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I like the book very much. You can read it if you don't know DND. The track of Double Dragon Playing with Pearls is so cold that there are almost no such books (sad). It's really great to read such a thoughtful book. The characters are very three-dimensional and in place (the protagonist is naturally very cute, and the science dragon is full of fighting power). The writing also has a sense of immersion in Western fantasy. It's very good, but the sentences and layout can be optimized (for example, the character's perspective is too messy. This problem does not feel good after ten chapters). Yes. The sentences are long and difficult to read. They are obviously very thoughtful sentences. It would be a pity if they were lost due to sentences and layout.) At the current pace, it is a long story. After all, the two protagonists have almost no contact for more than ten chapters, but the writing method is really good (for example, the setting of love for mana leads to approaching the protagonist, and the golden dragon bloodline questions and aids). These details are really great, and it is comfortable and touching to read. I like it very much... So I'll update soon! !

No loss in investing! The two male protagonists in the Boots Men's Channel are also attracted by Benke✌🏻️🙄✌🏻️ Many people don't dare to say that the bl on female videos is actually just a romance novel 🙄, it's so boring to watch 🆘 u1s1, the writing style is very mature, it really doesn't feel like it's the first time [laughs]

🍅This is a rare DND novel. It's fun to read and I love to read it. There are no plot points at the moment. The delusional part may be embarrassing for some people, but I think it's good. I like this crazy feeling. As long as the character is not ruined, everything is easy to explain. There is also the classic setting of DND novels, including an introduction to the world view, introduction to spells, etc. It may be annoying to those who don't understand it, but I just like to read the setting. For me, the setting is greater than the plot. The writing style is more male-oriented, with a lot of jokes, but it doesn't look awkward, so it's just right. But a story with two male protagonists? At least there is no obvious love line yet. Now that I see it, I even suspect it is three ways (can it be said that the male protagonist and the other two have a cp feeling?) In the early stage, it has a college-style feel, and it can be regarded as a classic male channel fight and ranking plot. To be honest, it is a bit boring to have more than 30 chapters with young dragons fighting each other, but it is understandable that there is really nothing to write about in the atrium. I hope the plot of the hunt begins to be richer. Finally, I am irresponsible and guess that the author is a furry control😋

It looks good, but there are too few of them to enjoy. Fa Yelong is so elegant, he wants to pick up his well-behaved (?) Brother-in-law and rua [admire him] It's just that the uncle is so polluted. I hope Yongrong or a metal dragon will find out about his mental problem and try to improve his mental state. (At first, I thought he was a rare good dragon protagonist who is not irritable, irritable and seriously ill, but I didn't expect to show him a b evil god)

"Blue Dragon" is one of the best DND novels I have ever read. I highly recommend reading the original novel. It is so awesome💥💥💥. It's really unexpected that such an unpopular novel can have fans. To be honest, this book feels like it's too fast-paced due to normal fan issues. I'll make up for the settings, and there are a lot of quotes from the original text. The protagonist's personality is also quite strange (? I'm sorry for my personal opinion). But I really like this type, I want to knock them down and touch the dragon's tail [laughs]

I haven't read the original text, but the settings of color dragons and metal dragons are very familiar. Is "Blue Dragon" the original source? (Why are there still mysterious things?) Let's briefly talk about the more serious problems. 👇 The transformation of the protagonist is a bit stiff, and the transition from time traveler to psychosis is a bit sudden. (This is actually very minor, because some sense of absurdity is also conducive to the shaping of mental illness) The ratio between main and branch characteristics collapsed, and the daily descriptions diluted the main line. The density of information is not very well controlled, and the sense of participation in the chapters is very good, but some chapters are too dense and can make people feel tired. Comparing the dialogue sections in some chapters highlights the boredom. (Lord Vishdel is still chasing me) The expansion of the world view is so explosive, it reminds me of "Zhu Xian", maybe because it combines "Blue Dragon" and "Lord of Mysteries". (The mysterious setting is really complicated and cannot be explained clearly in one or two chapters) But it's actually pretty good overall, and the core conflict established at the beginning is pretty good. The portrayal of the group portraits is also very good, they all have independent personalities, and the supporting characters and tool men are clearly distinguished. Keep up the good work, author. It's not easy for every author, especially fan fiction authors. [Thinking][Laughing]

This is the first novel with a dnd background that I got into, but it was also the one that attracted me the most. After reading some others, I felt that this one was the most suitable for me. The first is character creation. Normally, I would read OOC immediately. However, I am not sure whether this book is OOC because I have not read the original novel. However, the characters are very vivid and gave me a strong sense of involvement (maybe he has the same personality as Xiao An, a bit convulsive). The daily life is also well written (unlike the daily life I wrote, which was written directly into a running account). Second is the plot, because I usually read novels casually and have no taboos (except for a few exceptions), but the plot is the core of attraction, so a good work should have both characters and plot, and be smooth and flowing. I hope this novel can last for a long time. The emotional line can be lengthened, which can enrich the image and ensure that the plot is attractive enough to make people want to read it. (Double push: Anjong, Anka) Finally, every time I see that yellow button, I feel panicked (urge me). I hope the author can continue to maintain a good attitude in creating, come on! ! ! (This is my first time writing a long review, I don't know if anyone will read it👀)

It's a good book. It's really rare to read a book with a dragon as the main character and a pair of Nan in Tomato. As a long-time Tomato reader (I think), I highly recommend it. It has great potential. The author is steady and updates it five times a week. I would like to support it with a book review.

Summary: The author has an extremely thorough understanding of the habits of fantasy magical creatures like dragons (the boss is awesome) It feels like having mushroom hair, drinking blood, and wearing hair and scales. The pure dnd style brings a unique flavor to this novel (lxl is suitable for reading) In the process of advancing the main plot A little fun in daily life also increases the emotional path It's no surprise that the relationship between Bertrion and Yongrong heats up. Before I read the original work, I thought this book was very good. I will read it when I have time. Objectively speaking, works with this orientation are destined to not have a wide audience (I personally like to watch everything, have a wide range of tastes, and have a high degree of acceptance) There will be many people who will have a relatively repulsive attitude towards this But a rating close to 8.0 Proves that his writing style is so mature that he can swim against the current and gain popularity (it's really good-looking) I have also tried to write a novel with more than 100,000 words by hand. Therefore, I can probably guess the author's struggles and hardships in the creative process (it's really uncomfortable to feel that you can't control the grand world framework when writing a long novel, and you don't have enough writing power to entrust your inner emotions to the words). As a first-time author, it's really commendable that I can still maintain quality. @Tv Don't underestimate yourself. It's not easy to insist on amateur creation after work. What's more, your writing is not bad. I read your comment carefully and I felt bad for a long time. There is no mention of suffering in half a word, but there is sadness between the lines. Finding a good job is not easy Only when you leave school will you be surprised to find yourself in a confused situation with no way out. This cd world I was full of enthusiasm while studying my major When I came out, I submitted my offer with confidence. 1 Copy? Two copies? It's so funny, what we want is graduate students, what we want is double first-class! Forget it Tell me about those bad reviews. The author himself did not promote deviant ideas Second, it does not violate the core values of this society. No loss of original flavor and no risk of causing disease (to society) If you still feel "responsive" and cannot swallow, you will have to regurgitate it after swallowing. That's entirely a matter of perception People just want to be honest and do what they like. Isn't it possible? (Of course, I don't advocate general promotion. It can satisfy the desires of a few gourmets and "internal distribution") That's all I am not qualified to comfort the author too much. After all, my life is a mess too Finally, I wish you all a happy new year All the best Family fun I also hope you will remember Persistence is destined to be extraordinary

The book is good, one of the few with no major flaws It's pretty, but A reminder before watching, for those book friends who just want to read the serious Dragons and Beasts series This book, emmm, is considered a male-male novel, so if you mind, you can skip it. Anyway, I see that this is the current trend. One more thing: You lxl are really...😰 But the look and feel is okay🤔🤓👍

Read carefully, read between the lines, it is very spiritual, the language is very good, the paper is full of smoke, the brushwork is delicate, the description is vivid, it is very tense, elegant and refined, not stained by dust, refreshing without losing the sense of humor and wit. The plot is exquisitely laid out, and the plot is full of foreshadowing. The character descriptions are even more vivid on the page. They are unparalleled in their splendor and have both spirit and form. Especially the description of actions and emotions is smooth and smooth. There is no axe, every detail is perfect. There are only a few strokes, and the artistic conception is fully revealed. The charm is long () I forgot about it in the middle, I forgot about it later. Anyway, I really like your mouth and teeth. You must have sex with me [I'm about to cry]

Not bad, not bad. It would be great if the author could update it ten times a day. At present, it seems a bit biased towards the group [thinking], which is a bit poisonous, but when I think about the possibility of players coming in the future, it is not considered poisonous. , After all, if you don't become stronger quickly, what will you do if you are used as material by players later? In short, based on the current plot, I can still get five stars. Some people may not like the protagonist's a bit dull look. After all, the protagonist has dragon madness, and there is an inexplicable thing in his head (suspected to be a golden finger). In this situation, the protagonist's fantasy goes straight to the brain, and daze replaces thinking. It is completely acceptable.

This is the second dragon novel that I have officially read after Time Dragon. The plot is OK and okay, but there are relatively few novels so far. Unfortunately, when will the author prepare to release more updates (not [ask for more updates])? How many 10,000 words will he prepare to finish? Looking forward to starting with one million [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]

No matter what, if the winter is burning, the winter will be burning. It's just that the chapters are a bit short and not enough to read. (๑⃙⃘´༥`๑⃙⃘) 𐂐Thank you so much to the author! ੭ ᐕ)੭ Support😁

A potential classic dragon novel, the writing is concise, but the protagonist is a bit autistic [laughing and crying]

It's hard to guess what the final departure of the two (three) male protagonists will be [laughs] Will my brother-in-law turn into a sandwich biscuit? [Laughing] Really looking forward to it

It's very beautiful, and I really like the character design of the main character! It can be said to be very friendly to dragon lovers, and the introduction in the book is also very friendly to people who have never been involved in novels!

Very nice, looking forward to more! ! ! (Although they are Boyong and the male protagonists, the card is so delicious, so you must torture the card mouth!)

Didn't the author say that Bertrian and Yongrong would know each other's identity as the other's time traveler later? I think it must be through words, but what can be known about the time traveler because of words, it must be poetry, so I have an inspiration - Bethlian looked at the crowd of dragons/humans all around and forced a group of their friends into a desperate situation, and the dragon's mouth couldn't help but tilted. , Said with emotion: "The morning is like blue silk and the evening is snow, right and wrong are all gone." When he said this, all kinds of things on the earth in his previous life suddenly appeared in front of his eyes. He was originally a Chinese resident on the earth, and by chance, he traveled to this bizarre world [laughing]

Come on, there is no one of the same type. If you stick to it, you will definitely become a good grass for a new track [blowing kiss] I have been following it for a long time, I think I started reading it when I was just writing two or three chapters. The plot is indeed getting better and better. I will give you a huge gift [love] [love] when it is finished.

Who is CP? After looking at it for a long time, I couldn't figure it out.

Great, it's a dragon. We are saved.

It's so embarrassing, a rare dragon-dragon CP, (fortunately the author is a dragon lover), it's so delicious, so now I'm going to breathe a sigh of relief: Ha!

It's so good-looking that I can't keep my mouth shut [laughs evilly]

Uncle All, this kind of persona is the most embarrassing [laughter]

Haochi, I eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat，😋😋😋

It's a normal dragon story but the style is somewhere between those with a mother and those without a dragon mother.

Oops, finally someone is actually writing about dragons. Most people write about dragons, which completely fails to reflect their image and leaves readers to make up their own minds. The dragons here in Sihasha are very delicious. It feels very much like a person wearing hair and wearing horns who drinks blood and drinks blood.

Nice! Although I hate Kabo, Yongbo is also very sweet!

Another good book, I'm looking forward to it. By the way, why are there so many new books on Tomato all of a sudden?