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Explore more →Naruto Has No Masterpieces (Except Dave, Artist, Sister Juan's, and Divine Land)
Anime Fanfics Rated 9 or Above
The Hokage Has No More Masterpieces to Argue With.
A New Fanfic That Really Brings Out the Content of Naruto and Has Excellent Writing Style ~
Is there any new Naruto fanfic on Tomato that has novel, strange, surprising content, smooth writing and connotative content? If the number of words is less than 30w, please avoid it~Please give me some advice~
Which Fanfic Is the Most Surprising to People Today? It Still Looks Like a Second Drama After Watching It
The Main Character of Naruto Is a Girl.
Naruto heroine
Asking for Naruto, Uchiha, the Main Character Is a Girl
At Present, There Is No Masterpiece in Naruto Acting. If You Are Not Convinced, Come and Argue!
It's True That Naruto Is Getting Worse with Each Passing Year, so We Can Only Use the Previous Books to Compare.
I want to read a book similar to "Naruto: Beginning with the Twin Kamui".
Looking for High-Quality Naruto Stories
Naruto + Heartthrob, Please Recommend🥺🥺
Heartthrob of Japanese Comics and Humanities
The Prince of Tennis, Kuroko's Basketball, The Spirit of the Halberd Eater...
Looking for Naruto, Someone with a Score of Nine or Above 😘
Is There Anything Particularly Abstract and Funny? Naruto
I want to read a book like "Naruto: This Naruto is a bit abstract".
Come up with Some Quality Fanfics, There Are No Requirements. I've Been Eating Too Many Defenses Lately.
Anime fans and game fans are all OK and the quality must be good. Please give me some recommendations.
Time Travel Naruto ➕ Otome ➕ Heartthrob ➕ Don't Want Male to Female, Want Female
Naruto CP Kakashi! ! ! ! ! ! Type you want to watch: CP Kakashi
If You Like Watching Uchiha, Come and Take a Look.
I want to read a book similar to "I, Uchiha, rise from the coffin (Hokage has no regrets)". They are all novels with a rating of 8.0 Or above.
Qiu Is Orochimaru's Apprentice, but He Has a Good Relationship with Orochimaru.
It must be Orochimaru's apprentice, and the relationship is very good.
Please Write a Naruto Ghost Story! ! (Male and Female!)
I want to read a book similar to "Naruto: Kamui and the Adaptation of High School Girls".
The Heartthrob of Naruto, Everyone Is Interested in It, Regardless of Gender.
Who Understands the Story of Naruto's Male Ghost? . Please Recommend
I want to read a book like "Naruto: I conquered the entire ninja world by dreaming".
The Heart-Throb Female Protagonist of Naruto, No Need to Change from Male to Female, All the Characters Are Single Arrow Female Protagonists
I don't want a man to change into a woman, I don't want a man to change into a woman, I don't want a man to change into a woman, I really don't, I hope you can respect my thoughts, please.
Please Give Naruto Heartthrob a Single Arrow for All Members, No Men Wearing Women.
I want to read a book similar to "Inspirational I, Living in the Hokage, Became White Moonlight".






























































































The heroine has a very good character, and there is a slight melancholy throughout the story. Let Mike accompany her to go further. She is a fish in the ninja world anyway, and let her stop living in such a miserable life. I hope that he who makes dumplings will have a happy ending.
The heroine's character is very good, and her character is very complementary, just like a real person. Xiaoqing Eri is a child who attaches great importance to love and justice, works hard, is strong, and has a delicate mind (although there is a slight feeling of melancholy in the early stage, but it will be very sweet in the later stage, and the future is promising) It can be seen that the author did not write the character of the heroine for interaction. She remembers her friends' preferences (for example, when she saw the modern desserts written in the newspaper, she thought of taking Lin with her, because Lin has always liked these) and will also sew patches on her friends' sleeves. But sometimes she shows a bit of evil intentions like a kitten (for example, "I like Obito the most" which makes Obito blush, although Eri is just teasing him) A little more daily (but I just like Tiantian Meow Meow Meow Meow Meow). Sweet Happiness is the best. It feels a bit like a group portrait (it's quite beautiful, it feels like a trial of youthful relationships? I don't know how to describe it) but I still like to see Kakashi and Eri getting along😋 The author promises no knife, 🉑 feel free to read it
From the first book, the author's emotional descriptions are really delicate. Whether it is the embarrassment of poverty or self-esteem, he really handles it very well. The daily interactions are also very harmonious and warm... Just stay happy like this, Xiao Eri
I like this genre. It is one of the few books that I can read on Tomato. It doesn't have that embarrassing description of Mary Sue Nv Ning. I really like this kind of delicate writing with a little bit of sadness and truth. Please, the author, please don't rest and get tired. I need to work harder and harder to finish writing! ! !
530,000 Words are being serialized. I would give this novel the highest praise for fan fiction - it's like reading a new novel. The plot is basically original (probably because it is a daily novel), and the characters are all very lovable. The heroine is the same age as Rin, Obito, and Kakashi. She started writing when she was five years old. Kushina is currently pregnant. Because of the butterfly effect (the heroine is strong enough and goes into the Anbu to perform the mission), White Fang survived (I don't know which mission did not fail, but White Fang survived anyway); Obito survived the bridge bombing mission and did not become black. I fed Naruto a mouthful of candy in the middle, and I was very satisfied. It's great that the heroine has no bloodline limits, she just grew up as a pure genius and is now a Jinchuuriki. Although he is very strong, he always plays high-end games, and he doesn't have the heart to be strong (meaning he thinks of running away as soon as he sees a crowd), so he often fails to beat him. The shortcomings are obvious and it is being serialized. I really want to read the follow-up, because the author is very gentle, and the plot will be as complete as possible. At the same time, the writing is strong and will not make me feel abrupt, so it should be sweet yet sharp. There are many Shura fields.
It's really good to read... Everyone is cute... I really like everyone's warm daily life and a little bit of ambiguity. It's one of my favorite articles so far. The plot is also very well written, and it's not OOC and doesn't fall apart. I just don't know if Rin will be pinched in the future... If the original plot is followed, will Obito turn black? I feel that if there is no chance, Eri might be accidentally injured and killed? I'm also looking forward to the sticky, ambiguous and confrontational looks when you grow up. [Send heart][Send heart]
Regarding Eri's inner narration, I feel it is very real. It is not a real ice cube and it can also laugh. I really like how he gets along with Obito, Rin, and Kakashi. Kakashi's unrequited love is so cool. The first person is particularly good, super vivid, easy to understand, and I can read it to the end in one go. The author's update speed is also pretty good. Highly recommended.
The emotions are delicate and can make people sympathize with each other, and the flow is smooth and the daily life is consistent with the plot. I really like the clips of Kakashi x the heroine written by the author. Instead, smart people have a two-way flutter where they can't see each other's thoughts clearly. In addition, is the author a bit too obito? Every time he gets to Obito, his style of painting changes. He writes Obito into a fragrant and soft little cake, which is really unbearable. As a result, when Obito is alone with the heroine, I fast forward like crazy. Getting along with Orochimaru's caring and lonely old man is more normal than with Obito.
This book definitely deserves a score of 9 or above, and I think it can get a score of 9.5. The writing is smooth and plain, and the plot arrangement and character logic are also very reasonable. I can't help but give a rating to support the author. I really like this down-to-earth and warm daily life and the mature and steady heroine.
The writing and emotional scenes I have watched on Tomato so far are very, very good. Every character interaction is written with great feeling. The emotional scenes with Tsubasa and Kakashi are very delicious. Personally, I think it is a hit. The protagonist's personality is also very cute, lovable and cold-faced? And there is a very good point. Every time when the heroine starts to feel a little weak, there is a highlight plot of the heroine, which will not keep the protagonist in a state of internal friction and blushing. It is very good at neutralizing it. Because I prefer strong and controlling protagonists, I will feel uncomfortable watching the protagonist if it is too weak. But in this book, the heroine may seem pitiful, but she is actually very strong and brave. The characters are well written and the plot is well handled. The redemption line is too sweet. Even if it is tortured later, it will definitely be enjoyable to watch. And according to the author, he Well, the combination of knife and sugar is the best at the end, it looks good!
God, I never fell in love with Kakashi and Obito, I don't even know Genma, I didn't expect that! Unexpectedly! I can really love it! It's so delicious, all Eri! And Lin! Really, invincible angel, oh my God! Lin is such a goddess! All Eri! How could Kakashi and Obito be so homely! Can cook! The heroine really studied a lot of regrets! That's right! Orochimaru is good too! I was so excited that I stayed up late to read it! So pretty! Dada is Dada, Dada is a goddess!
The heroine's character is well developed, and her self-esteem and slight melancholy are all shown. It fits the title of the book very well. The whole film has delicate emotions, and there is no sense of violation in the first person. It is very natural and super beautiful.
So pretty! The author's writing style is delicate, biased toward daily life, and has a touch of gentleness. Xiao Qinghui's character design is also very three-dimensional, and the emotional lines have a sense of youthfulness of an innocent boy and girl [blowing kiss]. Those who love reading heart-warming novels, hurry up and join in! ! The rating is definitely low, don't be dissuaded by the rating❗❗ Why is the rating so low…
Every book is very good, starting from the first one. If you take a closer look at the character of Eri Baby, it is simply wonderful, a good and tough boy. I hope the author will treat the heroine's baby better when he opens a new book [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying] @ Big, please update more, it really whets my appetite. I will go to school in two days, I want to see enough, please Approval from the king [learned] [you savor] Super nice.
Each of the teacher's novels is very interesting, and I can never tire of reading it. The writing style is also very good, and the details of the characters are clearly depicted, which makes people feel very comfortable. The heroine in the novel can also be clearly seen as a person with a bit of bad taste and a little low self-esteem. It is also very comfortable to see the heroine and him get along with each other. It is a very daily feeling. I look forward to the exciting plot in the future! ! ! ! Come on, author, come on, come on, I'm optimistic about you>-<heehee [salute][salute]
It's very beautiful and delicate. It doesn't show off its own sense of protagonist. It just integrates the heroine into the world and lives in the same world. Because it's so real, each character doesn't change the original personality very abruptly. It's just that she truly discovered that there is such a girl beside her. Zi is living with them. The author's writing style is also very good. There are no gorgeous words, but the daily language can really see the small details and happiness of life, and it is a little sad. Because we are just fans, some characters are born to die, and such ordinary and happy days are just the beginning.
It's super beautiful. I've always liked this kind of narrative writing style that has a touch of death and line drawings. I didn't expect to find it at first. There are so few authors writing this style of fan fiction, so I was planning to write it myself. But I found this treasured author on Tomato. He completely captured the feeling I wanted. His writing style is gentle and delicate. It's amazing.
Okay, this author is also writing about awesome Foklas, okay, I just told my whole family to call me to resign, to drop out of school, and to read this novel full-time at home, okay, I am Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my depressed child is no longer OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I want to eat 200 servings of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao helped me generate the author's bikini photos, and Doubao told me tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, and os finally allowed me to eat something delicious. The author's daily updates are also very fast. It must be highly praised and supported. It is very well written. It's awesome, okay. I directly wish the author that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty-six, seven seven forty-nine. I'm so afraid that the author will post updates. Isn't that what I'm afraid of? Do you dare to post updates? I heard that an author suddenly posted more than 600 posts and won 5 million in the lottery. The author is awesome. Apache Apache.
There are very few comments about this book... Because after reading it, everyone is absorbed in the world in the book. This world is very beautiful, just like watching a movie, quiet, very good, very good. There are very few words in this book. I read it in one night. I couldn't bear to rush for more updates. It's like facing a flower and just want it to bloom quietly rather than forcefully break the bud stage. I have read a lot of Naruto fanfics: Zhixue, Kaleidoscope High School Girl, Flower Field... Many, many, all have female protagonists, but this one is the only one that I am very surprised about. It mainly focuses on literary and dramatic emotions, and the story description is very delicate without losing the rhythm. To be honest, I didn't pay much attention to it before watching it, but after watching it... It really felt like I had discovered a treasure. It's amazing how strong the ability to empathize. I've read the book "Hua Tian" before and that one is "Knife for the Sake of the Knife". I was shocked to read this one...
I like this setting very much. I also like the character of the heroine. Friendship and love are expressed very well. The food here is really delicious. I just have to wait for the update, but the author updates it very quickly. The food is good enough [Adoration]
Xiaoqing Eri is very real but not weak at all. In the early days when she was poor and could only eat rice in water, she would refuse Rin's dinner invitation because of her pride. She would work hard to express herself in order to survive. She would have a normal heartbeat but be more determined about her future path. She would feel confused because of Kakashi's talent but it would only make her heart stronger. She would give up and collapse because of her blood but would not lose her courage and confidence. She would love her parents but would not indulge in the false happiness of illusion. From my point of view, this article is more of a daily story. There are many warm daily stories. There is a cold-faced and cute feeling in the paintings. It is miserable in the early stage but will gradually get better. I have a good relationship with the Minato couple. Whether it is BG or GL, single arrows without CP (note: there are confessions and the heroine's normal liking for people when she was a child) can be satisfied. Later, we went to the world where Minato and his wife were married, Nohara Rin passed away, Kakashi joined ANBU, and Naruto still existed. The heroine of the original world also joined ANBU If you haven't watched Naruto, this book is very delicious. ! ! ! Lightning protection: The author's settings for the Ninja School are private! If you don't like it, you can quit. Don't scold the author (۶ꈨຶꎁꈨຶ )۶ It's delicious, I eat it in seconds, the author's recent updates are very stable [Love] Falling in love with Xiaoqing Eri is human nature [Admiration] [Love] No one can refuse Eri!
The author writes with very delicate emotions, and in the early stages there is always a touch of sadness in the article. When describing the protagonist's (early stage) poverty (warm reminder: the protagonist's parents are both dead), he wrote the most sad/melancholy words in a plain tone. It's more daily. Now the protagonist has a lot of friends *^_^* The protagonist is now a tsundere kitty occasionally (*/∇\*) and will do some naughty things, such as: teasing Obito The transformation of the protagonist involves an important character Lin. Eri's life is in tatters, and Lin's life is in tatters. Lin changes the protagonist's life little by little, making the protagonist's life no longer cold and lonely. The protagonist (Eri) in the early stage is kind of light and melancholy. Now the tsundere kitty will line up for Lin because she wants to eat the limited daifuku, and do it to her with an innocent and tsundere face. This article is all. All adheres to the principle that the more lovers you have, the more impressive you will be. So this article is delicious, including the one with Lin (I love this, please let the author interact more (ᐡ ɞ̴̶̷ . ɞ̴̶̷ ᐡ)), The one with Obito, and Kakashi, etc. I hope the author will be happy and healthy every day.
There is a slight bitterness in the beginning of the book. Later, Eri gradually feels a slight sense of happiness in the company of her friends and teachers. She is not a completely cold person, and she will occasionally smile when playing. I like the author's writing style very much, and I support this book very much.
A growth-oriented heroine. If you like the aloof type, you can avoid lightning. Thank you.
Good-looking and good-looking. A truly good book is one that makes readers feel the same way. Very well written. Very detailed, very delicate. The characters are quite three-dimensional. It's a book well worth reading. VO
The author knows how to make trade-offs, skipping lengthy and repetitive upgrade chronicles, and not piling up training details. He only intuitively shows the protagonist's different aura. The rhythm is clean and neat, and the look and feel is particularly comfortable. He abandons clichéd descriptions of training and upgrading, and omits complicated descriptions. The process of becoming stronger, the results are used to reflect the growth of the protagonist, the narrative is concise and not procrastinating, and the reading experience is excellent [Like] The description of the image and personality of the protagonist becomes more and more three-dimensional later on, and the daily life in the early stage is also very unobtrusive. Many interesting plots are hidden in the daily life.
The description of this article is very delicate. It ranks first in my heart with the one I followed in the past two years (I asked you to kill Sasuke and you become a succubus?). ! ! ! ! , It's great to be able to find such a delicately described article. I have never written a book review before. I give this book the first five stars. The emotional line and the main line are very harmonious, and the light daily life is very reassuring, Obito. . . Shigeo's praise...😌,, Hate Hai Qingtian Ye Hao, and Nagato's ah ah ah ah ah. So delicious. . . . . 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋, Goddess I love you.
Author, please update quickly! When can I get to Xiaodi! ! ! I want to see Xiao Di [shy], so let's summarize the ones who have interacted with the heroine so far: Kakashi, Obito, Shiranui Genma, Kirabi, and Scorpion. If I remember correctly, that's probably it. It's very beautiful! ! ! Finally, I have a request, I want a darkened version of Obito [shy]
Looks good! It's the kind of ups and downs, with emotional lines, and it's not artificial saccharine. It's the kind of writing that's very innocent, but not very innocent, just very natural, and it describes emotions very well. You can see
The writing style is great... I really like the light sourness. The description of some scenes is like reading prose. It was a little bitter at first, but then it got better and better. The protagonist is also very charming. I like this genre very much. I also like the plot of going to another world and Oobito at that time. It's so confrontational and delicious.