A Dream Trades Souls for the Gu World

The writing style is delicate and vivid, close to the style of the original work [laughs] The author must persevere, it is very exciting [please take a closer look] [please ask for more updates] Suddenly I remembered that the Ten-turn Net Gu was still working, so I pressed it [Attention][Eat Melon]

The writing and plot are all fine, but I'm afraid you'll be discovered by the Heaven Supervisor Tower and give it this score.

It's okay, but some details are bad. In addition, the protagonist Fang Zheng, who has a first-class qualification, went to find the remains of the Flower Wine Walker, which was a bit strange [face covering] It's easy to block people who like Gu, so please set it lower... The Forbidden Internet Demon Lord is still too yin! [Cover face]

The writing is very good. Halfway through the first chapter, you can tell that the author has good writing skills. At least he is excellent in the areas where he makes money in Tomato. In addition, the characterization is very good, different characters are differentiated, and the characters are different from the original but reasonable. There is also the most important plot. I have read a lot of Da Ai fanfics. Most of the works cannot follow the original story. Most of them are based on existing stories. But from the current chapters, it can be seen that the author wants to write a different plot and tell a different story. (Also, I have also thought about the story of Fang Zheng and Fang Yuan's first life together. It's such a coincidence). The last thing I want to mention is that I have read three novels about time traveling and becoming Fangzheng, including this one. One of them is very good and has been blocked here. I would like to remind the author whether he should change the darker plot (such as Bai Ningbing's chapter), or replace the nouns such as Gu with other words to reduce the harmony. This is the case for Daai's novels. The higher the popularity, the easier it will be to harmonize. Finally, I wish the author to write better and better and live a smooth life. I hope to see the author's comments and discuss with each other.

It's boring, it's Fang Zheng again [a fan of Bad Street] Especially looking for the place where Huajiu is buried, I really want to complain. It's ridiculous for you, a first-class person with first-class qualifications, to run out into the wild. The clan leader's secret guards will definitely be with him everywhere, and the protagonist adapts too quickly without overdoing it.

It's very beautiful, but in order to avoid the immortal killer move of the third young master of the Tang family, the rating is a bit lower.

Highly recommended, it's really good-looking (make it a little more basic, for fear of being blocked)

In order to avoid being imprisoned by Tianta Nori, I'll give it a try. It's very well written. The protagonist is Founder of the first generation, which is a bit disappointing. But the second source basically can't play normally, so it's harmless. Tomato rarely has good books about Gu. I hope I won't be fooled by Nori.

It's careful, it's different from the original work, it has its own characteristics Let's add another two stars to avoid being detected by the Supervisory Sky Tower and suffer another defeat.

There is actually a rating, so keep it low so you don't get discovered by the Supervisory Sky Tower.