Fox Yu: the Arrogant Fox Lord Helps Me

It's good, the writing is okay, but the author is lazy and slow to update. Su Zhaoli's character portrayal in the early stage is a bit funny. I suspect it is a black-hearted sesame glutinous rice dumpling. The relationship between Xuanque and Su Zhaoli is currently a transaction. What will happen in the later stage? Is it mutual use? Friendly cooperation? Still……? It is recommended that the author bury some appropriate foreshadowing and fill in the holes later, which may be more attractive. It is quite powerful to have two strong characters. Judging from this posture, the heroine's ability in the later stage should not be too weak. To be honest, Su Yuntang's type is quite common. I hope the author can write in a different style and stand out. I'm actually quite curious about this character. Is it white and black or is it egoistic? I quite like the scenes and hints of Bai Hongyan, but it's a pity that there are less descriptions of this character, but I can see that she yearns for freedom. Losing her memory is not a good thing, but it is not destiny. This is also one of the reasons why Su Zhaoli wants revenge. I hope the author can write an extra chapter about Bai Hongyan in the future. I think she is not a weak woman. She has her own ambitions. What kind of wonderful things would she have created if she had not lost her memory? I think the author can try to write about how all members are strong. Each has their own position and ideas. Everyone is their own protagonist. Everyone has created their own achievements. There may be ambiguities but they are still firm in themselves. Hope the future is promising Chapter 5 currently

Reading a good book is like making a friend. Whether it's Xuan Que's contrast or Su Zhaoli's tenacity and cuteness, they are all worth reading! This book is the result of the author's careful conception, and the fox hero and the little sun heroine are so good! Author, please update quickly☀️ Xuanque always looks gentle and polite, with just the right sense of propriety in his dealings with others. His polite and distant politeness wraps up all the dark and obscure thoughts inside. He is like a lonely man who lurks in the shadows. He is used to hiding all his paranoia, gloominess and unwillingness to show vulnerability under the mask of gentleness. He is always tight-knit to the outside world and will never reveal his true feelings to anyone easily. But the appearance of Su Zhaoli just broke through his layers of disguise. She is a live and warm little sun, her unprepared warmth shines directly into Xuanque's heart that has been blind all year round, warming the desolation in his dark folds bit by bit with her unreserved tenderness. Others can only see Xuan Que's decent and perfect shell, but Su Zhaoli can see the sensitive and loveless core beneath his mask, and is willing to be the only one willing to stay in the shadows and accompany him to slowly heal.

The male and female protagonists are very interesting to create. They are noisy and cultivating immortals, slowly taking revenge, and becoming their own heroines. I look forward to the author continuing to update! [Adoration]