Two heroines, two intertwined lines (Zhao Changying's growth line + Zhao Mo's emotional line) The main text has been completed. World view setting: similar to the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period.
I was still young at that time, and I had no idea that in my later years I would suddenly pass away in a dream of traveling with the person in front of me. I stood at the end of my life, looking back in the mist, at the innocent Chang Ying who was as white as a piece of paper in 14 years old, the Chang Ying who was on the verge of collapse in the thatched cottage at 16 years old, and the majestic and majestic Chang Ying who was a general at 17 years old... I watched Chang Ying step by step from a young student in the academy to a general guarding one side. God has eyes, Chang Ying lives happily and freely, God shows mercy, and I can witness her life from a distance. --Mo Jingchun
Reader comments
It's really good-looking, with a very novel world view, and the steam warring states and stuff are so cool! The queen is really domineering and charming, but her role is a bit limited. The heroine Zhao Changying is very cute and you can feel her growth. It's just that the relationship between the two heroines is a bit useless. I personally don't like this sour type. Another problem is that the author may be a newcomer and likes to write from a God's perspective. The interaction with the supporting characters is not strong, and the reader's sense of substitution is not strong. I hope it can be improved. Moreover, the heroine's experience in the background feels depressing. But it should be an explanation of his character. I look forward to the cool general in the future! 😎
It's really good-looking, with a very novel world view, and the steam warring states and stuff are so cool! The queen is really domineering and charming, but her role is a bit limited. The heroine Zhao Changying is very cute and you can feel her growth. It's just that the relationship between the two heroines is a bit useless. I personally don't like this sour type. Another problem is that the author may be a newcomer and likes to write from a God's perspective. The interaction with the supporting characters is not strong, and the reader's sense of substitution is not strong. I hope it can be improved. Moreover, the heroine's experience in the background feels depressing. But it should be an explanation of his character. I look forward to the cool general in the future! 😎