Zero Zone: Invincible at the Beginning, Ling Chases Me to Post Stickers

[Information has been recorded] Evaluation: The plot speed is well controlled, and the writing is smooth and not laggy, but it is not particularly amazing, but it is still first-class in Tomato. The plot content does not make people feel sleepy, and the daily chapters are very warm. But overall, it is a bit too plain, which neither makes readers unable to read nor fully arouses readers' interest in reading. There are a lot of pitfalls, the protagonist's power has not yet been completely mastered by her, the purpose of the Praise Club's data observation of the protagonist has not been revealed, and 100,000 words is still a bit too little. In terms of setting, the characters currently have no OOC, and there is no content that subverts the world view, making it comfortable for readers to read. It can be regarded as a first-class second-generation novel. In terms of emotional tension, it is still not done well enough to mobilize the emotional resonance of the readers. Perhaps because the protagonist is too invincible, there is nothing in the plot to mobilize the emotional climax of the readers. I will continue to observe this problem (if I can still maintain interest in reading this book) The relationship between the characters is well established and does not make the reader feel abrupt, which is a plus. The number of chapters is small, but the quality is very good. One chapter can have 4,000 words, which is equivalent to twice the number of ordinary chapters. This is another plus point. Summary: So far, up to Chapter 23, I feel that it is readable and readable, but not attractive to read. The number of chapters is too small, which leads to the subsequent accuracy of this evaluation. However, this book is currently considered a medium cup of super cups in Tomato. The overall evaluation is 4 and a half stars. On this basis, half a star will be cut off for a conservative estimate. Note: The plot speed is too fast, which may lead to a significant decrease in the quality of subsequent content. This will test the author's plot editing ability based on the world view. It is recommended to edit based on the forces that are currently emerging, so as to avoid a sudden force popping up and causing a significant decrease in readers' interest in the book. The author must also control the speed of the subsequent plot. Too much procrastination will also lead to a decrease in the reader's interest in reading. [Data archived] [Evaluation ends] [No text below]

The overall effect is very good, and the writing style is not too vernacular. It is very rare to be able to write such a good book among fans, and there are relatively few pitfalls, but it also needs to be completed at a faster pace. In short, it is very rare. In terms of reading experience, the rhythm of the plot is well controlled, and the ups and downs of the plot are small. For some people who like excitement, it is difficult to grasp, but for the subsequent plot, it can give it greater room for development. It won't be like other authors who pace the story too fast in the front, and if the plot has big ups and downs, the second half of the plot will collapse directly. The plot of daily life is also very heart-warming (I found it very good and liked it.) However, if you write too many plots of daily life, it will be difficult to capture the readers. This is one of the reasons. The relationship between the characters is also well sorted out. The current OOC performance is very slight, and there is no plot collapse or reversal of the world view. Generally speaking, the writing style is good, and it is a book with great potential. If you keep writing at this pace, the rating will basically be stable at around 8.4, And it is even possible to reach 9 or so.

The plot is not that complicated, and this aspect makes it feel like it surpasses many books.

Barely eating fine chaff. It's very interesting. Shuo Yue is a character that really pokes fun at me. He's very elegant, humorous but not pretentious, and his thoughts on the situation are also very insightful. First of all, let's make it clear that this is a cool novel, and the protagonist's strength is above that of Xu Shou. He is also more decisive in handling problems and does not procrastinate. Of course, I am a little dissatisfied with the latest chapters (the chapter about calligraphy around Chapter 23). It is true that Shuo Yue can have his own ambitions and want to be famous, but the routine is a bit too classic, just like the dragon king with a crooked mouth. The emotions of the surrounding audience are a bit abrupt, and the design is a bit awkward. The key is that as far as Shuo Yue's character is concerned, it should be The appearance and behavior are arrogant and cold, but the heart is a bit sullen, and at the same time, there is a sense of loneliness as a stranger, and the curse forces Shuo Yue to play a cold persona, which makes Shuo Yue suffer from this kind of struggle. The price of the power of the curse is the secondary shaping of personality, but since the first taming, the limitations of the curse's power seem to have been forgotten. In these chapters, I always feel that the author is a little over-written and emotionally confused. One moment he is ambitious and splashing with ink, another moment he is having fun with Ling, and another moment he is drinking alone in the apartment and lamenting the lack of family. There is a lack of emotional coordination, as if the curse no longer exists. Is it possible to consider modifying the settings to make the requirements of the curse less stringent to avoid being spoiled by the settings. To sum up, five stars for writing, four stars for emotion, and four stars for plot. After averaging, I will round it up to four stars.

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It's a book worth reading. The protagonist is decisive in killing and not brainless. His combat power should be the highest at the moment. The daily life is not bad. The main tasks can be pushed slower. You can slowly introduce the life story of the protagonist. Anyway, it is overall good-looking. Author, answer me. I will consider finishing it after a million dollars, okay? 😄😄😄

It's good to watch, and I enjoyed watching the battles. Just watch Hoshimiya's stern cousin - she has a bottom line and is measured, not killing indiscriminately, but there are also a lot of daily emotional dramas. Generally speaking, the battle scenes are good to watch, and the daily sweet scenes are also good to watch. Only in this way can we call it healthy!

Well, the writing style is interesting. Among a bunch of fan authors, it can be regarded as the best. However, some chapters are so embarrassing that I twisted into maggots when I was sleeping in bed. Hahahaha, but it's not bad. It can be a bit more enjoyable. And there are many fighting parts, and the details are all imitations. It's blurry, but it does not seem to be procrastinating. For daily life, to be honest, I actually prefer the relationship between the characters instead of choosing to practice calligraphy. The poem is not bad. In summary, the protagonist is a bit literary and a bit awkward, but after throwing away these two points, it doesn't matter. It's good

Everyone is looking at me, I am 3 weeks old! The author's 3 (bushi) books I have read! Letter 5 letter 5, the author is a 0, 336 updates a day! I won't brag with you! Trust me! ✋🏼😭✋🏼 Let me add another comment. I think I was a little hasty before. Now I will modify a few sentences of the evaluation. Since I need to modify a few sentences, I will modify a few sentences (in short, I forgot the beginning and the end. I want to read "Oh ~"!)

Excellent and delicious food story, the author's second book is obviously much better than the previous one in terms of plot control, etc., But I think there is still a small problem with the protagonist's character. The protagonist is well written and has high combat power. I personally think the author has written the protagonist too perfectly, not like a living person with fireworks (although it is not much better than a living person), which leads to many times I can't tell which one is the real one. The protagonist, who is an ordinary person from another world or the mask he wears? Although the author also used a certain amount of pen and ink to describe it, I personally feel that the protagonist's character is still not well displayed, and the system only acts as a narration in the article, which makes people feel a bit out of place. However, the author's writing style is also making progress visible to the naked eye. Finally, I wish the author a happy day and never die [Blow kiss]

The storyline is very good and the interpersonal relationships are very clear [Like]

It's okay, but this kind of writing isn't very suitable for a show-off plot. Anyway, I just skipped it when I saw it. It was too embarrassing. In addition, it would be nice to have more daily routines, and when the protagonist has to eat. Otherwise it's pretty good, I quite enjoyed watching it.

As expected of a guy who has 500,000 words to practice on his previous work [laughing] Still invincible, Yujie + Lily Tie Tie, pay more attention to the portrayal of emotional lines than the previous work, and have a higher degree of integration with the world view of Zero Zone, especially the Tie Tie plot with Ling, the two people slowly coming together is really delicate [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] In addition, there is also an independent plot line for the protagonist, which is not mindless and follows the main plot, but also provides an in-depth explanation of the main plot, and even a major change [smile] It is really good-looking, with almost no logical loopholes [heartfelt] The most important thing is that one chapter only contains 4,000 words, and sometimes there are double updates of 8,000 words! It has never been updated since uploading [laughs] All in all, the reviews are not bad for this one, but I am really honored to be able to get everyone into this quality work! [Send heart][Send heart]

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4s and A1s would have killed him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's battle with Huaguoshan A sentence said by 108 Monkeys: "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your Brother Liang" shows Zhuge Liang's indignation towards the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, clear system, many foreshadowing fighting scenes that make you feel like you are there, and the character description is very good! This book is very well written. Good, the plot is touching, the ending is unexpected, the content is resonant and thought-provoking, the plot is interesting, the characters are vivid, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like immersive, the author's depiction of people's hearts is meticulous, especially when describing Calabash Q to save Transformer Q when Sun Wukong The inner excitement and fear are vividly expressed. I am the only one who thinks that Wu Song is right to kill Qiao Feng Q? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji from Q, how could Yang Guo's hand be cut off by Guan Yu? Zhuge Liang wouldn't have gone to Siguo Cliff to fight a hot battle with Linghu Chong Q, etc. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting

It's a great read, but I don't think I've read the last one, but ⭐Ah, the legendary writer⭐ ❤️The gospel official of words❤️ 💔How long will it take for you to update a new chapter💔 📚Relive history! 📚 🌊Cross the ocean of text and data traffic🌊 ❤️Bring the latest updates right in front of my eyes❤️ 🤫The process of reading your text🤫 🎓Always reminds me of the happy time when I was a teenager studying🎓 🤲🏻If there is a one in ten thousand chance, you can update ten chapters a day🤲🏻 🥰My victory will be certain🥰 🥵In the name of readers, I will invite you to step into the prison of explosive updates🥵

It's quite interesting, daily writing, I read it in one go😋👍👍👍, I read several books, among the five or six Hoshimiya books, the second one, the others have more or less problems, this one is very, very smooth, it's already very nb

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There was a slight glitch at the beginning, maybe because the author hasn't let go yet, but it will get better after a few chapters. The writing is good, the plot is novel and not cliched, the pace is just right and not too verbose, and the author has his own ingenuity. I often read these on a daily basis, but I just love reading them. It looks very comfortable so far, but the number of chapters is a bit short.

The writing style is very good, and it is considered quite good among the fanfics I have read. It also has its own unique understanding of human nature. But every time I see someone reading Li Bai's poems to kill someone, I feel embarrassed like I am picking my feet. In reality, it is considered a social death, which affects the perception a bit. I hope that some of this content can be reduced.

Elegant, so elegant. Although I have only read two or three chapters, I can clearly feel the difference from other novels of the same genre. Other novels just use Hoshimiya's skin and add powerful strength. There is no self-expression or personality reflection at all. This book is different. Just reading one or two chapters made me feel the unique charm of the protagonist. The reflection of the protagonist's own personality, summary: top quality👍

Actually, I have a suggestion. The main character has a lot of disturbing thoughts. I can imitate other novel types, eavesdrop on the thoughts, and give Hoshimiya or Rei a buff. I can't even imagine how interesting it would be to write like this [Thinking][Sending Hearts]

This is the first novel I have seen that combines Resident Evil with other games. Since Hank and Leon have appeared as prototypes, will there be Wesker elbowing Shuo Yue for seven minutes?

Suddenly I realized that I haven't posted a book review for so long [laughing] I read the author's last book, and then I was going to read this one, but found that I had already started reading it [shy] The emotional line of this book was a bit slow at the beginning, but the rest of it felt okay

Overall, it's pretty good, and it can be considered a masterpiece among Juezang's novels.

The writing is very good, and the time travel does not make you feel disconnected or disgusted. The characters behave like normal people. As someone who only watches romance, I enjoyed watching this one. Although there are not many posts at the beginning, the other plots also attracted me very much, and I didn't feel any obvious flaws even after watching it. All in all, it's very beautiful and a great fanfic ୧⍢⃝୨

🌟This novel really stood out to me✨, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the characters are three-dimensional and layered👏. Each chapter is like watching a movie, with a strong sense of immersion🎥. The author's writing style is smooth and natural, and the details are handled just right💡. After reading it, I felt happy and couldn't help but want to recommend it to more book friends📚. Strong Amway! 🎉

The image design of Shuo Yue is really very good, and it is also well integrated with the main plot. It does not blindly follow the main plot, there are additional expansion branches, and the most important thing--high praise [laughs]

It looks so good that I immediately sucked it in with an invincible thunder whirlwind and then immediately prompted for an update! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

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From the very beginning, the image of Hoshimi Sakusuki really struck a chord with me, and the subsequent plot was not sloppy at all, plus the mix of ancient texts made me feel a little excited. All in all, I highly recommend it.