Xingtie: Refusing Artificial Respiration on March 7 at the Beginning

It's so beautiful. The two poets, Xiao Sanyue and Xing, are holding their hands like thunder [laughing evilly], labor and management are going to laugh to death [laughing] [laughing] [laughing], General Duanmu, who is never confused, is really hot in Thai pants, and the current double armor is so dark that there is no limit to it, and his skills are Being able to use the ultimate move non-stop. After the ultimate move is released, there is still another ultimate move. There is no yang energy anymore, and the sense of security is full. Duanmu: "Speed through the Black Tower Space Station in Chapter 11, and speed through Yaliluo in Chapter 11. My name is Duanmu. Remember! I can conquer the world at will and everyone will look up to me." I will never go back to the all-powerful "General Duanmu". He is too fierce and invincible. I want to read it and love it. Let's see how many chapters Xiaohuanhuan can last. Hahaha, author, keep writing. Believe me, it's guaranteed [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

This book of General Duanmu is the least confusing I have ever seen, and it fits my impression of General Duanmu in the TV series. He hates evil, is sometimes serious and sometimes cheerful, pays attention to his companions, and small details. Duanmu is kind to the weak. General Duanmu is simply a perfect character. After going through life and death and finding out that he can't go back, he is not confused. There is a little The details are a masterpiece, and I discovered that the general is just an ordinary person... (General Duanmu can't go back. The current situation is that his side of Oxer has not finished fighting, his father's death has not been avenged, his girlfriend is still there, his companions are not there, and even the world is still waiting for him to save. It is very stressful just thinking about it. If it were me, I would be confused [crying]) @ Okay, I came to write a book review, only to realize that you are the prison sheep again. Please update me the other one quickly. There is only one chapter today. It is not enough to see how you can sleep [angry] [angry] [angry]

How should I put it? The flaws do not hide the advantages, the author needs to pay attention to some details. However, Duan Muyan's character creation really controlled me. As for the issue of combat power, I think the author can explain it appropriately, because more and more people will read the book in the future, so I think it is still necessary to explain it. In addition, as for the plot, the author can add some of his own things. The current Laoyan is an envoy with combat power, which may lead to the plot being boring. Maybe he can add some intensity to write his own plot. Another very important point is that there is not much writing on the plot. It is only chapter 51. Although I also like this fast pace, I am afraid that the author will have nothing to write, so maybe the author should come up with his own plot.

It sounds good to read, so I'm curious to ask if there is a female protagonist. I don't mean any harm, but I don't really like the original heroine Ma Lingling. If there is a female protagonist, I hope it's not Ma Lingling. Although I feel that it is unlikely that Duanmu will fall in love with someone else. After all, when Ma Linlin disappeared in the original work, Duanmu almost turned into a psychopath due to anxiety, but I just don't like the heroine in the original work. Purely personal opinion

It's well written and very interesting, but for me, that star is too human-machine. I can't stand this type of star, which makes me suffer from stupidity again. The main character is a bit like a nanny. I still like the kind of Duan Muyan who kills evil all the way. But for people like me, I'm a bit too violent and can't stand this kind of thing. These are just my own opinions.

According to General Duanmu, even if Lan comes, he will have to abdicate [face covering]. I think Duanmu's role as a patrol ranger or a fairy boat general would be more in line with his character.

It's so pretty, I'm finally not so red anymore😭😭😭

OK, I also saw the latest chapter from Chapter 1. So far, there are no problems with Duan Muyan's settings, but the early performance of the star is just like a human machine. If I hadn't had nothing to read this morning, I probably wouldn't have had the patience to read it. It'll be fine later. But I'll try to change what I can in the early stage. It's still a five-star review, but I still haven't changed the star for this human-machine character. And after reading it for the second time, I seem to think that there is something wrong with Duan Muyan's character. Duan Muyan is quite amiable when she's not transformed, but you think it's too stiff for me.

Okay, come on author

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Man Dun, the one written by Belloberg is quite healing.

This book is so beautifully written!

The cover is Liu Ying, does Duan Muyan have a female protagonist?

It's so delicious [laughter][laughter][laugh][laugh] I really like the author's book [love] [love] [love] Keep up the good work, don't finish it so quickly, if it doesn't work, you can go to other worlds to play, or you can go back to the original world and let Oxer see the upgraded armored warrior.

So pretty, bro

General Duanmu's character is very normal. It's hard to find non-OOC books like this.

The Star Dome Railway, the highest difficulty, can be passed in one life.

It's pretty cool, but it feels like a human machine.

Write more quickly! Nice! Love watching!

I think it stands to reason that all four sets of armor can be used by General Duanmu, and finally upgraded to Thunder Yatares.

Okay, okay [laughing evilly] The left and right brains fight against each other every day. After watching the big one and the small one, watch it again [laughing evilly]

This book is well written.

You were criticized out of context by someone on site B, saying that you asked Duan Muyan to engage in CP with Tingyun, and he posted a video to scold you.

If Duan Muyan would send out a group of walkers, it would be for hunting.

So cool. So wow. Just start fighting, it's cool.