Bestiary of All Things: From a Mortal Clan to the Ancestor of the Immortal Way

Good grass The writing style is soothing and the narrative is long. Fascinating, really good grass Failure: As soon as we entered the mountain and encountered tigers, we suddenly heard the sound of a haji tiger. This place was inconsistent with the style of the previous article and was a bit out of place. 2. Some spiritual objects are prematurely exposed to public view The first is Lingyu. This protagonist is covered up by industrial upgrading. Followed by warm jade, the price is set between silver jewelry and low-end jade jewelry. The price is lower, and it also has special characteristics that would be dangerous if discovered. Considering that communication was not developed in the ancient background, there are no traces of immortal cultivators. At the same time, my father-in-law is a top-notch local, so there is no need to be afraid. And it was also patched later. Immortal cultivators are restricted by regulations and cannot go to places where spiritual energy is lacking at will, which is also a circle. Suggestion: There is nothing much to say, so just deal with the part about entering the mountains and encountering tigers. Because this is where the writing style is more abrupt. (If you want to make jokes later or change to a relaxed and happy style, you can start here. You can say a few words when teaching the children. After all, in some subsequent plots where the protagonist teaches the children, the protagonists are relatively majestic or plain, and there are no relaxed and happy things between father and son.) Finally The protagonist has a succubus-like appearance and a high level of understanding (it does not rule out that Goldfinger has improved a lot) This is my first time writing a long review_(:з∠)_, book friends, please don't criticize me so harshly(><)

Youdao is not a book without coincidence, and the adventures and the like have not gained much popularity, but it is still quite good to read. However, there are some flaws in the plot of "Just Entering the Mountain", but it is not a big deal, and I will continue to read it.

It's pretty good, but can it be a little more dangerous? This is too common now. Although it is quite beautiful, can the author update it faster? Can you do three chapters a day?

A very good article about family growth, keep up the good work and make more updates

Personally I think it's pretty good, the plot is compact, natural, bland but comfortable to watch.

Go faster, it's too slow, work harder. , Many of us have seen it, and several of my friends have recommended it to me.

It's still pretty good

It's cool, it's over

A very good novel📖

It's true that it can be bland