Yandere! I Pet Pet Pet Pet

I found a healing novel, but I feel that the style of painting still needs to be improved, and what should I say? The protagonist is a walking loli killer, and the world view is a bit weird. The real school bullying is not noticed... And the style of the painting feels like a Japanese cartoon. Forget it, I will come back and read it later.

The author has put great effort into the character design of the heroine. In terms of the rhythm of the whole book, the reader's perception in the early stage is slightly uncomfortable. The author said in the first chapter that this is the rhythm design of the whole book. But for the readers of the whole book, it is a kind of torture for readers who are willing to read on, because most of the current readers cannot see the back. From my perspective, I will bring myself into the protagonist. However, the author deliberately depicts the details of the heroine's torture, and makes the male protagonist unaware of this, which can easily lead to a significant loss of readers' perception. Later, he began to add a large number of characters that I think are redundant and have no effect on the advancement of the plot. This is a small mistake that novice authors are prone to make, and generally speaking, it does not have a big impact. I hope the author will continue to work hard and absorb the opinions of readers.

Not bad, but isn't she a single girl? Why is there another Ouyang Huanhuan?

8.19, I finished watching it, I hope to put those CS in jail

The heroine was abused for too long

This five-star is dedicated to the male and female protagonists and their love [sending heart] Long live pure love! [Anger]

If a good book is not popular, the author must not stop updating it [almost crying] [almost crying], I really like this book, the writing is really good, and the subject matter is very attractive! I really like this book. The author must not stop updating it [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

The plot is okay, the characters are well-drawn

It looks good, I can write a little bit more bt later [laughing] The writing style is still good, I hope the author can avoid some pitfalls in the future

The sweet, cute little cake yandere is the savior of my book shortage, but the author is so slow to update.

When I read Chapter 20, the author probably wanted to write a story about the male protagonist redeeming the female protagonist, but it was really difficult in the early stage. After the female protagonist was beaten and had retinal detachment and underwent surgery, the male protagonist did not punish the bully. Then a few chapters later, he added a setting that the bullying was serious and difficult to punish. Wow.

It looks good, it looks good, I say important things three times, but the space is a bit short, the author will update it quickly! ! !

The author is so sweet, I am the sewer rat [crying]

It looks pretty good so far. Good luck, author.

I've tried it, it's delicious

Be born! Born! Wuwuwu, poor Xiaobai, your life is so miserable [cry][cry][cry] The back is against the sky and explodes [Petrochemical]

The plot is not bad, and the update speed is pretty fast. The writing when the heroine is bullied is so miserable that it is unbearable to watch, but there are no other problems. Come on author, I hope I can finish this book

It's a pretty good book [laughing]

I think it looks good

The subject matter is good and the writing is pretty good and not too verbose. I just think the author can do it three times a day. Two posts are too few and not enough to read👀 Oops, I'll go, it's so cool and I won't be wronged at all. The author will definitely update it at 9:00 or so. If you don't get up, ask me to make up for it, okay😁

Changed from four stars to five stars, but there are still some "deficiencies" + things I don't like No? Chapter 58 took me so long (hours)! ? ∴Me↓

It's a good book, very beautiful👀

It was so uncomfortable in the early stage that I could only watch it while dancing

Let me go, the male protagonist is in a huge Galamu world, and he has to worry about being captured and tortured every day. Oh my god, it turned out to be Gala for the wooden male protagonist!

Although the protagonist in the early stage is weak, he still has the heart to protect his lover, and in the later stage, he has the strength to fight 1v5. Overall, it feels good, but it is a bit slow [rolls eyes]

It's very interesting, but after Ouyang Huanhuan was rescued by a hero, she also watched some things that she shouldn't have watched. I don't know how to deal with it at the moment. I hope it's taken care of and I don't have a stomachache.

It's pretty good, and the male protagonist is pretty awesome.