Tales From the Spearpoint

A gentleman is as gentle as jade. If he is too gentle, he will be weak, fake, slippery, and identical. Just like the writing style you use to describe the scene, you will be amazed the first time you see it, and you will be a little bored the second time, just like the ending of a dream. You can reduce the process of describing the scene and turn to describing the figure itself. Of course, it is not specific, but the overall temperament, because we are not AI and can meticulously imagine the things you describe. Example: Young people are always like this, pure love and pure hatred. I saw other emotions in the eyes of the old man, regret, helplessness, sadness... These complex emotions gathered together and combined into a message that he could not understand. He failed to measure the boundaries between love and being loved. He will not be loved for the rest of his life, and will not be able to love.

Yes, this traditional fantasy game like Tomato is considered to be excellent. Although the opening background is a bit classic, there is nothing poisonous about it. When I read the previous chapter, I was still thinking that since the talents were enabled, and the background of the protagonist's parents was not ordinary, there should be some top-notch skills. Then I added the skills later, and added a foreshadowing 🤦

A suggestion to the author, it is best not to have the same surname for the male and female protagonists, because the names of the male and female protagonists will appear frequently, and similar names will appear frequently, which makes people distinguish them repeatedly, which can easily give people a sense of reading fatigue, especially for people like me who listen to books. The plot is good, I still give it five stars.

The plot of the small town in the front always has a sword-like flavor, but it also has its own style in the back. Generally speaking, it is considered sophisticated. If the author's own style in the back is not outstanding, I will give it 4 stars.

Chapter 8: Stepping into the tenth level of body quenching Chapter 15: Stepping into the second level of Qi Condensation Chapter 35: Stepping into the third level of Yuan Hua Chapter 59: Falling to the tenth level of Body Tempering The second volume starts with great excitement

When I was in a small town, it was very similar to Jianlai. The male and female protagonists were well described, the environment was well rendered, and the plot looked very comfortable. The male protagonist, a gun cultivator, is extremely talented, his parents are of great status, he is suspected to be dead, and he has no fighting ability. He is a third-level monk in more than thirty chapters; the female protagonist, a sword cultivator, has equally terrible talents. She comes from a super sect and is a saint. Here I have to mention again the author's description of the environment, which is meticulous and vivid, and there is a sense of human fireworks when describing the scene of the city. I think the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are well written, very comfortable to watch, not abrupt or dragging. Really like this book And I would like to add that the heroine has a very good personality, very lively (she should only be like this at home), but the look and feel is very good [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's very well written, but I don't know why no one reads it.

It's beautiful, good luck to the author

It's beautiful, loveable, please give me more. Your character is all sexual. Doesn't the author Qin have other sexual qualities? Mu Xingci, Su Qingyan, Chu Yanshu. Ling Yue. Gu Yunshen. Wen knows the summer, but is frightened by the cold at night. Ye Shuying, Mo Tinglan. Shen Xingmian. I thought of ten names for you @

The writing style is very delicate, the rhythm of the plot is well controlled and does not drag on, and the heroine is well portrayed. It is a good book.