Something's Wrong with Master Leng

Two female protagonists➕Fantasy, master and apprentice, Luo Qingxue She was originally an orphan in the mortal world, but because of an innate sword heart, she was adopted as a direct descendant by Luo Qingxue, the aloof and peerless Immortal Lord of Red Kite in the Nine Heavens. Su Meng stepped on At the moment when Taixu Sword Qi Sect Ji Yuefeng's fate was quietly changing. The immortal master who is cold and ascetic but repeatedly breaks the precepts for his rebellious disciples × the disciple of Kenshin who appears to be respectful but actually seduces and controls him The growth of two strong forces and the ultimate pull, the bond between master and apprentice and two-way redemption "The summit is lonely and cold, and it's not easy for thousands of years. However, under the ice and snow, there is also an undercurrent of warmth. It only takes one person to break through the ice." "My way has been lonely for thousands of years. Fortunately, I have found one person who can cut off the illusion and comfort me forever." It's my first time writing a novel, I'm just a novice…please be merciful Σ( ° △ °|||) The realms are: Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Yuanying, spiritual transformation, Mahayana, and transcending tribulations. Please comment, the first volume is very poorly written, please don't complain (⋟⋞)