Dragon Clan: Sorry, I Didn't Let Master Su Nuo Enjoy Himself to the Fullest.

A new author, the writing style is a little immature, but overall it is very good, the plot is coherent, and the character descriptions are quite realistic.

Ordinary people: can't stand it Expert: Smiling secretly Jiahao: I almost got nervous God: barely holding on Me: light and relaxed, relaxed and relaxed, relaxed and comfortable, comfortable and comfortable, leisurely and leisurely, leisurely and comfortable, comfortable and relaxed, relaxed and relaxed, relaxed and relaxed, calm and relaxed, calm and relaxed, light and easy, light and light, light and easy, light and leisurely, leisurely and leisurely. Hold on, hold on with joy, hold on with joy, hold on at ease, hold on leisurely, hold on with joy, hold on with peace of mind, hold on with peace of mind, hold on gently, hold on in peace, hold on in peace (not a corpse, not depression, not anxiety, not mental illness, not bipolar disorder, not discomfort, not a vegetative state, not facial paralysis, the mouth is not sewn shut, not a blind person, there is a mouth , not lying, not a puppet, has a head, an upper body, no mask, not a bomb) just... You know what The author is far away from humans and very close to God

Well written and well written. I hope the author will not mess up the story and write a long story without hastily ending it. Keep the level high. Young couple Ye Sheng depends on how the author handles it. It doesn't matter whether they save him or not, as long as the logic and continuity of the story are not destroyed.

The quality is sure to be popular, the rhythm is well controlled, and there are no poisonous points. Moreover, it has a youthful pain writing style that is rare among other Taiwanese dragon fanfics in Western Persimmon. The emotional narratives and descriptions of luxury brands that appear from time to time are also very old-fashioned. The overall evaluation is overwhelming. Highly recommended! ! !

Very well written

A few years ago, I sang duet with two immortal friends🎵I sang Mingyue🌕, one sang Green Mountain🌳, and the other sang White Lake💧. How can someone who can sing such a song😲 be a villain who covets the immortal poison🤔? I believe in you two immortal friends. 😊 Fairy friend, you know that I am waiting... You and I are just singing to each other🎤, we have never been together😔, fairy friend, leave quickly🏃, there is still time🦶, if fairy friend doesn't leave😣, I'm afraid I will be falsely accused of being a devil😡. The evil way👿/the right way😠, these two camps and two identities cannot restrain me, Feng Jiuge😎, whether to leave or stay😊, for me, Feng Jiuge😛, leaving is the death of my heart😱, staying is the life of my heart! 🤗 @ Crane Guixuanjing

This kind of emotional description is relatively rare in Tomato. It really has the literary youthful flavor of the original work (no bad intention) and it also has a refreshing feeling. I hope the author will keep up the good work [blowing kiss] Come on, author bacteria [angry]

It is enough to show how much the author's resentment towards Jiangnan [Like][Like][Like]

It's great that we all have these female protagonists. Can't we really add a zero? Please, I can do anything [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Five ants five ants

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

If possible, can we do more fighting scenes?

Looks good, at least I personally think so

It's very interesting, has a lot of laughs, and the emotional description is very good. It's good-looking, I love reading it, and it's so cute. Update it soon. Author, you don't want to lose a handsome reader.

Could use more fighting

Come on! Update quickly

It's okay. No major problems have been found so far. [You taste it carefully][You taste it carefully]

It's beautiful, the author's writing style is also very good, and the emotions are also written very delicately.

It looks good. I love to read more by the author.

I love watching it. As a senior dragon fan, it feels pretty good.

Come on, come on, come on! ! ! ! ! !

Not bad, I can watch it

Come on, the author writes well.

Good looking good looking Extremely proud

Looks good, come on, come on, come on

It's pretty good. The author is also very obedient.

Update update update update update update update update

It looks good, it would be nice if it could be updated more [please update]

It looks good. The author has updated it more. It's not enough.

It's very interesting to watch, the plot is coherent, and the setting is quite interesting!