[System] [Comedy] [Slice of Life] [One Heroine] [Passionate] [Fan Fiction] [No Harem + Affectionate Moments with Lumine]
Due to unforeseen circumstances, the young Bai Ze transmigrated to Teyvat. There, he met Lumine, who had only recently awakened, and set off a month early on an adventure to visit another world. Something seemed a little off about the world.
Lumine: I don’t know this guy. Don’t look at me.
Aether: That jerk! What has he dragged my sister into now?!
Venti: You bastard, put my wine down! Put it down!
Bai Ze: System, what have you done? Why are all these quests you give me so weird? Who would ever do something like this?
System: There are rewards!
Bai Ze: I’ll do it! These are exactly the kinds of quests I love doing.
Bai Ze runs away in fear: Why is Noelle chasing me with a greatsword like a yandere?!
Qiqi, why are you looking at me like that?
Qiqi: Hmph, meanie.
Ei, hurry and do something about the Shogun! Stop feeding her already!!
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The story of this book is chaotic and incorporates all sorts of different elements. If you like a carefully plotted story, you might want to skip this one.
It's not very good. The writing style is a bit immature, and there are a lot of psychological descriptions in the text, as well as some long paragraphs that give people a poor impression. The plot was too hasty. As soon as we arrived in Mondstadt, we started to prepare for all kinds of big scenes, including tens of thousands of monsters attacking Mondstadt, all kinds of apostles of the abyss, and Kong all gone, looking like they were about to fall. However, the author did not explain why the abyss spent so much effort to defeat Mondstadt. In terms of combat power, we refer to Beng Tie's combat system, which has a high probability of collapse. The protagonist in the article was glanced at by the guardian, and even attracted the attention of other star gods, but the writing was not as expressive as it should be. It is estimated that Mond will be done with this book, and the rest of it will just change the world or follow the plot.
This book is very well written. It didn't make me feel that the protagonist was too weak, nor did it make me feel that the protagonist was too strong. Except for a lot of typos, the overall feeling is OK. I haven't found any blockages so far, so you can eat with confidence.
The book is okay, just about forty chapters, and it looks like it will open up a parallel universe later on. All I can say is that if you take too big a step, you will fail. If you write it down like this, if you continue to write about parallel time and space, it will either become popular, or it will simply go cold.
There are so many beautiful girls, you and I are playing solo heroines, what do you want to do?
To be honest, I feel like the author of this book is a bit messy. Why is it so strong inexplicably? Sound pregnancy test strips don't seem that strong, right? You, Si Hot Shot, feel a little confused. Even in the early stage, you feel that you need to activate diversity. I feel a little confused.
The content is humorous but the writing style is a bit immature. From the current perspective, it is a good book. I wish the author will write better and better
The book is okay, but the main character is weak and not abstract. He still loves to sleep as before. It doesn't suit me. I turned right when I went out.
I've read Chapter 45, so that's all I'll give you for now.
If you love eating, you will like to eat this kind of thing 🍉 🍉 🍉 The author will give me a lot of encouragement and will update [sending heartfelt wishes]
Is this a daily routine or is it something to do later?