Travel Through ****

In the first few chapters, when Mary was a child, it looked a bit awkward. I even thought the author was a child herself [laughing and crying], but it became more and more interesting later on. The author has an extremely rich reserve of knowledge, a large world view, and the heroine is also very charming. I apologize for my arbitrary comments before. Great author👍Please keep writing! Not enough!

The baby girl is delicate and smart. She gave such a large amount of money and planned to just be a neighbor and never interfere with their family's affairs in the future. It feels so sad for a mother of a baby girl to speculate so much on her baby girl. Don't let them take advantage of her strong and outstanding baby girl. The baby girl was so neglected when she was a child, so she bought two Longbourn to break off the relationship. Ah, no one in the family is allowed to disturb the baby girl in the future. The heroine will live in the sea of ​​stars in the future. All of this, it's a little clicky.

It is rare to see such delicate writing on Tomato. I really love the heroine so much, she is calm and wise. Please update frequently, I will definitely catch up to the ending [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

The writing style is outstanding, and the Chinese language is also excellent. It feels like a classic. There are many descriptions of local customs and customs, which can make people learn a lot of knowledge. The protagonist is calm and rational. Even though there were many restrictions on women in that era, she was able to carve out her own path to glory. As a time traveler, her thoughts are very advanced, but she is never alone. There are many women traveling with her, such as Emilia. They may be as small as dust in the torrent of the times, but they will always shine.

The author is great, I think this book is very beautiful. (You really don't want to have CP.) The heroine's entire personality is not suitable, and she will fall apart if she has CP. [Almost crying] [Almost crying] [Almost crying] I am really optimistic about this novel, it is very interesting and has great potential.

In fact, I kind of want to see the Earl and Mary get married, because Mary is really difficult and lonely. The Earl is the only person who understands, respects, understands and tolerates, and can escort Mary and send her to a wider world. Of course, in the end, it would not be bad if Mary relied on her own abilities to become a popular lady in the political world. New readers are here, looking forward to the next article.

I actually like the writing very much. This kind of gorgeous words is suitable for reading slowly while lying in bed at night. I like the heroine's free and fiery soul under the calm surface, and her rationality, anger, and worry. She has the wisdom of a highly educated woman in the new era. The collision of ideas from different eras makes the heroine full of charm. Although the daily interaction with her family is a bit unpleasant, it is acceptable as a diversion.

The large text is so beautiful. It combines the wording and sentence making of traditional literature with the compact and readable plot of online literature. With the large text, anything you write will be successful! It's great, I love watching it, I'll watch it again and again! ! ! The heroine in the first world is Mary, an interest network developed by literature, creating her own rights field. I really like the heroine to have a career. There may be a male protagonist (original), but I can accept it and the male protagonist has a good design, and I quite like Mary and Earl Edward.

I like the world of HP. Petunia is still not a wizard, but she has achieved great success in the real world. She is no worse than the so-called wizards and is very realistic. It makes the Evans family realize that there is not only the glamor behind magic, but also darkness and danger. The Muggle world, and academic qualifications to stay in the Muggle world, these are all issues that need to be considered. The recent chapters have shown that Lily and the others were caught by an organization using magic in the Muggle world. They have the power to imprison magic, not the Muggles who have no power in their hands. Later, they were rescued by several pure-blood families of Potter. I wonder if hearing the word Mudblood, she has not thought about her superiority towards her sister Petunia. There are still people above others, and she will not always maintain a sense of superiority. When the Evanses were approached by the Potters and asked to keep their distance, I wonder if they regretted that they had ignored Petunia all this time and blindly entered a magical world that they could not understand. Most of them were filled with prejudice. In their eyes, Muggles were just piglets to be slaughtered. Moreover, this was still the period when the Dark Lord was active... What I like most about this article is that it makes the Evans family realize many practical issues about survival. I am not interested in the development of Lily and Potter, but I hope that if someone still needs to raise Harry, I hope it is not Petunia, and I don't want the heroine to be a nanny, otherwise I will really abandon the article (a small suggestion. If someone really needs to raise Harry, I think the Evans couple is more suitable, and you don't need to kill them. Don't let the heroine raise Harry!!!!!)

Overall, it's okay, but the English mixed in between a sentence will not make the writing style sophisticated and authentic, and will only cause discomfort in reading, especially when these words themselves can be perfectly expressed in Chinese. It really makes me laugh when I see the description that the heroine is confused by something.

The writing is generally good, but the character descriptions feel fragmented.

Actually, I'm a little confused. Petunia rejects the dangers brought by the magical world, but she also wants to understand the magical world. Is she so repulsive to Lily and Harry because she wants to draw a clear line with the past? Is there something I still don't understand?

A different Mary, wise and calm, the Bennet family really needs someone like this. No matter how many people praise the love between Darcy and Elizabeth, they always feel that they are incompatible. Fairy tales end with princes and princesses getting married, but married life is never mentioned, or is the current situation of the king and queen the future of the prince and princess?

It's rare to see such a beautifully written novel. The heroine is very good and the writing is delicate. I really want to watch it. Big cheers.

It's very nice, but sometimes the author's descriptive sentences sound a bit like AI

Look! The writing is delicate and the heroine has a master's degree in physics.

I really like the unspoken understanding between Mary and the Earl! The writing is also very good! Like

See half of it. The heroine is perfect! But oh, if I traveled through time myself, I wouldn't dare to tease the old professor at all. I really feel that he is like my head teacher and dean of students. I've been thinking all day, it's over, it's over, I can't finish writing, I can't finish writing at all, it's so difficult! Help me, help me, it's so difficult, I can't learn it at all!

Very good writing style, very profound literary skills and solid historical information. I am just worried that there will be too few readers and I will be left to die, so I will keep up with the updates and cheer for the Fairy Wife [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

I was reading Harry Potter fan fiction recently and accidentally clicked on this article. I have to say that the author's writing style and ideas made me admire and like it. Penny's objective rationality and entanglement give people a strong sense of empathy. It also really made me think about some of the events in the original work from a different perspective. Of course, I didn't feel that the character design was broken, it fit very well.

The writing is very good. The writing style is also good.

I like this book very much. It captures that feeling, rationally and confidently.

The writing in big letters is super, super and beautiful, come on, big words [adoration][adoration][adoration] But I hope you don't have to worry too much about those people at home.

Beautiful!! Simple words cannot describe my great love for the author❤️

Very good. It is a work that is different from other common routines and has a delicate writing style. I hope the author will continue to update it.

The writing is excellent and the characters are vividly drawn.

A strong mind, unyielding will, and tenacity are the female traits that I admire and aspire to achieve, and this work takes this to the extreme, which is fascinating to read.

Nice! The writing is amazing, the setting is novel, and the world view is huge! !

The emotional descriptions of the protagonists are very delicate and accurate. The author also expresses the relationship between the characters very appropriately. It is suitable for careful reading.

I started reading it from Penny, it's very well written [sending my heart][sending my heart], looking forward to the update