Ancient fantasy + private design + brother has a baby + senior year + two male protagonists + HE can be eaten with confidence
In time travel (traveling), there will be a little forced plot in the middle and early stages, and there are not many scenes in the early stage from the main and subject perspectives.
Traveling through the cold and cold world, a gentle doctor is attacked by a stubborn wife-slave general
——
The first time he met the general, he was attracted to the doctor, and he was approached with various temptations to gain status.
"Doctor Yu, I will go on an expedition in a few days. Do you want to leave me a thought?" Shi Ying always lowered his head. He didn't even dare to raise his head to look at Yu Wenxian when he asked.
He was asking a knowing question.
The wrist that was collecting the bamboo slips trembled slightly. Yu Wenxian raised his eyes and looked at the top of Shi Ying's hair. There was some lingering in his eyes. He lowered his eyes and returned to calmness. He said: "Don't keep it."
Shi Ying's hands on the table were trembling slightly, and he suppressed the trembling in his voice, "Are you so ruthless?"
"General of Time"
Yu Wenxian suddenly called him, his eyes dimmed and he continued: "Even if I, Yu Wenxian, want to marry, I will not marry a powerful person, nor a businessman."
——
"Don't even think about leaving me or chasing me away. I will stick to you alone for the rest of my life."
——Timely.
"Like, love, and hate are all very complex yet simple emotions. I hate you for making me become like this, but I have to admit that I can't let you go."
——Yu Wenxian
Reader comments
I just came across this novel, and I feel that the author has written it well and is very successful in character creation, but it doesn't feel very popular. Sometimes it feels like the author is as cold as a computer, but he is also an author with a strong sense of life.
Although I don't know why the popularity of the teacher's novel is so low, and it seems to have been manipulated by Tomato, I still highly recommend it. The writing is really delicate and beautiful.
It's pretty good. In the early stage, I didn't know why the relationship between Yu and the protagonist was a little weird. Only when I saw it later did I realize that this was the case. Then if you don't like to watch forced movies but want to watch them, you can choose to watch this one. A little strong, but very sweet. Maximum. It's just that she ran away from the marriage in anger, and then caught him back and acted like a spoiled child again. The protagonist is a cold person in the early stage, but he becomes more humane after being together with Shi Ying for a long time. It fits my xp quite well
A very good work, the characters are very successfully created. Everyone looked like a three-dimensional real character, which made me cry and laugh at the same time in the middle of the night. Perhaps, in a certain time and space, such a story did happen. (I feel so sad for Wu Xinzhu)
"Everyone has his own destiny, and sometimes you can't force it." I am very grateful to the author for this book, which helped me let go of my obsessions.
Great work, author, I don't think the rating will stop at this score
Wow, this is a late review, I have always forgotten to review this book. (◔◡◔)
To be honest, when I first read this book, I was attracted by its subject matter, because for me, there is no clear boundary between sour writing, but this book made me understand what sour writing is. The extreme tension between the protagonists and the variety of emotional changes. Xianxian really made me feel that his emotional changes are the most diverse, but every change he makes is well-founded. The confusion of a person coming to a strange world, the fear of having children as a man, the pressure given to him by the ending of the original book and the deception of many people after coming into this world. I really feel sorry for Xianxian, but I also like Xianxian very much, because he is brave, because he is strong, and because he can better protect himself in this world. Is there any saying that men bleed without crying? Cry when you feel sad, it's no big deal. I also hope that Teacher can make more extra stories. I really want to see the ordinary daily life of Xianxian, Shiying and Baozi (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)
There is also Shi Ying. As a lover of forced love, I have always understood that forced love is that love is greater than force. It is because of love that there is possession. That's why I want to keep my lover in my arms. I really like the teacher's forced love. The end of forced love is letting go and giving freedom to your lover. Shi Ying was able to hold on for 7 years without looking for leisure, which was really beyond my expectation. It can also be seen that the teacher's character creation of Shiying is very good.
Finally, congratulations on the completion of the book ᖰ˃̶ ꇴ ˂̶ᖳ I have always believed that even if the book is finished, the stories of the two of them are still continuing to speak out, just in places we don't know (๑ت๑)
I hope teachers can update twice, one update a day is really not enough_(: D)∠)_
This article should only exist in heaven, how many times can I smell tomatoes [cry] [like]
The content is very good and the feeling is very soothing. It can be read whether it is fast-paced or slow-paced. The plot is relatively novel, but it has the feeling of a sour novel. Each character is well-shaped, including Wen Xian's inner monologue and entanglement. The emotional part of each person is well written. Overall, it is a treasure-level cold-text novel with a low score.
Summary: Good writing, good characters, great story
The writing is impeccable.
My wife's writing is really good. I followed the series all the way and I had a lot of mental journeys.
For many moments, I felt a little aggrieved by Wen Xianpei, a person who didn't understand his past and only wanted to get him. There were some slightly forced rushes in the early stages, but it was very interesting.
Later, I felt that the two of them should be together. Yu Wenxian was as good as a fairy, and his life was transparent, but a little too transparent. There should be someone to tie him, and be willing to be tied to him.
To be honest, I accepted that Yu Wenxian died so that he could return home (or in our imagination), but in the end it was so pitiful.
Fortunately, my wife is alive. As long as she is alive, they should always be entangled together. They are a match made in heaven! ! !
The supporting characters are also very lively.
Sang and Yu are completely opposite. I never expected that Yu, who first appeared as a friend by Yu Wenxian's side, would want to betray him in order to save his life before his death. However, Sang, who has always been controversial and unkind, was willing to die. It's so amazing about human nature.
This article is so beautiful, I am very satisfied with it. I looked at the high-scoring essays before, but they didn't last long, so I discarded them. Although I am rating this article, I am very pleased with it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (It must be praised. The content of the main character is very warm. I browsed it several times and finally clicked in. After three visits, I was in. It is very beautiful)
So beautiful, I will follow you forever!
A small suggestion: if the author writes a new book, he can try changing the chapter names, which will make it easier to read. The psychological content can be reduced a bit and some specific events added (because some psychology seems a bit abrupt to me when I read it). The content is very good and the characters are very charming. I am looking forward to the subsequent plots. Come on!
In fact, after reading it, I felt it was a bit unfair to Shi, and even thought Yu had gone too far: since I had already fallen in love with Shi and was willing to start a family, why would I seek death? However, I felt that if I could go home or continue fast-traveling tasks with the system after death, Wen Xian would give up without hesitation. Life in Yu's original world is so beautiful. Elders love and care for her, brothers and sisters respect each other, she has no worries about food and clothing, and she also has a career she likes. People like me who have a poor family background can't really understand Yu's choices. After all, I always take on the role of my own family, saying that if I stay in this world I don't want to go back, etc. But after thinking about it, I'm actually not qualified to say that. Yu has such a beautiful family, so why would he still stay here and cheat on each other? I think it's unfair because from God's perspective, I will definitely not let Yu down when I know it, but Yu doesn't know. Gong loves him, but his family loves him longer. When I think Yu should choose Gong who loves him, in fact, he will choose to love his family forever. It's just that I don't quite understand why Yu still chose to give up Shi and her children even after knowing that he would not be able to return home after death. Moreover, after being resurrected, he still didn't want to be with Shi at first and just wanted to take a look and leave. This is the point that I can't understand the most.
The emotions are very delicate. It is really a rare article in Tomato. The characterization is so good [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] Don't miss it
There is a feeling of flowing water [blowing kiss]
It's very interesting, but I haven't finished it yet. I didn't know there were only so many people.
I don't know why [laughs awkwardly]
This may or may not be my last novel of the holiday, I just say you can eat the fine chaff! The teacher's writing style is very good. Reading the whole novel made me feel heartbroken and wanted to laugh at the same time. I really can't say much about the writing style. I feel that many of the sentences written by the teacher are very beautiful (◍ ´꒳` ◍). The one that I remember the most is probably the one using the bird collection. Forgive me, I didn't catch it. I turned to the comments later in QWQ and saw someone explaining it. I was immediately reminded of it. Teacher is awesome! (Forgive me, my language skills are comparable to an adult banana. I want to write but can't express what I want to express😢)
It's good-looking, I like it very much, but it's so sour. I always feel sad when I watch it. It's really sad... I really like Yu Wenxian, he is really a very good person. The same goes for Shi Ying. Although he doesn't really feel what love is, he really loves Yu Wenxian.
I especially hope that Yu can go home, and I also hope that they can be together, as if they can all go back to modern times.
It's very good-looking. I really like the gentle yet stubborn male protagonist. The story has a gentle pace and a little sourness between the lines. Anyway, very beautiful
It's so good to watch, but when I looked through the catalog and saw the extras, I thought it was the end, but it turned out to be a tie-up, and I found out that it was a serialization, and it was still at night, who understands my pain! Thinking about sleeping after chasing [cover face][cover face][cover face]
It's very beautiful and the characters are very well created. This book is my second book review to recommend.
It's really beautiful! Although I thought their relationship was a bit inexplicable at first, it was really interesting to see later. Sometimes clumsy but straightforward, he will silently observe and protect Yu. Yu is duplicitous and says things he doesn't like, but he still has trouble in his heart. Best wishes to both babies 99
It is a very well-written book. The rating is not very high just because not many people read it now. As I read it, I felt that the person who loves the characters the most must be the author. It is slightly forced, but ultimately it is still love. It was quite sad to see Sang Yi and Yu die later.
It's pretty good, but I haven't watched it for a long time. Suddenly I saw an episode and a mother came up. I thought it was BG
It's very, very beautiful. Although it's a bit forced love at the front, it's not very sadistic, and it's very sweet at the back. Shi Ying should be very obedient to Yu Wenxian's words. I hope they can always be good.
It's so beautiful. ᖰ˃̶ ꇴ ˂̶ᖳ
Yes, I just need to improve my writing skills.
Quite novel and beautiful
Super super super beautiful
I don't know where everyone has gone. It's beautiful.
😍😍😍😍It's very interesting. This book has a person and a soul.
At first, I thought this book might not be very good, but after reading it, I felt it was so amazing. It's so good. I hope the author will be great. Update quickly.
I just came across this novel, and I feel that the author has written it well and is very successful in character creation, but it doesn't feel very popular. Sometimes it feels like the author is as cold as a computer, but he is also an author with a strong sense of life. Although I don't know why the popularity of the teacher's novel is so low, and it seems to have been manipulated by Tomato, I still highly recommend it. The writing is really delicate and beautiful.
It's pretty good. In the early stage, I didn't know why the relationship between Yu and the protagonist was a little weird. Only when I saw it later did I realize that this was the case. Then if you don't like to watch forced movies but want to watch them, you can choose to watch this one. A little strong, but very sweet. Maximum. It's just that she ran away from the marriage in anger, and then caught him back and acted like a spoiled child again. The protagonist is a cold person in the early stage, but he becomes more humane after being together with Shi Ying for a long time. It fits my xp quite well
A very good work, the characters are very successfully created. Everyone looked like a three-dimensional real character, which made me cry and laugh at the same time in the middle of the night. Perhaps, in a certain time and space, such a story did happen. (I feel so sad for Wu Xinzhu) "Everyone has his own destiny, and sometimes you can't force it." I am very grateful to the author for this book, which helped me let go of my obsessions. Great work, author, I don't think the rating will stop at this score
Wow, this is a late review, I have always forgotten to review this book. (◔◡◔) To be honest, when I first read this book, I was attracted by its subject matter, because for me, there is no clear boundary between sour writing, but this book made me understand what sour writing is. The extreme tension between the protagonists and the variety of emotional changes. Xianxian really made me feel that his emotional changes are the most diverse, but every change he makes is well-founded. The confusion of a person coming to a strange world, the fear of having children as a man, the pressure given to him by the ending of the original book and the deception of many people after coming into this world. I really feel sorry for Xianxian, but I also like Xianxian very much, because he is brave, because he is strong, and because he can better protect himself in this world. Is there any saying that men bleed without crying? Cry when you feel sad, it's no big deal. I also hope that Teacher can make more extra stories. I really want to see the ordinary daily life of Xianxian, Shiying and Baozi (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎) There is also Shi Ying. As a lover of forced love, I have always understood that forced love is that love is greater than force. It is because of love that there is possession. That's why I want to keep my lover in my arms. I really like the teacher's forced love. The end of forced love is letting go and giving freedom to your lover. Shi Ying was able to hold on for 7 years without looking for leisure, which was really beyond my expectation. It can also be seen that the teacher's character creation of Shiying is very good. Finally, congratulations on the completion of the book ᖰ˃̶ ꇴ ˂̶ᖳ I have always believed that even if the book is finished, the stories of the two of them are still continuing to speak out, just in places we don't know (๑ت๑) I hope teachers can update twice, one update a day is really not enough_(: D)∠)_
This article should only exist in heaven, how many times can I smell tomatoes [cry] [like]
The content is very good and the feeling is very soothing. It can be read whether it is fast-paced or slow-paced. The plot is relatively novel, but it has the feeling of a sour novel. Each character is well-shaped, including Wen Xian's inner monologue and entanglement. The emotional part of each person is well written. Overall, it is a treasure-level cold-text novel with a low score. Summary: Good writing, good characters, great story
The writing is impeccable. My wife's writing is really good. I followed the series all the way and I had a lot of mental journeys. For many moments, I felt a little aggrieved by Wen Xianpei, a person who didn't understand his past and only wanted to get him. There were some slightly forced rushes in the early stages, but it was very interesting. Later, I felt that the two of them should be together. Yu Wenxian was as good as a fairy, and his life was transparent, but a little too transparent. There should be someone to tie him, and be willing to be tied to him. To be honest, I accepted that Yu Wenxian died so that he could return home (or in our imagination), but in the end it was so pitiful. Fortunately, my wife is alive. As long as she is alive, they should always be entangled together. They are a match made in heaven! ! ! The supporting characters are also very lively. Sang and Yu are completely opposite. I never expected that Yu, who first appeared as a friend by Yu Wenxian's side, would want to betray him in order to save his life before his death. However, Sang, who has always been controversial and unkind, was willing to die. It's so amazing about human nature.
This article is so beautiful, I am very satisfied with it. I looked at the high-scoring essays before, but they didn't last long, so I discarded them. Although I am rating this article, I am very pleased with it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (It must be praised. The content of the main character is very warm. I browsed it several times and finally clicked in. After three visits, I was in. It is very beautiful)
So beautiful, I will follow you forever! A small suggestion: if the author writes a new book, he can try changing the chapter names, which will make it easier to read. The psychological content can be reduced a bit and some specific events added (because some psychology seems a bit abrupt to me when I read it). The content is very good and the characters are very charming. I am looking forward to the subsequent plots. Come on!
In fact, after reading it, I felt it was a bit unfair to Shi, and even thought Yu had gone too far: since I had already fallen in love with Shi and was willing to start a family, why would I seek death? However, I felt that if I could go home or continue fast-traveling tasks with the system after death, Wen Xian would give up without hesitation. Life in Yu's original world is so beautiful. Elders love and care for her, brothers and sisters respect each other, she has no worries about food and clothing, and she also has a career she likes. People like me who have a poor family background can't really understand Yu's choices. After all, I always take on the role of my own family, saying that if I stay in this world I don't want to go back, etc. But after thinking about it, I'm actually not qualified to say that. Yu has such a beautiful family, so why would he still stay here and cheat on each other? I think it's unfair because from God's perspective, I will definitely not let Yu down when I know it, but Yu doesn't know. Gong loves him, but his family loves him longer. When I think Yu should choose Gong who loves him, in fact, he will choose to love his family forever. It's just that I don't quite understand why Yu still chose to give up Shi and her children even after knowing that he would not be able to return home after death. Moreover, after being resurrected, he still didn't want to be with Shi at first and just wanted to take a look and leave. This is the point that I can't understand the most.
The emotions are very delicate. It is really a rare article in Tomato. The characterization is so good [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] Don't miss it
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There is a feeling of flowing water [blowing kiss]
It's very interesting, but I haven't finished it yet. I didn't know there were only so many people. I don't know why [laughs awkwardly]
This may or may not be my last novel of the holiday, I just say you can eat the fine chaff! The teacher's writing style is very good. Reading the whole novel made me feel heartbroken and wanted to laugh at the same time. I really can't say much about the writing style. I feel that many of the sentences written by the teacher are very beautiful (◍ ´꒳` ◍). The one that I remember the most is probably the one using the bird collection. Forgive me, I didn't catch it. I turned to the comments later in QWQ and saw someone explaining it. I was immediately reminded of it. Teacher is awesome! (Forgive me, my language skills are comparable to an adult banana. I want to write but can't express what I want to express😢)
It's good-looking, I like it very much, but it's so sour. I always feel sad when I watch it. It's really sad... I really like Yu Wenxian, he is really a very good person. The same goes for Shi Ying. Although he doesn't really feel what love is, he really loves Yu Wenxian. I especially hope that Yu can go home, and I also hope that they can be together, as if they can all go back to modern times.
It's very good-looking. I really like the gentle yet stubborn male protagonist. The story has a gentle pace and a little sourness between the lines. Anyway, very beautiful
It's so good to watch, but when I looked through the catalog and saw the extras, I thought it was the end, but it turned out to be a tie-up, and I found out that it was a serialization, and it was still at night, who understands my pain! Thinking about sleeping after chasing [cover face][cover face][cover face]
It's very beautiful and the characters are very well created. This book is my second book review to recommend.
It's really beautiful! Although I thought their relationship was a bit inexplicable at first, it was really interesting to see later. Sometimes clumsy but straightforward, he will silently observe and protect Yu. Yu is duplicitous and says things he doesn't like, but he still has trouble in his heart. Best wishes to both babies 99
It is a very well-written book. The rating is not very high just because not many people read it now. As I read it, I felt that the person who loves the characters the most must be the author. It is slightly forced, but ultimately it is still love. It was quite sad to see Sang Yi and Yu die later.
It's pretty good, but I haven't watched it for a long time. Suddenly I saw an episode and a mother came up. I thought it was BG
It's very, very beautiful. Although it's a bit forced love at the front, it's not very sadistic, and it's very sweet at the back. Shi Ying should be very obedient to Yu Wenxian's words. I hope they can always be good.
It's so beautiful. ᖰ˃̶ ꇴ ˂̶ᖳ
Yes, I just need to improve my writing skills.
Quite novel and beautiful
Super super super beautiful
I don't know where everyone has gone. It's beautiful.
😍😍😍😍It's very interesting. This book has a person and a soul.
At first, I thought this book might not be very good, but after reading it, I felt it was so amazing. It's so good. I hope the author will be great. Update quickly.