Book Transmigration: I'm a Background Character, but the Heroine Wants to Marry Me

It's true that I'm a bit tired of reading cookie-cutter romance novels. Those male protagonists seem to have the aura of being the protagonist, everything goes smoothly, and there are countless girls around me. But this book really made my eyes shine. The male protagonist does not have the aura of the protagonist, he is just an ordinary person. There is no rush to redeem the heroine. It's all step by step. I'm looking forward to what the author will write next. If I find out that the ending is bad, I will elbow the author's magic pill 😠

My average appearance can't impress anyone's youth, I have no unforgettable love, and no long-lasting love. My youth is endless homework and endless tests, and their youth is wanton and reckless. There is someone to like, but I don't have one, because my youth is a good student who is not regarded as a bad student. I'm sure, but it's different in novels. There are all the good things I yearn for in reality. I love novels because there is redemption in novels. Those boys and girls are my salvation. They love each other, and I, as a reader, have read all their love because novels can illuminate all the darkness in the world. There is a more realistic society than what I can't love, and it can break my perception of evil people again and again.

There is a male protagonist and a female protagonist in the class. When the two of them talk, the others will act like there is no one there 😂😂

The look and feel is quite good, and the description of love is second. The main descriptions of campus and high school life gave me a strong sense of déjà vu, and most of them are very similar. The difference is that in the past, from the first to the third year of high school, day students had to finish classes at 20:00 (after taking classes from 18:00 to 20:00), and boarding students had to finish classes at 22:30 (three periods of self-study) 🤦 I feel that the main character's high school is not as relaxed as in China. In addition, the protagonist feels a bit domineering, cold, tough, and has no flirty words, which is a relatively rare character in male videos. The female protagonist is also timid and doesn't talk much. I feel that one of the two should be better to liven up the atmosphere, but overall it is okay. Disadvantages: ①Other students' writing was more human-machine. It is still necessary for a campus novel to have a proper group portrait description, and the supporting characters had a strong sense of separation. The girl in the next class who incited her sister to bully the heroine had a name and thought she was an important person, but the result was not revealed. The scenes between the original male lead and his Bai Yueguang are also pie in the sky. I feel like it doesn't matter if they are there or not. I don't see any foreshadowing. I feel that their plot is not well designed and the plot is not very engaging. ② Campus life is relatively repetitive. I ride my bike to see people off after class every day. It feels like the number of words is like water. Just write it a few times symbolically. The rest should wait until the key plot comes (for example, "The busy days suddenly go away, and a few months pass in the blink of an eye, xx and xx..." It would be better to write it like this to transition the plot points) ③I have found so much for now, I will add more later...

It's really sweet, my body feels warm when I look at it 😢

The writing is smooth, the main plot is soothing and warm, and the male and female protagonists have distinct personalities. However, I hope that after the world of the female protagonist is brightened, more supporting characters around the protagonist can be written, such as best friends and best friends. The events and words of the supporting characters can be used to set off the sweetness of the male and female protagonists, which can enrich the storyline. Come on, I'd rather you write more slowly than have a hasty ending [Bookshelf Plus 1]

Can completely satisfy the fantasy of youth It's so poisonous in the back

You can have two female protagonists for a comparison. I feel that in this era, there is not much emphasis on whether there is a single female protagonist. What is important is the nature of purity. You can write more about the contrast between the two female protagonists with different personalities and the different interactions with the male protagonist, resulting in contrast and conflict. One has the ability. Strong men do not necessarily have to be accompanied by only one woman. The protagonist of this book is originally a comparison between two women. The content written later can also be like this. I think the content of the choice and decision made by the male protagonist in front of women with different personalities will be richer and more contrasting.

Not bad, not bad, a daily life type, with a machine-like male protagonist and a naive female protagonist. Since I like to watch battles, I lost interest halfway through the book and didn't want to read it. The title of this book should be "Passing Through the Book: The Daily Life of Daddy and the Foolish Heroine"

The writing is okay, but too slow. Personally, I suggest you speed up and just write on a daily basis for a few days. Skip the rest. Fast forward to college life, or insert part of the plot in between. After all, the male protagonist hasn't said anything about making money yet.