The Beast Pirates' Vice Captain, and the Captain's Father

It's very good. It's not like other protagonists who are grinding and grinding and have to think about this and that. And it's not like those people who have many children and are blessed, who use girls as tools to travel through time with other people and get sterilized. But this one is different. It's very normal and very refreshing. Ollie gives it.

Although I am not the captain myself, it is rare and quite interesting. Finally, it is not a fanfic about pirates playing house and being a nanny or a virgin for the protagonist group. Sometimes I really don't understand those fanfics where people have traveled through time and still have to meddle in other people's business as a nanny. Holy Mother, this is really exciting for me. Wano Country is killing people randomly, and other people are not used to it. Keep it up, don't care what the bad reviews say, as long as you don't take care of the Holy Mother, then more people will definitely come to see it [Like][Like][Like][Like]

[Adoration] Very good, the legendary boil-resistant king was cooked by the protagonist before he even went to sea.

The volume of 6,000 words updated three times a day is large and the quality is high. The author also has a good grasp of some details. The original work of One Piece is too grand in length. Some details, such as the historical text, are several in Mermaid Island. Basically no one can remember these clearly. Moreover, the core is very important. The country of Suwa has been destroyed within 50 chapters, and the goal is to make Kaido become the Pirate King. In addition, if the author can, it will be better to insist on writing it down. For example, the latest members of the Rocks Pirates can be written in to expand the length and add characters. Can those whose viewing time is less than 30 minutes please refrain from commenting? The worst thing is that the author has moved the pacing too fast. In some people's eyes, it has become like, the protagonist has become a nanny, and also said that the protagonist cannot have children. If you have a child and a daughter so early, you are not infertile, but you don't allow others to have children?

The plot is so exciting. It is not controlled by the plot of the original work at all. You do what you need to do and kill everyone who is against you. The combat power is also reasonable, but what I like most is having children. Like other harem novels, even if a harem is opened, it is like sterilization. No matter how many women there are, there will be no offspring. They are really just a group of eunuchs who are not eunuchs. Like this novel, it is necessary to find women and have children, and then be like normal people. All in all, it's very interesting. The current shortcoming is that there are too few chapters. It's not enough to read. The author should update it quickly. Two chapters a day is not enough.

Not bad, not invincible, but resourceful and powerful, not brainless and tough. Harem sex, but not dog-licking stallion. Although there are many women, they are not the kind of lickers who can't move when they look at women, so the multi-female content in this article will not cause discomfort. (Personally, I think a stallion licking a dog is very disgusting, and I almost don't read articles with CP) And there are not many chapters about women, most of them are development plans and strength improvement. Finally, there is a novel that doesn't kneel down and lick Robin, Nami and other female characters. It's not easy. Keep it up. It's not that Robina and other female characters are bad, it's just that there are too many similar stories.

Okay, okay, good-looking, love to watch, update soon, more updates! A little suggestion: Captain - Kaido (just fight) Vice Captain——Lei Luo (determines the direction of development) Chief of Staff - Jhin (in charge of intelligence from all parties) Boatswain - Jack (responsible for crew training) Secretary-General - Stussy (responsible for financial business) Secretary of Defense—Quinn (Weapons Research and Production) Chef - you can create a character (life housekeeper logistics) Above is the highest level Then there are the captains and vice-captains of each division, these are the crew members of the headquarters. There are also peripheral affiliated pirate groups Form a "big fleet of beasts"! ! !

This author is very creative. He first disrupted the plot of One Piece and then reconstructed it according to his own ideas. The logic of the plot is not problematic. It is a very formal One Piece fan. The rating is about 9.3, Excellent quality. There is also the fact that the protagonist has too strict control over his children. For decades, each wife has only one child, which is illogical. According to logic, the protagonist has more than a dozen wives and has maintained his youth and has at least hundreds of children. In fact, some ordinary people's children are not a bad thing, but they don't need to be described too much. Secondly, some plot settings are not comparable to One Piece. This is not the author's fault. He tried his best, but One Piece is too watery.

Super nice One Piece novel, fighting Wano and the Celestial Dragons, Roger the Clown

It's a great book. It's so readable. It's humorous and decisive. The author also interacts with her frequently. She eats women without being annoying. I just feel that these female protagonists are a bit like second-hand cars. They have all liked others. It's uncomfortable to watch.