Don't read it, don't read it, don't read it, this is the author's dark history. . . The writing is very bad, don't read it, this is shit, this is dog shit, don't read it, it will feel like eating chicken shit after reading it
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The team in the early stage did not make it clear in dealing with Lin. Well, it was just this small flaw. I will take a look at it later.
The characterization of the protagonist is overall good. Well, maybe Kaden is too charming. After all, most people who watch Naruto have a good impression of Kaden (off topic) and the confrontation with Aunt Snake doesn't seem too abrupt. That's it for now, you can still take care of yourself
I can't do it anymore, Kadian.
You actually knew that Obito would be taken away by Madara, so why didn't you know that Lin's death was about to happen? Blame Kakashi? ? Okay -_-||I don't understand
The team in the early stage did not make it clear in dealing with Lin. Well, it was just this small flaw. I will take a look at it later. The characterization of the protagonist is overall good. Well, maybe Kaden is too charming. After all, most people who watch Naruto have a good impression of Kaden (off topic) and the confrontation with Aunt Snake doesn't seem too abrupt. That's it for now, you can still take care of yourself I can't do it anymore, Kadian. You actually knew that Obito would be taken away by Madara, so why didn't you know that Lin's death was about to happen? Blame Kakashi? ? Okay -_-||I don't understand