Naruto: Asura Chose Me, Naruto Defected, and I Stayed to Protect the Village

The topic selection angle is very novel, and the content is not bad. There are no big poisonous points. The writing is quite delicate, but the punctuation is a bit messy. Some parts read like AI. I don't know whether it is AI writing or for auxiliary purposes. However, the overall look is still very good. Come on, don't cut the book.

They are all very good, but this one star is only for punctuation marks. Some words are not used, and some words are used, but only half of them are used, and the other half of the words are still placed there alone.

The book is not bad, except for the messy punctuation. There is nothing too tiring. The heroine hopes that Sakura, Hinata and Ino will write it. Sakura has no one to write it, but she is not bad at all. The follow-up medical ninja emotional line will be easy to write.

It's really good, very original and not watery. But it feels like it's for the development of the plot, and some things feel like they're left to be written later. For example, after having a complete heart-to-heart with Naruto, Sasuke's strength has grown too slowly, and it seems that he will have to find Orochimaru like in the original work. Although as the protagonist Asura, there is no problem in connecting Shisui's eyes, but I feel that Shisui's eyes will not be of much help to him. Will the Gundam be opened with both eyes later? Reading the previous comments, I plan to open the Buddha Chakra with the original Asura.

I'm really looking forward to what developments the protagonist, Sasuke, and Naruto will have in the future! Will Nazuo both defect in the future? 😄 Let the protagonist chase them both. I'm a little curious 🤔

Just use the Eight-door Dunjia! Can opening the 4th door heal the injury? Can I still use a chakra scalpel?

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very nice ╔╗╔╝╚╝╚╗

When will there be ratings for ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა?

Because the protagonist's attributes are not all chakra attributes, one chakra is missing.