"It is difficult to cross the mountains. Who feels sorry for those who have lost their way? If we meet by chance, we are all guests from a foreign land."
"Although Beihai has credit, Fuyao can receive it. The east corner has passed, and it is not too late to mulberry trees."
"Am I being hypocritical because of my gentleness, or am I gentle because of my hypocrisy..."
After Lin Moran's death, he was reincarnated in Nata, and was adopted as a foster brother by Mavica. He first traveled around to make friends, and then returned to Nata to protect the safety of everyone in Nata, reducing the work pressure for the soldiers and sister of Nata.
And he also ushered in his sign-in system on the day he turned fifteen, and the first gold came out to Tianli's fourth shadow level subordinate-Mr. Ancient Shu High Priest
Reader comments
It's fine, but there are too many scene descriptions. You don't need to write so much scene descriptions. You should write more about the protagonist's personality and the character's dialogue.
Another thing is that the front is a bit confusing, where does the protagonist come from? How did you come to this world? Wait for these...
It's fine, but there are too many scene descriptions. You don't need to write so much scene descriptions. You should write more about the protagonist's personality and the character's dialogue. Another thing is that the front is a bit confusing, where does the protagonist come from? How did you come to this world? Wait for these...
Very nice. All I can say is. . .