Old Dong the Gatekeeper: More Children, More Blessings

This novel is really good. It can be seen that the author has a lot of experience in the use of ancient poems and idioms. No matter what other people complain about, I really like it. I have been following it all the way from the beginning, and during the second brush today, I found that many places have been modified, and some sensitive descriptions have been deleted. In fact, the author made it clear from the beginning that this book has no complicated logic and is just a "brainless and refreshing" book. However, even so, many people still hold on to it and criticize it. Since you don't like it, you don't have to read it, so why bother leaving a message to attack the author? It's really not necessary. I am an author myself. I have written a bad book before, and I know all too well how hard it is to write. Most of the time, I stay up late at night coding, and only I know the suffering. And it can be felt that the author later made adjustments based on feedback, significantly reducing the intensive use of ancient poems and idioms, and his intentions can be seen. Authors who are so willing to polish their works really deserve more tolerance and encouragement. I'm going to write a long review after finishing the second review. I must praise the author! When I was following up for the first time, I was struck by the details in the book - those ancient poems and sayings that were picked up at my fingertips, and the seemingly "brainless and refreshing" setting contained the ingenuity that the author had quietly buried, and I could feel that he really put a lot of thought into the words. Today, during my second brush, I found that many places have been quietly revised. Some of the slightly redundant male perspective descriptions have been streamlined a lot, and the plot rhythm is smoother. It can be seen that the author has been silently polishing the work. This kind of seriousness towards the work is really impressive. I remember the author said at the beginning that it was "illogical, purely brainless and refreshing", but after following it, I discovered that the so-called "brainless" hidden in it is the precise control of readers' emotions - there is no delay in what should be fun, and there is no ambiguity in what should be delicate. Although I occasionally see some complaints, as a reader who has followed all the way, I am very clear about the author's hard work behind the scenes: those chapters updated in the middle of the night, the plot adjusted based on feedback (for example, the intensive use of ancient poems' epilogues was later significantly reduced), and every change hides the care for the work. As a reader, I'm really lucky to find an author who is willing to listen to feedback and polish it over and over again. This novel is like a cup of sweet milk tea with added ingredients. The first taste is relaxing and sweet, but after careful reading, you will find that the author's thoughts are hidden in it. No matter what others say, I will keep pursuing it. I also hope that the author will not be affected by the noise and continue writing at his own pace! Looking forward to the following plots, and even more looking forward to seeing the stories you write sparkling~ Come on, we are all here!

It's okay, I've read more than 40 chapters, it's not too poisonous, at first I thought the mother was sick and she wanted to lick it! Fortunately, I didn't lick it. The training was pretty fast, but the timeline was a bit slow. There were so many chapters in just a few days! The timeline of the "Many Children and Many Blessings" stream can be faster.

I finished reading it in one go. If I didn't finish it, I would be afraid that I would go into a dark room and not be able to get out. [Awkward laugh][Awkward laugh][Awkward laugh] This kind of subject matter is not easy to pass the review even if you don't write about the specific process. . You never know when it will be urgent. .

This novel really suited my taste and was a pleasure to read. I especially like the rude and rude manner of the protagonist, Lao Dong, who speaks vigorously, which is particularly realistic. But it would be better if the author could polish the details more carefully. In addition, it is recommended that each story be concluded completely before starting a new chapter. This will make the reading more enjoyable and will not keep people's appetites hanging. Overall, there are a lot of highlights. Slightly adjusting the details and rhythm will make it even better~ Reading this novel really feels like going back to more than ten years ago. I have read it three times. It even has a hypnotic effect and I can fall asleep while listening to it. My wife always talks about me, saying that I read these "messy" books every day, but I like this kind of novels where the heroine appears quickly and the heroine is picked up quickly. It is very enjoyable to read. If the plot of giving birth to a baby could be faster, it would be more to my liking~

Realistic version of the old concierge 🤦🤦🤦

It's a batch with novel themes, so I will definitely give it a five-star review. I haven't seen any bad points so far 🤭

Overall, this novel is really good. The pace of recruiting girls is quite fast, and it is very enjoyable to read. But relatively speaking, the plot of giving birth is a little slower. But overall it's to my liking and I really like this work. Come on, author, I look forward to your continued efforts in creating and bringing more exciting content! This novel is really good. I read it from the beginning again and felt like I was back more than ten years ago. No matter what others think, I like it anyway, especially Lao Dong's rudeness in speaking. However, there have been a lot of changes in some places in the front, and it feels a bit incoherent. I hope the author can polish it again.

This subject matter is good. I have been reading novels on Tomato for a long time and this is the first time I have seen such a subject matter. The male protagonist's life of being mature and healthy should be something that many men envy and want to be like. I really hope to be such a person.

Very very favorite story

The writing style is indeed exciting, the pace of the book is fast and enjoyable, and the vivid characters come to the forefront one by one, which makes people's eyes warm. It's just that the "baby giving" progress is too slow, making people rub their hands in a hurry. Work harder and recruit more wonderful people like Lei Xuanyue and Fang Keke. She must have good looks and figure, but also have top-notch qualities. It is best to be a clean youngster who has not been spoiled by the world. After all, Old Dong, an ancient warrior in the "Hua Jin" realm, with a profound background and the ability to be blessed by the system, is worthy of the best girl in the world, isn't he? This novel is really well written, and the writing style is so scratchy that you have to chew it carefully to read it well. The plot flows as smoothly as water, without any stumbling blocks, and it's just one word - enjoyable to read. I'm thinking about giving the author another five-star rating. This level is worthy of a double five-star rating.