The Vice-Captain of the Beast Pirates and Also the Father-Captain

It's very good. It's not like other protagonists who are grinding and grinding and have to think about this and that. And it's not like those people who have many children and are blessed, who use girls as tools to travel through time with other people and get sterilized. But this one is different. It's very normal and very refreshing. Ollie gives it.

Although I am not the captain myself, it is rare and quite interesting. Finally, it is not a fanfic about pirates playing house and being a nanny or a virgin for the protagonist group. Sometimes I really don't understand those fanfics where people have traveled through time and still have to meddle in other people's business as a nanny. Holy Mother, this is really exciting for me. Wano Country is killing people randomly, and other people are not used to it. Keep it up, don't care what the bad reviews say, as long as you don't take care of the Holy Mother, then more people will definitely come to see it [Like][Like][Like][Like]

[Adoration] Very good, the legendary boil-resistant king was cooked by the protagonist before he even went to sea.

The volume of 6,000 words updated three times a day is large and the quality is high. The author also has a good grasp of some details. The original work of One Piece is too grand in length. Some details, such as the historical text, are several in Mermaid Island. Basically no one can remember these clearly. Moreover, the core is very important. The country of Suwa has been destroyed within 50 chapters, and the goal is to make Kaido become the Pirate King. In addition, if the author can, it will be better to insist on writing it down. For example, the latest members of the Rocks Pirates can be written in to expand the length and add characters. Can those whose viewing time is less than 30 minutes please refrain from commenting? The worst thing is that the author has moved the pacing too fast. In some people's eyes, it has become like, the protagonist has become a nanny, and also said that the protagonist cannot have children. If you have a child and a daughter so early, you are not infertile, but you don't allow others to have children?

The plot is so exciting. It is not controlled by the plot of the original work at all. You do what you need to do and kill everyone who is against you. The combat power is also reasonable, but what I like most is having children. Like other harem novels, even if a harem is opened, it is like sterilization. No matter how many women there are, there will be no offspring. They are really just a group of eunuchs who are not eunuchs. Like this novel, it is necessary to find women and have children, and then be like normal people. All in all, it's very interesting. The current shortcoming is that there are too few chapters. It's not enough to read. The author should update it quickly. Two chapters a day is not enough.

Not bad, not invincible, but resourceful and powerful, not brainless and tough. Harem sex, but not dog-licking stallion. Although there are many women, they are not the kind of lickers who can't move when they look at women, so the multi-female content in this article will not cause discomfort. (Personally, I think a stallion licking a dog is very disgusting, and I almost don't read articles with CP) And there are not many chapters about women, most of them are development plans and strength improvement. Finally, there is a novel that doesn't kneel down and lick Robin, Nami and other female characters. It's not easy. Keep it up. It's not that Robina and other female characters are bad, it's just that there are too many similar stories.

Okay, okay, good-looking, love to watch, update soon, more updates! A little suggestion: Captain - Kaido (just fight) Vice Captain——Lei Luo (determines the direction of development) Chief of Staff - Jhin (in charge of intelligence from all parties) Boatswain - Jack (responsible for crew training) Secretary-General - Stussy (responsible for financial business) Secretary of Defense—Quinn (Weapons Research and Production) Chef - you can create a character (life housekeeper logistics) Above is the highest level Then there are the captains and vice-captains of each division, these are the crew members of the headquarters. There are also peripheral affiliated pirate groups Form a "big fleet of beasts"! ! !

Super nice One Piece novel, fighting Wano and the Celestial Dragons, Roger the Clown

It's a great book. It's so readable. It's humorous and decisive. The author also interacts with her frequently. She eats women without being annoying. I just feel that these female protagonists are a bit like second-hand cars. They have all liked others. It's uncomfortable to watch.

This author is very creative. He first disrupted the plot of One Piece and then reconstructed it according to his own ideas. The logic of the plot is not problematic. It is a very formal One Piece fan. The rating is about 9.3, Excellent quality. There is also the fact that the protagonist has too strict control over his children. For decades, each wife has only one child, which is illogical. According to logic, the protagonist has more than a dozen wives and has maintained his youth and has at least hundreds of children. In fact, some ordinary people's children are not a bad thing, but they don't need to be described too much. Secondly, some plot settings are not comparable to One Piece. This is not the author's fault. He tried his best, but One Piece is too watery.

I've caught up with the latest chapter. It's well written. Keep it up. It ranks among the top three pirate fanfics I've read. After reading the comment section, I found that most of the negative reviews were because they were working as Kaido's nanny and shipmate. Thousands of people have different faces. This is not very important to me. I just enjoy reading the novel. Overall, it can be rated at four stars, because there are very few pirate novels that can be written like this. I will give another star to encourage the author.

To put it bluntly, looking at the entire Tomato Pirates fandom, I really can't see anyone who is more awesome than Lei Luo. That day, the dragon people are almost becoming an endangered species. The living king group! After successfully gathering a hundred beasts, each of them had a general-level combat power, and the second generation of the beasts each drove an epic version of the improved Hades to surround Mariejoia, Im looked at his tattered King and fell into deep thought. Im "Luo... Im aware of my mistake, please quickly withdraw your magical powers." Using the power of Piao Piao Fruit, the entire continent flew into the sky and became the upper realm! As long as you have the fighting power of a general, then come to the upper world and plant potatoes for me! Then a new continent was re-condensed from the ocean, gathering all races. From then on, people lived in peace and no one used force to solve problems because they raised their heads There will be beasts watching them...

It's good to read. It's different from other One Piece novels. It's not about the navy or pirates wandering around on the ship. It's written in a style that's different from other One Piece novels. The plot is very well controlled and there are many wives [Adore]

Real rating: ★★☆☆☆ Comments: I give you good reviews for Torturing Little Devils, but there isn't much else worth praising. Those who are willing to watch mindless fun can pass the time. 1. Anyone who kills Tianlong will surely awaken the domineering energy of the Overlord and make a big wholesale deal if he kills one of them; 2. The male protagonist ignores the logic of growth and is super invincible; 3. The world government is not the least bit good, and is being treated like a monkey.

A very good novel. If you don't like it, you can come and trouble me.

Not bad, a pirate novel that completely changes the plot.

Yes, it's really cool, but the author is lagging behind the version. Now, in addition to the fantasy beast species, multiple fruits are also standard. Anyway, the more enjoyable the fandom is, the better. The writing is really good, and I'm still following it. Not to mention the plot, it's really enjoyable. Wano Country has become the protagonist, which is so exciting.

I don't know why the score is so low, but I think it's okay and you can watch it. Although it feels a bit like being a babysitter, at least he didn't become sworn friends with Luffy, Ace, and Sabo to lick the protagonist [eating melon]

Personally, I feel very good. As long as there is no licking, forced group CP and self-love, it is acceptable.

Very good. He is very good among the Pirates fanfics I have seen. In Tomato, there are not many Pirates fanfics that can match it.

Needless to say, it's a very nice book. Not only his combat prowess is high, but his IQ is also online. A cool batch [like][like][like]

Good reviews: Wano Country is so cool. Kaido is also attractive, but there is too little feeling. Please write more [Cool]

It's quite interesting, I hope it won't be interrupted or unfinished (I want to see Barrett, Lao Sha, and Moria being defeated and sent to work as miners and then recovered [smile])

I have read Chapter 126 so far. This should be considered the second Pirates fanfic I have read that suits my taste. Although I detoured when I saw the harem story, the plot of this book basically breaks the story framework of the original Pirates. It has its own ideas, which is good. The protagonist of the previous one was Captain Geer.

A very standard Invincible style pirate fanfic. Although the author's writing style is not outstanding, he directly captures the joy of this group of people. Invincible style is not about pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, it is not that I am very strong but I still have to be criticized, and it is not that I am so strong that it doesn't even feel good.

There is a saying in it that low-level time travelers do not dare to change the plot and are only obedient. Advanced Traveler breaks the plot and creates the plot. I already think it is better than 95% of pirate novels. I would give this book a score of 9-9.5 Out of 10, because I didn't like the first few chapters very much, because I am a bit biased towards the character of Ba Jin. Other than that, I feel that the plot arrangement of this book is pretty good.

Without further ado, let me give you a thumbs up. The reason why it only has a score of over 8 points is probably because of the attribute of having more women, so some people have lowered the score here, but it still feels good. By the way, apart from Osna's book, I think it's okay, and this is the only one that's okay. The others either haven't been read yet, or they're not good. This is the second Pirates book I've read, and it's okay. It's worth reading, and it's worth recommending.

A kind author, a harmonious and loving protagonist, like (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

Personal highlights, I enjoyed watching it, especially the Kingdom of Killing and Wano

I watched it last night and caught up with the latest chapter today. It's a very pure feeling of enjoyment, and logically speaking, the author should also listen to comments, because I read it and he wrote down his thoughts.