A Dream*****

The writing style is delicate and vivid, close to the style of the original work [laughs] The author must persevere, it is very exciting [please take a closer look] [please ask for more updates] Suddenly I remembered that the Ten-turn Net Gu was still working, so I pressed it [Attention][Eat Melon]

The writing is very good. Halfway through the first chapter, you can tell that the author has good writing skills. At least he is excellent in the areas where he makes money in Tomato. In addition, the characterization is very good, different characters are differentiated, and the characters are different from the original but reasonable. There is also the most important plot. I have read a lot of Da Ai fanfics. Most of the works cannot follow the original story. Most of them are based on existing stories. But from the current chapters, it can be seen that the author wants to write a different plot and tell a different story. (Also, I have also thought about the story of Fang Zheng and Fang Yuan's first life together. It's such a coincidence). The last thing I want to mention is that I have read three novels about time traveling and becoming Fangzheng, including this one. One of them is very good and has been blocked here. I would like to remind the author whether he should change the darker plot (such as Bai Ningbing's chapter), or replace the nouns such as Gu with other words to reduce the harmony. This is the case for Daai's novels. The higher the popularity, the easier it will be to harmonize. Finally, I wish the author to write better and better and live a smooth life. I hope to see the author's comments and discuss with each other.

It's careful, it's different from the original work, it has its own characteristics Let's add another two stars to avoid being detected by the Supervisory Sky Tower and suffer another defeat.

I haven't read it yet, but there is one thing I want to say. There is only one long river of time in the Gu world, and there is no different time and space. If Fang Yuan still has Spring and Autumn Cicada after the author, there will be no first cycle, but directly the second cycle. The difference is that Fang Yuan has 500 years of memory, that is, the protagonist can only meet the second source😍. If the protagonist has the means in the first life, it is best to tell the layout of the second cycle in advance. Finally, please support Gu's fanfic

It's not that the author's third chapter was reviewed. This is a bit difficult for you.

I have finished reading it so far. Although the author's writing style is unfamiliar, the reading effect is very good. The golden finger is strong but not negative. I hope the author can stick to it. I will always support him.

I believe that a truly strong person is one who does not change his true heart due to other people's words and opinions, and can firmly walk on his own path in order to realize his own vision. You can listen to the readers' opinions, but don't interrupt your rhythm. The readers' opinions can be used as a reference, but the direction of the plot of the book is still decided by the author. There is no need to listen to what the readers say and make sure to change or delete something. This book is well written, but in order to increase the score, I won't rate it too high.

Pretty good but probably running out soon It doesn't match the original work

Will the author have Fang Yuan in his second life? That is, after this life is over, can he return to the present? Once again with the second generation Fang Yuan. [Shy]

It's very interesting, but... Well... Forget it, don't worry about it, just watch it! I beg the author not to stop updating! (Compare your heart)

There are so many masterpieces during the summer vacation.

A good book, one of the best among Tomato Gu fans. Come on, author, you must keep writing [Like][Like][Like]

Finally found a good fan Looks good, pay attention to score!

Please give me some encouragement. Come on, the author. It would be pretty good if you could write the whole thing. The first life is not very obvious, and the various directions are difficult to fill in. The author should use his imagination.

I have always had the intention of writing a fan novel based on Gu. The protagonist becomes a master with swordsmanship, and also practices an original way of lying, and is named Qinglian Demon Lord. But he has always been disturbed by that Sima Chenhe. I have also read a few chapters and I believe you. Come on!

The writing is okay, not like a novice's writing

The writing is smooth, the hang-ups are not big, and it is not easy to collapse. It is a long-lasting stock.

If there are too many people suppressing the score, the author will be disappointed. Give me a full star and keep working hard.

I have read many books, but I have stopped updating them all😭😭😭. You must persist.

It's very interesting, I hope the author doesn't stop

I even doubted the real person, so I came to write a fanfic.

Big dream brother and big love brother

How should you face it then?

Can the author complete it more? I really like it. I have discontinued all the books I read before [crying]

The first review is a recognition of the author. You are worthy of 5 stars. It has already become somewhat of a real person. If you work harder, you can surpass the young real people in the past. Follow-up review is to retain the author

Let the rest of you keep your score. I will give it a 5 and ignore it immediately. Just watch it if you can. I am not a demon.

I'll give it a try and score it. There was a good book before but it was closed.

Just like the original version, it has some thoughts of its own. Please update it quickly [Adore][Adore][Adore]

It feels pretty good. Come on, try harder.

Not bad, I hope the author can stick to it