Mystery: the Perfect One

Five stars are given to the author for his writing ability. Very good. Logically questionable. 1: Source Castle and Knowledge Wilderness are both the nine sources of matter. When Liu Zhou entered Source Castle, it was impossible for Zhou Mingrui not to notice it. Wouldn't two sefirot of the same level rub against each other? 2: The logic of "Lord of Mysteries" is extremely rigorous. Low error tolerance. Therefore, don't compare the plot, logic, and settings between high and low scores in fan fiction. 3: Liu Zhou has the Knowledge Wasteland Promotion Sequence 5 and actually wants to go to the third underground floor of the Church of Steam and Mechanics. What a joke [laughing and crying]. Zhou Mingrui went to the Goddess of the Night and the Goddess of the Night even saw it, because the financial backer was the Goddess of the Night. 4: Every era has the participation of the goddess of the night. The mysterious world is not a time-travel setting. Liu Zhou is a person from the parallel world. In the part about the God of Death's blasphemy card, it is said that Russell is waiting for Liu Zhou. It feels very strange. Russell, who is half dead and contaminated by foreign gods, does not have that ability. Although endorsed by the goddess of the night. 5: If Liu Zhou misleads Zhou Mingrui, will the goddess of the night be hammered? 6: For Secret Sequence 3 and above, there is a carrot and a pit. If Liu Zhou wants to become the pillar of the past, he needs two strong gods. In Sequence 2, you will have to do it with the God of Steam and Machinery. Summary: Very well written. Other fans don't write as well as you. Although others get 9 points, that's because they have already written something fresh. Mysterious fandom has made many changes and made many mistakes.

Yes, I haven't seen such a good best friend fanfic for a long time, but I would like to remind the author to delete the one introducing extraordinary paths as much as possible. That may lead to being blocked. Just post the specific content in the comment area.

I see that there are no problems now, it's a good mystery fanfic. Now I'm a little curious about whether Steam has discovered the existence of Elias. Adam, this is very reasonable. Although it is a bit unclear at the beginning, it is a "coincidence". Old Storm Pigeon still doesn't know. Now the protagonist has the dual aura of Knowledge Wilderness and Origin Castle. It is too conspicuous. Heihe should also know Elias through the aura of Origin Castle, but he doesn't know his attitude. Hmm... I took a look at Suhuan. It seems that neither Steam nor Tianshi want to be the old days. Steam won't give way directly in the future, right?

This is one of the better novels in Lord of Mysteries (✪▽✪). Now I am curious about how the protagonist will defeat the Hidden Sage when the series is zeroed out in the later stages.

I hope the author can keep the quality and pace it a little faster, because the few mystery books I read before failed in the middle of writing more than 100,000 words.

It's very interesting. I haven't seen Lord of Mysteries and I think it's very interesting.

It's rare to come across a mysterious fanfic that I like. It has its own story line and doesn't overly disrupt the original story line. I'm looking forward to the follow-up. Don't stop writing while taking a break.

Very interesting, come on the author, praise the fool! ! !

It's good to watch. It's the first time I've seen a mysterious fan-fiction protagonist being a pirate. It's very novel. I also like the character of Elias very much. I hope there will be more Tarot Society plots in the future. The author has to work hard!

Does the author make amends for his regrets? Is there a female protagonist? Do you need to use pressure points?

Pretty good, very beautiful

It was also compacted at the starting point

Ok ok ok

The structure is rigorous and it feels like reading the original work.

The overall rhythm is good, most of the plot is reasonable, but a small part is too fast. The main plot is currently less involved, and the update speed can be faster.

There's nothing interesting about what I've read so far. Come on, author, I finally found a book I want to read.

I've been looking for a lot of ghost and mystery fanfics, and this is the best one I've found. I hope the author can stick to it and finish it [smile]

Give encouragement after reading the author's chapter. The plot is still okay, and the writing has room for improvement.

The IP of Lord of Mysteries is worth 5 stars. Although I am a newcomer, the story is still very good. Please support me.

A good-looking Lord of Mystery fanfic from Tomato Novels

A good mysterious fanfic. Early independent development forces

It's pretty good. There's no big problem. It's gold in tomatoes. I don't understand why some people give it a low star rating (but it would be better if the story related to the Tarot Society takes up a larger proportion). Also, the lack of people may be a problem with the platform. After all, many books that I read a year ago have been recommended to my homepage (Torrent Recommendation List) (doge) Come on!

It's an excellent mystery fanfic. Although it has some minor flaws, it can be considered the first echelon in Tomato. Strong recommendation.

Five stars for this, please don't abandon the book.

Awesome, well written

Very well written.

This book is quite good, I feel good about it, but when I saw more than 20 pictures, it didn't suit me.

Another way to open the Lord of Mysteries

I don't really want to give it five stars, but I'll give it anyway! After all, Tomato doesn't have many secret fans to encourage him.

It's very interesting, but the prelude is a bit long, and the Tarot session doesn't appear until more than 30 chapters [Love]