Card: After Being Hit, I Unlocked the Card Making Collection

It looks good, with a slightly group-like feel. But Liu Yunwei seemed a little frustrated. I know he is very powerful, but his personality charm is not revealed, and the conversation with Lin Zheng is a little awkward. Maybe because I swallowed it all, the reason why Lin Zheng joined the dark organization, that is to say, became a dark person, was not very good to me. Perhaps the author wanted to describe the feeling between them as friends and enemies, but failed to grasp the degree? Maybe it's because the article is too short and nothing has been laid out yet? Liu Feng, Li Xiao, Bai Anyu and Shen Lu. Liu Feng and Li Xiao are somewhat similar. They both have spiritual seas and have experienced some things to be able to use them. They are good friends, so it is inevitable that they will feel similar. (Of course, they are different.) Later, the difference can be seen from the fact that Li Xiao directly registered the four of them for the team competition. The two of them are now three-dimensional. Bai Anyu's portrayal is slightly flat. Bai Anyu rejected the protagonist at the time because someone made an appointment with him. After Li Xiao reported it, Bai Anyu didn't say anything about how he handled it or his attitude toward Li Xiao. In this way, I feel that Bai Anyu's character is like a duckweed, and he can do whatever he wants. As for Shen Lu, she is a girl with long legs. Then there was none. I didn't feel her character arc, and her entirety was based on the evaluation of the protagonist. Long legs, auxiliary. Taking a sneak peek at the protagonist, he may have a crush, and this is also conveyed later. In other words, her character is a bit hollow. Even not as good as Gao Qiang, Xu Wei's character is three-dimensional. I don't know if the four of them will be a team in the future plot. If so, their characters need to be more three-dimensional. (But it feels like the protagonist will not always be defensive. If Bai Anyu is the main attacker, double main attack?) If not, then just pretend that I didn't say anything above. Another thing that slightly affects the perception is, can you change the usage of "get", "de" and ""? Now is the time to see the latest update, with its pros and cons. But overall, for me, the plot is smooth and there are no major poisonous points. There are no bad jokes or anything. The above are all my subjective evaluations, not objective. (Don't criticize, don't argue, as long as you don't agree, you are right.) Let me write down my feelings later. The main character's goal has never been clearly stated (maybe I didn't remember it because I didn't read it carefully). I won't talk about this first. Then the plot behind it feels like it's pushing the protagonist forward.

The writing is pretty good, mainly the logic of many things is online [face-covering] [face-covering] The protagonist and his best friend are finally no longer hot-blooded teenagers To be honest, I've read Chapter 100 [face covering] The plot is pretty good, but the protagonist can be tougher on Card Alliance [laughter] The main reason is that this organization always does some cheating things [laughter] [laughter] It's just a trick, why do they have to kidnap the protagonist morally, saying that the casualty rate is too high, and Card Alliance needs the resources to appease their families. I just want to say, since the official has decided to cultivate talents, are they still so stingy about the protagonist? Casualty compensation is the official's own business. They themselves did not assess the risks properly before, so the compensation is what they deserve [awkward laugh][awkward laugh] For high-level tasks, the points given to the protagonist are pitiful. Even if you apply for special points later, it is only 100 points, and the total is 600 points. The protagonist can get it by accepting tasks casually.

It's good to read. The author should post more. I can already feel the power of the Chinese gods. I have been following it until now. It looks good, but there are too few! Let me talk about my thoughts. It is a card world based on Chinese mythology, mixed with some supernatural stories. It is very smooth. Especially I can see the improvement of the author's writing style. No female protagonist has praised it! In addition, I hope that the pitfalls can be filled in. There are too many pitfalls!

So far, I think it's pretty good, but the updates are a bit slow [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Please update, I have a key idea that I can come up with quickly for Ma Mian♥

The author writes very well, I hope to update it soon and don't stop updating! [Cry][cry]