Star Dome Railway: Auction for Breeding Star God Fragments at the Beginning

The writing is very good, but the protagonist is too clown, and revenge is the biggest poisonous point of the book. The author should work hard.

Very good. The protagonist uses the auction to quickly become stronger. From a mortal to a Killing Order, it takes less than 200 chapters (there are still two, one is Huanhuan and the other is a pioneering and protecting order [laughing]). Although the introduction of the auction items may be a bit watery, it does also write about the "surprise" of each strong person towards other universes [like] It also changes some regrets, resurrects some regretful people who died, and changes some regretful endings of those people [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Overall it's pretty good. The only thing that makes me deduct one point is that the author still wrote the original cp, the amazing Gai Xiaolun Kazuhiko, maybe I can't stand it [face covering] [face covering] But I still recommend the author to write less, or not write at all, there is always some resentment, like a single dog watching a couple? After all, the protagonist is single [face covering]

There is no place in this province. I can't stop drinking water for a long time and I don't have any fun at all.

Although the protagonist's revenge plot is a bit cliché, I feel that the protagonist's character is just a fun person. As for tax evasion, there is no need for a reason.

The subject matter is good, and the other universes written about are also good, but the protagonist of the auction shouldn't have too many personal emotions.

Tsk, you might as well just write a movie about watching movies from all over the world. It's so uncomfortable to watch this auction.

Author, let me give you some advice. There are many good things from Super Sentai and Kamen Rider that can be written in, such as: Guardian Crystal from Insect King Sentai, the Gears of the Full Opener, the holy sword and book from Holy Blade, and EA's virus. If the author is interested in taking a look, you can also ask us.

The novel looks good, but the core of the novel is an auction, and most of it is taken outside the auction [laughs awkwardly]

There are more than 70,000 people studying, but few have scored. It's really weird.

Some brothers, some Ultimate resilience——Yang Jian The ultimate real injury——Lu Bu Ultimate control - Bodhidharma The ultimate deceleration - Charlotte The ultimate support——Guan Yu The ultimate technique - Yuan Ge The ultimate explosion——Li Xin The ultimate injury-free——Meng Tian The ultimate lines - Sikong Zhen Of course there is more than one such strong hero. These are all powerful heroes at the tO.5 Level in the current version. If you master one or two Nine Gates Heroes, there will be no problem with the Glory Hundred Stars Small National Standard. If you can master more than half of the nine-door heroes, it will be quite easy for you to reach the top one hundred or ten. If you want to maximize the proficiency of all nine heroes like a streamer, you can go directly to the KPL professional competition to compete in the lane, and directly go to the professional starting lineup, brother.

Otto I killed his father because of some compelling reasons... But he still holds the grudge to this day, insisting on fighting against me for decades. What does this make me say—he has no father, but he still has me? I can definitely be his guide in life, right? Just like I trained you. Is Mr. Walter also connected to everyone? I'm really sorry that I didn't let you have a happy Thanksgiving in New York. Over the years, I have always wanted to express my apology to you, and I have even thought of many ways: such as finding a monument and kneeling down on the spot, performing a performance for you and crying bitterly.

Hope someone likes it I've said it in the introduction and at the beginning, and I'll say it again in the comment section. This is a spoiler, a variation of the viewing stream. Readers who don't like this type can avoid the pitfalls in advance.

Keep up the good work, the author of a very good book, but you already have so many specific gravity coins. Can't you use these coins to buy some high-end goods from the company? You have to buy it from the system. The company is actually more like the government of Bengtie Universe than the company. And if there is an opportunity to eradicate a king of annihilation, the company will definitely help without leaving any room.

Uh-huh, uh-huh, it looks good! Update soon! This article is an auction plus a live broadcast (similar to a live broadcast). Anyway, I like it. It is mainly about the main plot of revenge. I think the protagonist's character is good. Bengtieren (the time traveler) has written many worlds. They are very good. Marvel Dc.

It's okay, Qiyi, but the protagonist is so strong and still entangled in what he did in the past (this is a poisonous point). Secondly, it's really heavenly (there are too many people). Now that things have come to this, add some warhammers or boats [eating melon]

Come on! Quite interesting.

Not bad, I hope there won't be any supervision

Worth a look, quite interesting

Great author, come on! ! !

. A book that I really like right now

Not bad, worth watching [Like]

Okay, if you want it, I'll give it to you

Not bad, keep up the good work. Come on

It looks good, come on author

What should I say? I personally think it's quite interesting, haha, let's sit back and see how it develops ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃ

The world of Warhammer 40k is beautiful and happy!

The plot is good, and traveling to other worlds is also interesting

If you're absolutely bored, you can watch this. It's still good for fun.

It's quite to my liking. If you keep updating it, you can watch it for a long time.

Not bad, not bad, a rare observation article.