After I Died, They Became Yanderes and Came Looking for Me

Not bad, not bad. It's pretty good. It has the flavor of that book that I read for the first time in this genre. Although that book is eunuch, it's called "Help!" They Came Out of My Dreams to Catch Me" I hope this book will continue to do well and not be a eunuch! Don't be too short, it looks pretty

The writing is quite good, but the second life should first describe Tsukihime when she was a child, and then describe her growing up. Some people may not understand it at first, but after reading it later and then reading it again, the previous part is a bit repetitive.

The author's writing style is very good, and the whole article is very smooth to read. There are all the descriptions that should be included, and there are no dialogues with unclear meanings or "literary youth" filled with words. The protagonist Su Qianchen's identity is a corrector, and he must prevent or correct the disasters caused by the villain in every life. The plot of the novel is somewhat flawed and unreasonable. For example, the protagonist in the first life broke his arm to protect Xue Qingyue without any help from guards in the process, and the eldest prince was sent to the border for "plot-related" reasons after this incident. The plot of the first life is quite satisfactory, and there are no major problems. You can just ignore the minor problems. In terms of emotional portrayal, Xue Qingyue, the heroine of the first life, is a character who loves the protagonist infatuatedly, is cruel to targets and threats, strikes decisively, and is more emotional than rational. The second life can be regarded as finishing other tasks, not step-by-step (arrive-change target-leave). The opening of the second life is foggy, with a template for breaking off the engagement. The focus is on the relationship between Yue Ji and the guard Yue Chen. Through Yue Ji's taking away the resources of the second protagonist and the name she reported, the foreshadowing is laid. The protagonist joins the sect and becomes Yue Ji's younger brother. In short, the original Tsukihime died long ago, and the "Tsukihime" who became a saint is actually the sister adopted by the protagonist after the reboot. It's such a shame, the Tsukihime chapter was really good, and it revealed why the protagonist's first time traveling through Tsukihime was different. , The college feel in the third act is great.

In the second life, where did the real Yue Ji go? The cause and effect from the male protagonist's appearance was due to Xue Qingyue. The real Yue Ji passed away, and Zhang Xiaonan became Yue Ji. If Zhang Xiaonan who became Yue Ji was the one corrected by the male protagonist, then was the reason why Zhang Xiaonan's death was caused by the male protagonist? The story line in which the male protagonist does not appear, what happened to the real Yue Ji, how did Zhang Xiaonan become Yue Ji, and how did she become the Destroyer of Worlds. From the beginning to the end, the real Yue Ji only appeared as a container, with Xue Qingyue occupying the body and Zhang Xiaonan occupying the identity. The reason for both is because of the male protagonist, so the male protagonist is because of Zhang Xiaonan. Yes, the male protagonist is not here to correct, but to clean up the mess he made. Xue Qingyue took over Yue Ji's body, and she broke up with Zhang Xiaonan because of her possessiveness. Zhang Xiaonan's love turned into hatred, which caused you to be poisoned, and then died due to various reasons, and finally took over Yue Ji's identity and became the big villain in this world. This is quite logical. Then all this has nothing to do with the real Tsukihime, so how can we correct Tsukihime?

After reading the first heroine, it was very exciting. The main character is not the Virgin but there is a twist later on. I almost missed this book because of the ratings!!

It's really good. Don't look at the people and ratings in the comment section. Read this book carefully 💕

It's very well written. The reincarnation in the second life is really well written. It's so beautiful and I love to read it.

I have only read 15 chapters so far. My evaluation is very good. The author's writing is good, with an ancient beauty. The characterization is perfect and the details are very good. It is almost like watching anime. Yes, the atmosphere comes up immediately, but it seems to be a plot with multiple female protagonists. I would love it more if it was a single female protagonist. But everyone has their own preferences, and some also like multiple female protagonists. Why is such a good book such a low rating? I've been reading this for a long time, and I'm not bored at all. It's finally not just a passing novel. The author's writing style is really amazing. Especially when I found out that Zhang Xiaonan replaced "Yue Ji", I felt like I could see the blue sky from the fog. I was in a fog when I read the beginning of the second life. When the answer was revealed, I was shocked for a long time. The use of flashback writing is not unskilled. It is really a good article. I don't want to bury this article. Then again, the score is so low.

It doesn't seem to be possible at the moment

From what I've seen so far, the second volume is very, very well written. It's the kind of story where I couldn't understand the plot at all, but I felt like I suddenly understood it after reading it. Currently reading the third volume Damn it, I've finished reading it. It's very interesting. Author, please update it as soon as possible. The only drawback is that the yandere character of the heroine in the second chapter is not very obvious. This may be to highlight the different personalities of each heroine, but this is not inconsistent with the title.