Who Is Upset? Bai Yueguang Abuses Everything

I have been fond of fantasy since I was a child. I have been writing books in notebooks since junior high school. This is the first time that the author has published what he has written. It may not be satisfactory, but the author feels very happy. Literature is not the author's strong point, the writing style may not be good, and the plot may not be logical enough. I hope readers can make suggestions at will. Thank you all.

I want to know what happened to the people possessed by the heroine

Fast pace, twists and turns of the story

It's very interesting, I'm looking forward to the next plot

Maybe it's because I don't like to torture women, so I won't score points in the first world [awkward laugh]

It's okay, I'm a little uncomfortable with first person speaking

Redemption Bai Yueguang tortured everyone, but in the end he tortured me too [crying] [crying]

I really like this book. This is the first time I have the patience to read a first-person novel. It feels good.

It looks good, I love it, I like it, and I keep chasing it. If possible, I want the heroine to not love anyone in the follow-up, so that she can be beautiful alone [shy]

All I can say is that it was okay, but the protagonists were all too frustrated and the ending was not what I expected. It's a bit confusing in some places, but overall it's okay.

After reading the last chapter, I said:? ? ? Gone? [Cry][Cry][Cry] Not enough

Great author, will you publish another book of this type in the future? I really, really like this book. Keep up the good work, the author!

The writing is okay. I prefer the first world, which is smoother. The first world can be correct from any point of view. The heroine has sacrificed all the previous four worlds. Bai Yueguang is perfect.

I like it. The plot is very unique. It has a twist at the beginning, which is not bad. The characters are quite diverse and distinct, and cultivating immortals is really great!

Fast pace, I like it very much, the plot is good