Pink Cut Black? It Was Really Cut Open, Why Are You Crying?

Can Taoyao marry Bai Zhi [Thinking]

While reading, I felt that some areas could be polished to make it smoother. For example, the expression of some sentences may be adjusted to make it more smooth. There are also a few words that appear repeatedly. It may be better if they are slightly streamlined. In addition, there are several plot advancements that are not closely related to each other. If there can be more foreshadowing or connection, the overall context may be clearer. (If you feel offended, please tell me and I will delete the comment, thank you)

The early plot is a bit like the Momo Ran book? And some of the sentences don't feel very smooth, and the names are a little confusing, but all in all, it's still pretty good-looking.

Although it is indeed very similar to the one next door, the current identity of the protagonist is very different. One is the original, and she is just a person with no destiny (for now). The demand for popularity is different. One is crazy about issuing swords due to version maintenance, while she is more like a player. The former is a powder-cut ash, and it is evaluated as pure crumbs because it wants to gain popularity. The latter is a powder-cut powder (currently), and it is evaluated as fighting for beauty. (No malicious intent, just comparing the differences, not judging good or bad, each has its own advantages) The author not only attacks players but also readers. Author, you have released preview PVs for the next seven or eight versions, please continue to update (╥_╥)

It's really interesting, it feels like Tao Yao's book, but it's different. Anyway, good luck to the author.

It's real and touching, the characters are very vivid, it makes people cry like rain, and it fills Duchuan.

I am also interested in spelling well.

Not bad, very pretty My rating for this book is Familiar Stranger [laughing and crying]

Maybe it's because I've read too much, and I feel like it's not sharp enough, and I don't have much of a feeling about it. The author should work hard to write more sharply, but it's not sharp enough.

It is written as if the game actually exists, very suitable for serious planning

This novel is lighthearted, sunny, and positive. If you don't believe it, you can ask the author.

I found out that book friends were already relieved as soon as I found out in the comment section, and then I found out that the author is also a book friend.

I originally wanted to read a book, but I read a similar novel in the past few days and suddenly remembered this. But when I came back, I lost it and died. As for the book, I personally think it's okay. I recommend it.

I've been writing very well lately, but I don't have many knives () Either you want to see the knife, or you just finished playing a character and ended up resurrecting her [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] (I feel bad)

There is a feeling that something is better than blue, better than blue [laughs][like]

It looks good, but there are some typos. Also, the author should update it soon, it's not enough.

The emotional descriptions of the characters are very good, and there was a section where I could sympathize with the characters' emotions while reading it.

I've seen similar content to this one

Good looking @

As long as the current quality can be maintained in the future

There are a lot of typos, but it still looks good.

Come on, the author is great, I have a short time to go to school to read

I just watched it for a while, and I think it's okay. I hope the author can stay a little longer.

Let's start a group. Book friends can do anything. Why did the group explode? Are you still updating? What a great new book

I caught up to chapter 65 in one go, but it's not enough. Feeling a little tired

Fortunately, as long as you keep updating, you're good, author. Well, the plot is good and so on. I'm not picky about anything that's the same, just keep it the same. As long as it doesn't burn your brain, author, you can just keep updating.

There are a lot of typos, but the plot is still recommended [Like]

Good-looking, but a little lacking Will the protagonist no longer participate in the plot later?

A very good book.

Still ok, recommended