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Oh haha, I must read the big pp's article with eloquence. If it's 200,000 words, I'll change the rating [laughing evilly] [OK] Changed😋😋😋😋😋

It's nice to read, and the writing is great. The characterization and emotional descriptions are great. I especially like the interaction between the protagonist and Celestia. The protagonist's awkward and deformed emotions are also very well described.

The author is not like a newcomer. He handles the relationship very well. The love of the protagonist is very fulfilling, traceable, and well laid out. The number of words in the book may not be enough now, and it may not have entered the development period yet, so the data may not be good, but I think it will be good in the future. If this book is not successful, it can only be a matter of luck. Based on your strength as the author, you can definitely write a rating of at least 9.3 [Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's a real Pony's daily novel😘, it's really refreshing. The plot line is very well integrated with the original plot without any sense of inconsistency. The character setting can support the rationality of the plot. The writing style fits the story very well and is not obtrusive. In short, there is nothing wrong✋🏻😋🤚🏻

Support, support! ! Very good

I want to see the sick girl grow her mouth and teeth!

It's a rare good book. The twisted character of the protagonist is also logically confirmed. I hope the protagonist will gradually become normal and fall in love with Tia [laughs]

How to say it? The author's writing is very good and the plot is very smooth. The only thing I don't like is that it feels a bit abusive to the protagonist. And as a person like me, I prefer to put myself into the perspective of the protagonist. It's a bit uncomfortable to watch unconsciously. I hope the author can speed up the progress a little. I really don't want to be abused anymore. [Cry][cry][cry]

It's great. I hope there are more stories about men dressing up as women.

Less heart, lest you be proud

The author is all on his own, so he can write some "sweet" articles.

No, why did I finish reading it in one go?

It's not enough, but I still don't want a knife. The author is merciful.

It looks good, I love it, I like it [Send heart]

I hope the author will post a picture of the protagonist. Just a little more.

Come on, come on, come on

Nice fanfic

It's a very good little story. The main character is very interesting to me. I hope I can keep reading until the end. Don't let it go. Author [Adoration][Adoration]

Very good, hope it doesn't end badly

The main character is really good to look at and pokes me

It looks good, but the if line makes me feel better than the main text. After replaying the if line five times, I feel better every time. I don't want to say more.

It feels good and I look forward to the follow-up development.

If you like it, it's the best. Celestia's fanfics are relatively good in the pony circle. Of course, the male protagonist is a bit eccentric, but it's still better.

I just like the feeling of the male protagonist, it's so cool

The true and thick emotional description

It's okay

Nice. Why not write at least five?

It looks good. There was a transition at the beginning, but after that it got on the right track.

I feel super good-looking, everyone, come quickly