Elf: Be the Dragon King at the Beginning and Never Work Overtime

These 14 chapters are pretty good, there are no major problems. The levels of elves are not divided according to numbers such as 1-100, but directly divided into early stage, middle stage and late stage of King of Heaven. I think there is no problem with this division. The author did not follow the normal path of a protagonist slowly developing from weak to powerful, but directly appeared as a king. It's okay if there is less development period. But the only thing is that without the development content, the chapters will be greatly reduced [smile] At present, there are few updates and there is nothing much to say. Let's look at the back and start with 4⭐. Later, the protagonist is in a foreign country and has been fighting for foreigners. It looks very boring. The main reason is that the protagonist is the first to take everything on him. The protagonist deals with the ultimate alien beast, a foreign evil organization, and his teammates are just decorations. The content written is good, but it has been working hard for foreigners, which is not interesting. Normally, the protagonist is there to support, and should focus on getting benefits, but the protagonist has always taken the lead and worked hard, which is quite speechless.

The setting is very attractive, the king is powerful at the beginning, and the elves are also very popular. The plot is a bit bland but there are not many words at the moment, so this shortcoming is not very obvious yet. It is suggested that the author can write in a direction similar to Team Rocket, using the secret realm of Dragon Island and the ultimate beast to create a force, mainly operating abroad and in secret realms, and cooperating with Donghuang officials both overtly and covertly. The protagonist, as the leader of a criminal organization, can also be more aggressive and decisive, and create Mewtwo, Magearna and Genesect.

Very excellent work. Excellent in every way. First of all, from the setting point of view, the integration of the elf world and the real world is full of uncertainties. The author can take a close-up here, but the author chose to follow some of the real world settings, the relationship between countries, including some realistic power distribution. This will give people a sense of immersion, instead of simply thinking that it is an anime world, and it will have a more real feeling. The second is the setting of the protagonist. Dragon type is a very fascinating attribute, and the protagonist's team are also very popular characters. Especially the setting of the king at the beginning, which makes a lot of cool points available right from the beginning. Different from many works written starting from receiving the elf egg, the exciting points of this work are obviously denser and more direct. The character of the protagonist is also very lovable. He is neither a virgin nor cold-blooded. As a king, he has a sense of responsibility, charisma, and strength. He is simply a cool male protagonist. In addition, the brotherly friendship with the Chinese champion and the friendship with the president are all shining points of human nature. Writing them out will make people feel better about these characters. So far, it is a work that I am very satisfied with in every aspect. And if nothing else, the protagonist's Eevee should evolve into Fairy Eevee. Although it is a bit cliché, it seems that only Fairy Eevee is suitable for the protagonist's team. This book should not follow the trend of collecting mythical beasts, so it will be very comfortable to read. Currently, there is no emotional line. The protagonist is also very typical. Arceus comes to save the world, and the mythical beasts from all sides also know it very well. So for this work, the final length should not be very long, but it will be a very good-looking work. I can currently give it over 90 points.

It's really fun to watch so far, I hope it doesn't overwhelm the main character.

It reads very smoothly, better than most books

Come on author, it's great

Okay, it looks pretty

Saving the world? It's interesting.

It's very interesting, I hope the author has time to write more.

Can the author come up with a Mew, and then use Mew as a dragon type?

Good, good, good, good, good, good

The writing is pretty good, why is the score so low?

Very interesting, looking forward to the next content

Finally, it's not a headline-grabbing one. The content is pretty good, but I personally prefer more daily routines. The protagonist is too busy. He is either on a mission or on the way to a mission. Can you let the protagonist take a break once in a while?

Very good, there are many popular dragon types