Apocalypse: Beyond the Sky

Overall, this book is okay. The pace feels a bit slow, but the details are well described, and some foreshadowings are left. The overall look and feel is still very comfortable, and the plot is much smoother. It should be a common problem of refreshing writing.

Give the author some encouragement. After reading 10 chapters, it can be seen that the author wants to create an ordinary protagonist image: because he depends on others, he speaks cautiously, has low self-esteem, and swallows his anger. From the introduction, it can be seen that the author wants to express: Even if I am ordinary, I can still reach the same height as the talented. In the early dialogue between the protagonist and Bai Yu, I think what Bai Yu said was very advanced and had his own sense of boundaries. It's just that the plot is slow in the early stages, probably to explain the background of the protagonist. Contemporary young people are too anxious to do things and can't read it calmly. This may be the reason why there are so few readers.

The logic is reasonable and the updates are continuous. In male videos, the power settings can be richer, the battle scenes can be more exciting, more and more powerful villains can be established, and even emotional plots with a single female protagonist and multiple female supporting characters can be reduced to unnecessary details. I have written so much but not many readers are here to support me. Thank you to the author for your hard work! [Like] In fact, it might be better to publish this novel on other platforms [thinking]. I have read a good novel by a novice author but there are not many readers on Tomato. I have been supporting her until it is completed this year [face covering]

It feels like it's all about dialogue, and the battle details are not that sympathetic. Maybe it's because I've only read about 300 pieces [Thinking][Thinking], but the character description is still very good. I give the author a big five-star [Love][Love][Love]

Baozi, your life is too miserable. No one is watching but you can still keep updating [face covering]. My ability is limited. I'll give you a little encouragement [blowing kiss] The daily writing is great. I really like the description of the chat and interaction between the male and female protagonists. It's best if it's plain and warm. Xiaobai is quite lively and cute. There should be no knives in the follow-up [shy]

The author is great, it would be a pity if Bai Yu is not the heroine

The students are portrayed with great vigor, and the wording is appropriate and down-to-earth without committing literary youth. Although the pace of the plot is slow, the details are very good. So far I have heard that Chapter 192 has not found any connection between the content and the title Apocalypse. Now that the post-apocalyptic period has passed, it should be called post-apocalyptic science fiction.

The author can change the introduction, tags and title of the book. After all, people usually read the title and introduction first when reading a book to see if it is the type they like to read. This introduction is not very detailed, so the first impression is definitely not very good. If I had not read any books, I would not click on this book. As long as the title and introduction are changed to be more attractive, I believe that the author will write a better book\^O^/

Author, your writing style needs to be improved a bit. The story is a good one. Come on.

It can be seen that I just wrote it [thinking] and I feel that I don't grasp some details very well, but I can read it. Five stars for encouragement.

Will Bai Yu and the protagonist be together?

I love watching it, but why are so few people rating it?

Can the author describe the world view, such as a structural diagram or something?

Will bro finish it? It seems that no one will read it🤔