Collapse of Iron********

So far it's not brainless, it's more of a realistic Starry Railway. The connection between the characters' interests is clear. However, some characters should be noted when reading the article. This magnifies the emphasis on interests of the characters and the forces they belong to, and the characters are more biased. But the overall situation is very logical at the moment. Star Dome Train is still a family. How to put it this way, I hope there will be more emotional and positive feedback to the Star Train family. Emotions require the joint efforts of both parties to maintain, and unilateral acceptance cannot last. (Personal suggestion, don't comment if you don't like it)

Excellent: ① The author reveals to us a cold, realistic and rational world of Star Iron with a sharp writing style ② It does not deviate from the value orientation of the original work "to turn this unhappy world into what we expect" Shortcomings: ① Some plots have loopholes and are even inexplicable. Sometimes, I even suspected that I had missed something (for example: maintaining the nation to enrich the people). ②May be assisted by AI Comprehensive evaluation: An adult fable covered in crumbling iron And why does this star look like Ruan Mei and placer gold? Suggestion: Expand the role of other members of the train crew and don't make them accessories to the protagonist. Their characters are too dull.

It's pretty good, a 40K version of Railway. The core of the comedy is tragedy. It's a very powerful imagination. It's much better than some forced sensationalism. There is no big reason or chicken soup, it's just about living and finding your own secrets. A very simple and firm route, I look forward to what comes next

When I step into her shoes, what I feel is the suffering that ordinary people cannot feel. But I think this is the greatest test a person can give to himself. The madness and rationality of the girl's self-rescue will give this dark, suspicious, and confrontational universe an answer sheet that subverts the underlying logic of common sense in the world.

How to say it? A very good work, different from the weird one. This book is pure darkness, which can be understood as Star Iron after breaking away from the 12+ limit. I believe this book will become popular because it does have this quality. As for you saying that this story is desperate, I don't think so. Maybe this is an extremely dark and extremely desperate universe. But it is by no means a story of despair and darkness. On the contrary, I think it is a beautiful story full of hope. The world is changing little by little with our protagonist, and shreds of hope burst out from despair. This dark universe is being changed. Isn't this a beautiful story? Isn't this a hopeful story? No matter how it ends, I will continue to read this book. Even if the ending is bad, the process will always be worth remembering. What's more, they are like a rising sun, slowly illuminating this dark forest, just like the unknown guests in this universe before. So, this is a really great book! ! !

It's like an original novel covered in star iron, with a lot of private settings. Use your brain and watch the star desperately rush through obstacles. It's so exciting that I stayed up late to read it and try to write a long review. The worldview is dark and a little absurd, and absurd yet reasonable. The star here has amnesia, is suspected, is used as a test subject, is coveted, and is the enemy of everyone except the train crew. In short, it is a big bomb. Once it explodes, everyone on the train crew will be GG. (No, the star's succubus aura was removed by the author. No, the halo should still be there, but it was offset by the terrifying world view. No, no, it was removed by the author. No, no, right, right...) That's enough, I feel sorry for her! Even so, the train crew still accepted Xing. To be honest, the emotions between the train crew in the novel, the creation of just a few dozen chapters (space station, Yalilo 6) makes people feel the warmth of the family more than the creation of the original Star Railway (the main plot before the beginning to the Luofu version). Those family members who still unconditionally trust you and support you and fight for you in such a dark universe (it makes sense for me to be a level 70 pioneer as a star), Teacher Dan Heng, Xiao Sanyue, Uncle Yang, Ji Zi, and the train conductor. I'm really afraid that the author will kill one of the stars in order to let them grow in a certain way. Alas, the author shouldn't make random comments. A train set is a train set that will last a lifetime! ! The author dares to strike! I dare... Dare to raise books! ! (Daily √)

The cruel plot does not have the relaxation of games, but only the depression and hardship of reality.

Yes, Xing Bao was either injured and vomiting blood, or he vomited blood and fainted on the way [crying]

It seems that I have to use my brain this time.

A really, really, really, really novel work, unique among all Beng Tie novels. He removed the 12+ label and peeled off the space comedy skin. This book truly writes down a universe with a dark forest system. There will not be a situation where all the characters revolve around the protagonist alone, and it is not a pure cheat, nor is it like in the game where the protagonist only needs to switch fates (how do you achieve the coexistence of fates). This book really puts the fate path on the character, instead of directly adding two fate paths and three fate paths like other books, completely abandoning the concept, leaving only pure combat power. There are collisions and mergers between destiny paths. Power also comes at a price. I hope the author can continue to write more.

It feels like there are more private settings... But it seems that Xing is taking a road to heaven... Come on

What's nice is that the atmosphere is tense [Thinking][Thinking]

It suits my taste very well. This star feels more like the protagonist star from the closed beta period or the Galaxy Manhunter period! The author writes like a weekly program The Star Dome Railway we played on was the second round. All in all, it's a star-studded review

It should be regarded as an 18+ Star Dome Railway. It is very depressing. Xing keeps waking up from coma and coma every time. I haven't watched much, but I am still confused. Why did Xing embark on the path of protecting his destiny as soon as he met Yue Yue and Dan Heng at the beginning? Many of the troubles caused by the Dual Destiny Road later were also strange, and the favoritism of the train crew was also very strange. This time, it really felt like the entire universe was staring at the Trail Blazers, which felt uncomfortable. . .

It's indeed a fanfic, it's so powerful

It's so exciting that it almost scares my heart out of you.

In a sense, this is the real Star Dome Railway

It's a different Star Iron universe, but the feelings of the train crew are still there, but I don't know if the protagonist has CP, and the protagonist's plug-in is honestly a bit lacking.

The fanfic that attracts me the most at the moment is a brand new story set in the Star Iron worldview.

My brain was spinning after the holidays, and this article restarted my brain again.

This is an aloof star [currently working on draft][laughing evilly]

My heart always throbs suddenly for no reason. As soon as I did the examination, I was found to be ill. The examination showed that there was a foreign object in my heart. The doctor asked me if I had suffered a gunshot wound before, because the foreign object looked like a bullet. I was confused and said no, I am just an ordinary student, how could it be possible! The doctor carefully examined my chest but could not find any wound. The doctor also felt strange and said that he had never seen anything like this in so many years of medical practice, but one thing was certain - if it was not removed as soon as possible, my life would be in danger. After the operation, I touched my left chest, which was still bandaged—— After I got home, I opened this masterpiece, and suddenly I felt my heart was hit hard. Only then did I remember that it was not a bullet, but my heartbeat when I first met the teacher.

The realist poet is none other than you.

God, my rusty brain has been pried into gears

This is the best, most reasoning, and most mind-blowing book I have ever read. But the author's sense of despair is too strong. Can he write something more relaxing? It's so depressing.

It's interesting, I can watch it

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The writing is too rational, very crazy, and dark.

Not bad, I still like it

So wonderful. Love it. Love it.