HP [Pure Blood Paradox]

I have read Chapter 33 so far. I think the writing is quite touching and the pace is fast. However, I still don't understand some of the logic. Doesn't the heroine want to get engaged first and then go to a far away place to get married? Since his father died during the engagement, why did he ask to go to a far away place? Also, his father died so easily, and the heroine's dormancy and efforts were not reflected. Furthermore, the Blood Pact has been mentioned too many times, and it is not good to emphasize certain things too many times. Also, if there is no reasonable reason for the heroine's behavior, it will seem very inconsistent. I think the heroine should think more deeply. For example, if he resurrects the girl, others will inevitably do it. Knowing this, how can the heroine ensure that she will not be discovered? It is a good thing to be humane, but it must also be done under the premise of protecting yourself. The plot should be more streamlined, that is, in addition to the emotional drama, the main plot should also be more attractive. Finally, the author's capital letters are quite beautiful: ૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა

Awesome👍🏻Not OOC, just crazy comments😘The subconscious action of thinking that you don't like it is super addictive😏This kind of ambiguous period is super sexy [Adoration][Adoration] Super awesome teacher😁😁Can the teacher surprise us by publishing 200 chapters at once? [I understand][I understand][I understand]

The sense of fate of childhood sweethearts is always something ordinary people cannot surpass. Riddell's character has no OOC, and is more three-dimensional and fuller in the author's writing. I can imagine from the article his cold-faced and cute look when he was a child🥺 I also like Jane's character, and I like the chapter where the author wrote that after she learned about her life experience, she said to herself that she would live a good life. I have always felt that Jane is a sunflower, but not the kind on a sunny day, but a sunflower that always faces the faint light in the wind and rain. Jane grew up stumblingly but was not lost. Just like this "stumbling" attitude towards the sun, she was like a soul that was wounded but never gave up the light. I hope the ending will be he. I hope the fanfic can make up for the regrets of the original work. People who did not get happiness in the original work can be happy in the fanfic, and the same goes for the original character Jane. After such a long time, I finally got to the end. When I found out that there was no update, I saved this book in another category. Later, when I found out that there was an update, I didn't read it and prepared to stock up more. When I clicked on it today, I found that it was actually finished. I was a little emotional. I like the ending very much, he is the most beautiful, and I can also accept the extra be 🥰🥰 Thank you for your hard work, author!

It's very, very, very beautiful. The characters are not OOC at all. They look like what I imagined a young couple would look like. The more they go on, the more exciting they become. The author should do a lot to update, I hope they have a good ending [Sending my heart] [I'm about to cry] I hope it can be completed [send heart]

It's pretty good-looking. There's no OOC in the V-hall. Although some of them are a bit off-putting to me, overall it's pretty good. It's just too little and can be maintained. Can there be less misunderstanding? .

The logic is clear, the writing is delicate, the rhythm is tight, and the idea is novel. The description of the characters is consistent with the original work. The emotional line between the male and female protagonists is delicately described. The male and female protagonists criticize each other wildly and pull each other. Both of them focus on their own careers. There are supplementary explanations in the article so that readers can clearly understand the context of the article. There are very few books that I can persist in reading. This is one of them, so I beg the author to update it quickly! [Grieved][Almost crying][Top post] Advantages of this article: ①The setting of the male protagonist is consistent with the original work and is not OOC. ②The heroine's design is novel. ③The blood alliance is formed between the male and female protagonists. ④The male protagonist gives the female protagonist the Blood Oath Ring and the Gaunt Ring. ⑤Severus Snape is the godson of the heroine. ⑥The heroine went to Germany to recognize Gellert Grindelwald as her teacher and served as Deputy Minister of Magic. ⑦The rebirth of Gellert Grindelwald. ⑧The duel between the heroine and the hero. ⑨The emotional lines of the childhood sweethearts of the male and female protagonists are delicately described and have a strong sense of tension. ⑩All the male and female protagonists criticized the male protagonist for imprisoning the female protagonist. The female protagonist used the male protagonist's Horcrux to create a more pure young man Riddle. 11. The heroine killed her father and cousin to gain the inheritance rights of the Nott family and ran for the position of Minister of the International Union of Magic. 12. The heroine is displaced in time and space due to an accident. 13. The rhythm is tight without procrastination, the idea is novel, and the subject matter is rare, which can arouse readers' interest in reading. 14. All in all, it is very, very, very good-looking. It is one of the few books that I can insist on reading, and it is my favorite among all the HP books. Therefore, the author must not be tired or idle, update quickly!

Teacher, please keep updating. I am so happy to have met my favorite Tom fanfic again on Tomato! [Laughing] I'd like to take the liberty to ask if the ending is he [please update]

It's still pretty good~ [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Super touching, but it's a pity it's not over yet This book is really super good. The author's writing is really good. I have been following the updates. I am very happy to finish this book. I have been reading it every time after school this year. If there is another book published in the future, I will definitely read it [Sending Hearts]

It's quite beautiful, and the more you go back, the more interesting it becomes [laughs]

I want to see when the two of them can reconcile, but I feel that the female lead is not the kind to be humble, so I let the male lead do it. It really looks like watching.

It's a good read, and I finally found something that suits my taste⊂(˃̶͈̀ε ˂̶͈́ ⊂ ). Please keep updating! Really not OOC! It's more in line with the original work. The heroine is not a love brain, and both of them are very sober! Very beautiful

It's really, really beautiful! [Love] Especially the tension between Lillian and Tom.

It's so beautiful, I hope you won't be fooled.

It's nice, but I wonder when Voldemort didn't have a nose? [Think]

Personally I think it looks good, the heroine has brains

It's good-looking, logically clear, and well-organized. It's a good book worth reading [I understand]

This book is exactly what I imagined Voldemort's cp would be like, it's so beautiful! !

It looks great. The author's writing style is very good. I'm looking forward to the follow-up.

Highly recommended, hope to finish it

Very nice, highly recommended.

Ahhhh, so beautiful!

Not OOC at all, super super super super super super super super good looking! ! ! ! !

It looks good, but when did they reconcile [what] I feel like I didn't torture Voldemort at all [angry]

Wow, I highly recommend [making faces] [making faces] [sending hearts] [thinking]

It looks so good, my mom is so happy with it

The content is novel and interesting. I like it.

It's nice to look at, and it's crazy and inspiring

Very nice, two strong ones

Can Bellatrix appear? I like her so much. Let her have sex with the heroine.