Yakuza Tokyo: Start Guide for Single Hot Moms

I read Chapter 6 in one go. So far, the plot is relatively smooth and not laggy. The settings of the background and minor characters are also interesting. The writing is not trivial and it is worth reading. However, there are also some flaws that have not been polished. In order to enhance the sense of substitution/shape the characters and provide certain explanations, the large number of inner descriptions of the protagonists that appear in each chapter appear to be out of the ordinary. It is too out of the ordinary. It doesn't look like a middle-aged person who has been wandering in the gray area all year round, but closer to a teenager with a campus style of Nikkaru, and some of the reasons for driving the character's actions are also a bit inappropriate. The excessive empathy for collecting debts and helping children is a bit blunt. It's not that the behavior is wrong, but the motivation is relatively blunt, and the experience and setting are inconsistent. If these small details are polished, the look and feel will be much better. You can consider skipping the inexplicable psychological process and directly describe the action. The emotional rendering can be shaped through the scene, and you can focus on portraying the key points that everyone likes to watch. I hope that the next author will write better and better.

He is an authentic Liu Huangshu, but the protagonist's exhilaration and power are checked and balanced by the system. The words of the female protagonists are very good. The protagonist is too good at pretending to be innocent. As long as he is in front of women, he is like Xiao Chunan (who has eaten meat). He cares about these women. When chatting with those women, those women take the initiative. It feels like the protagonist is showing affection. I hope the protagonist can be more domineering in front of those women.

Japanese yen conversion, for example, 1,000 yen is equal to 50 yuan🤔 Still have two hearts?

It's also good to be a jdm car owner if you can have some racing scenes.

When Guan Yu comes, he has to recognize that this is Liu Bei.

What is the use of your system?

Except for the Sigma Spirit, everything else is pretty good.

Very good, needs improvement, looking forward to it

Emperor's uncle Good work, baby

Super interesting plot with ups and downs

Final fantasy? A bit interesting [laughing and crying]

Jin, we love your mouth and teeth

I think it's okay, hold on, the author, don't go in [laughs evilly]

I'm so scared, you asked people to hurry up

It's so good especially at the end of Chapter 29. You don't need to read the rest. Chapter 29 is a must-read [Adoration] [Adoration]