be, and even better. This book is not as vulgar as other Ultra fans who describe Ultraman. In short, it is very good-looking.

Brothers, this one really has the spirit of Ultraman. It's different from Tomato's cool articles wearing Ultraman's skin. This is the real Ultraman. I feel it's better than this season's Ultraman [face covering] Then, what are those people who scold the Holy Mother thinking? This is the Ultra spirit, protect the weak, persist until the last moment, and never give up hope. Brothers, this is really good. Can you make more copies?

The vision of 260,000 people was unmistakable, and it perfectly took over the baton of Natsuki's completion. As for Omega, I wish him happiness