The Teahouse Owner in Hell

What can I say about this book... It's readable. As for why I gave it five stars, there are two reasons: 1. After all, it is a new book, so I want to encourage the author. 2. As a fan of Hell Inn and the Extremely Evil Boss, it's probably rare and valuable. Now it seems that there are no problems with the plot. I can only say that I need to practice my writing. There are a few areas that may be regarded as lightning points: the protagonist has no memory points in the plot, and the protagonist's temporary goal in the main line is to go to heaven to find his girlfriend (that is to say, don't think about letting the protagonist find a partner in the protagonist group). Another point is that the author must remember to divide it into paragraphs, otherwise the perception will be a bit confusing. That's about it🤔

I think it's very beautiful.

It looks good, please give it a try, author