Desolate Star S-Class Hero: Picked up the Imperial Marshal

The content is quite good and quite attractive. If it is improved in the future, it will probably get a rating of 8.5 Or above, but my personal feeling is (the Al feeling in it is very heavy, especially Chapter 6.9.10, Etc... Most of the endings feel heavier, and the description inside can be less, but the communication content can be More, it must be simple and clear) Don't ask me how I know, I have written a little bit before, and a lot of the content Al generated has that feeling, and I didn't continue to write it later. The sisters are very powerful and super awesome. This is just a small personal opinion. Don't blame me if you don't like it [Like][Like][Like]

It's very interesting. It's different from the ordinary Zerg sweet pet stories, and it's closer to the process of two powerful and independent individuals who were originally cold and independent learning to love, achieve, and grow from each other. The author's writing style is good, and the details of the two strong characters are well described, so that you can see the real strong person in front of you, instead of just saying that he is strong and then disappearing. Although the protagonist's emotional development is fast, it is also progressive and not abrupt, rather than falling in love with him inexplicably as soon as he meets her. All in all, it is a very good new book, at least the 30 chapters that have been updated so far are very good.

The experience in some places is not very good. How to describe it? I feel that the teacher's description is too straightforward, just to highlight this theme, which makes me feel that the transition is particularly blunt in some places, just like the protagonist's character is as cold and hard-hearted, but I have to say that most of them have redeeming qualities, teacher, come on

The characters in the story are all very good, very warm, but some paragraphs are very strange, with a slight inhuman feeling, so I summarize, describe, and summarize again. It is strange and has a sense of emotionless narrative, but some paragraphs are very warm,...,,,, The discomfort of division

The writing is very good, and it feels like writing a novel right after writing a red-headed document. It looks really serious. It's different from what I've seen before, very fresh

In fact, I personally don't really like childbirth stories. Generally, I won't read some of them directly, because I feel that after having a child, most of the focus is on the child and it has little to do with the two protagonists, so I don't really like reading about raising babies. But this is the first one that I can watch even after having children. Although the two protagonists are relatively cold and don't talk about love, the atmosphere of getting along is really good. There is no greasy way to express love. The relationship between the two is more like a feeling of soul compatibility and sympathy. There is a natural tacit understanding in it, which will really make people cry. I highly recommend reading it, the writing is very good, although later I felt like I was writing a diary [laughing and crying]

I've watched part of it, and it's pretty good so far. The plot doesn't drag on, and the protagonist has a mouth. I particularly don't like this reformed book review method. I skipped the book review after just reading a little, so this is the first time I give a rating after the reform of book review. I hope the author will play a more stable role. Come on

I like the characters of the two protagonists very much, they are determined, capable and talkative! The plot advances gradually, and the emotional line develops at a reasonable pace. It doesn't feel too slow, and it's sweet but not greasy. [I'm full] The husband and wife have a tacit understanding and support each other. They rely on each other. This duo is delicious😋 I almost forgot, my favorite skin color is bad hehe [licking the screen] bronze x cold white skin

1. The author's writing style is reliable and mature (feeling a little sonorous and powerful?) 2. The plot is not procrastinating, the pace is appropriate, and the author has strong control 3. The character has a good personality, consistent with his identity, and not OOC 4.…To be added

Nice. Very warm. They can stand side by side and support each other on the battlefield, and they can be steadfast and trust each other in marriage. Having a baby is not the end of the story, but an unexpected gift during the journey. The alternation of battlefield and family makes people feel that this is what home should be.

It's very interesting to watch and the content is very well written, especially the part about the Wild Star, which is very well described and very detailed. The relationship between the two protagonists also develops slowly, not like love at first sight or something like in other books. But when I write it later, it feels a little strange. It feels like an indescribable narrative. It's like I made a plan, and then I wrote it according to this plan. It's just like an outline, but it's not hard to describe the feeling. It's very strange when I read it.

!!!!!!!!! It is different from any Zerg novel I have read. The author must work hard! [Love][love][love]

Wow, it's so well written. I almost never leave a review, only a rating. But the author of this book is really great. The delicate emotions between the protagonists are very comfortable to describe, and although the emotional pace is fast, it doesn't feel too abrupt.

It's very interesting. I wish I had discovered this book later. I finished it in half a day, [face covering] Very nice [like]

The writing is a little immature, wouldn't it be better if there were fewer brackets? Some places are a bit dramatic, but overall it's pretty good [like]

The emotions written in large letters are delicate, and the social explanations are also very clear. People who don't know much about Zerg can easily understand it. The relationship between the protagonists is very sexual, and the two strong protagonists have a long mouth. The battle scenes are also very detailed and give you a sense of immersion and tension. All in all, it's so beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

The article is very good, the protagonist's character is not OOC, the character is very three-dimensional, the story rhythm is not draggy, and the fighting plot is very graphic. The atmosphere between the protagonists feels a bit like an old married couple. Just reading the text feels a bit like reading an essay. All in all, it's pretty good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡. Recommend. (´｡✪ω✪｡｀)

The setting is great, the writing is good, it's sweet and non-abusive, the protagonist's personality doesn't change significantly, he's not the kind who will become a super love brain when he falls in love with the other person, the writing is great, I really like it [blowing kiss]

I like [Blowing Kiss] very much. The emotional line is not delayed and it suits my needs. It is also really sweet. The babies are so cute and I look forward to them growing up to be more powerful people! Also, should the author consider giving the baby surnamed Lin a nickname? It feels a bit stiff to just call the baby by his first name [sending my heart]. I really like it. The author will update it soon [lick the screen][lick the screen]

I thought it was a slow-burning book, but I didn't expect that the author was holding back a big [shyness]

It's an okay little sweet story. There are no inexplicable misunderstandings, awkwardness, or twists and turns. The two of them established their relationship quite directly, which is not bad. But there is indeed a problem of not being able to immerse yourself in it while reading. Besides! This article is real! Very! Love using it! ! ! Exclamation mark! ! ! Very! ! ! Influence! ! Read! ! ! ! The one star missing from the rating! ! ! ! Almost yes! Quilt! ! Exclamation mark! ! ! Get beaten up! ! ! Please review the manuscript even if you are writing with AI, polish the sentences yourself, or directly instruct the AI ​​not to use exclamation points. The reading experience will be better.

Although it's AI at first glance, the overall logic is okay, right?

The writing is not good, come on, author, teacher, who will I follow you to [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] to explode! My writing style is not good, I mean I will praise others if my writing style is not good [shy]

I haven't seen such a good-looking novel in a long time. The author writes it very well.

Two heroes, the whole text is about most of the battles, a few dual male protagonists, the writing is very good, good-looking [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

She is calm and reliable, has a strong sense of humanity, and is really heart-warming, as if she was born to know how to love, and she is very doting (the author who loves you greatly [sends my heart])

It looks so good. Please increase the rating! ! ! Such a beautiful article, the author said I love you so much (ɔˆ ³(ˆωˆc)

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The author writes very well

This is a true double strength.