I Became the BUG of Lotus Tower

[Wang Zhouzhi] I am not being shameless and rate myself, I just feel that if I say it here, more people will see it. Maybe this is the first time you click on this book, so please give me a reminder. The development of this book is definitely not that fast, but what can be guaranteed is that it will never follow the plot direction of the original work. The influence of the heroine is not that big at the beginning, but it is definitely a transformation from quantitative change to qualitative change, and it will never be static. If you prefer fast-moving plots, you can choose other types of books instead of forcing the author to change the overall tone. Everyone has their own preferences, and there are many kinds of creativity in fan fiction. Just because you don't like it doesn't mean other readers don't like it. To judge the feelings of a group based only on your own subjective feelings is a bit disrespectful to other readers and authors. If you don't like this genre, don't criticize [Sending Hearts] The characters in the story world are not game NPCs. They are "people" with independent thoughts, emotions, and situational limitations. So stop asking why you didn't tell the truth before. Why did the protagonist trust outsiders? What was your reason for obtaining the truth? How do you ensure your protagonist doesn't become more suspicious of you? How do you make sure the protagonist believes your origin? The story is a step-by-step story. Please forgive me. It won't be completed in one breath. The establishment of feelings, the gain of trust, and the revelation of the truth all require reasonable steps. This is not a fast-paced novel [Love] Li Lianhua is not a paper person who can be manipulated at will, but an independent individual with flesh and blood and his own judgment and concerns. [The most important point is that if you think some of Xiang Yi's behaviors were unreasonable or even annoying in the early stage, I think this is very consistent with the behavioral logic of a young, high-ranking Li Xiang Yi who lives in an idealistic bubble. This is a typical dilemma for a young leader: Li Xiangyi is not perfect, he became famous at a young age and is at the top. Such people often have a kind of "arrogance of superiors" and "paternalistic style". People in the world also say that he is ruthless And blind trust in "one's own people": Therefore, when dealing with Xiao Zijin's problem, he first defined it as "internal contradiction". His primary goal is to "quell troubles and maintain stability" rather than "pursue absolute justice at all costs." This kind of maintenance of internal systems is the instinct of many leaders. Therefore, the early plot is more about depicting not a "just and selfless knight", but a "young leader trapped in a management dilemma." I think this is also a foreshadowing of the disunity among Sigumen and why Sigumen dispersed as soon as he left. Knowing that everyone expects him to be the "incarnation of justice": expect him to be discerning, selfless, and punish evil deeds with thunder. · Expect him to be a "perfect hero": expect him to be able to handle major issues in the world, and also be considerate of every individual's feelings and grievances. But I feel that judging from what he said to his senior brother at that time, he was not particularly able to feel everyone's emotions in detail. Otherwise, he would have known that his senior brother was jealous and had a secret crush on Xiao Zijin. He was very different from Li Lianhua later. But his invitation to the heroine was also sincere. Others were worried that there would be bad rumors, but in his heart he just wanted to do his best to make up for it. He has deep feelings for the people in his family. As a family member, there is a sense that the family members will think that you have made a mistake, and you cannot punish your family members, or cut them off so quickly. So you can only apologize by yourself for the time being, and then negotiate with your family in private (I also wrote it at the beginning, Xiangyi specifically told me to take good care of the people in the family) Just like the closed loop of "Crime and Punishment": Li Xiangyi made mistakes in the early stage due to his "limitations" and "arrogance", then Li Lianhua in the later period also paid the price for it and made deep reflections This incident became a thorn in his heart, and he later realized that it was this kind of "small favoritism" against the inside that eventually corroded the foundation of Sigu Sect, leading to betrayal and alienation. His reflections later became even more profound. Therefore, the early plot is more in line with the logic of human nature under a specific identity and situation. This "growth arc" is complete and sincere. The early "favoritism" is not a stain, but a heavy and real cornerstone in the process of his fall from "young god" Li Xiangyi to "mortal" Li Lianhua.

Teacher, your writing is super, super, super, super, super, super. The plot is very good, and it makes me want to follow it to the end. To be honest, I am a person who enjoys reading novels very quickly, but this book is different. The plot is written smoothly. The heroine is very harmonious in this book, not too abrupt. It makes me want to read more and more. The relationship between her and Li Lianhua (Li Sangyi) looks very comfortable, and I enjoy reading it. So you must read this novel, it's really good, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, and I hope the teacher will update 20 chapters a day [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Come on, teacher, believe in yourself[blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's been a long time since I've found such a good-looking novel. The writing is very delicate and there is no OOC. Li Lianhua finally had someone to accompany him through the lonely ten years, to warm him, to take care of each other, and to support each other.

All the book friends looked at me. This is the best book I have ever seen writing about ambiguity. I really love Care, Lingering and Entanglement. There is also a story with a hint of imprisonment. Oh my god, enjoy it. The author handles some events very carefully, many of them can be connected, and the emotional changes are not blunt. Although it seems that the heroine may indeed take advantage of others' danger to make Huahua fall in love with her, but so what. Some people are willing, and the heroine's character is more normal. She is very similar to what the people around her can do. She is ordinary but not ordinary and very charming. She does not rely on the system but is truly herself. I don't have anything to add. Although I can still feel the youthfulness of the writing, it is better because of my temperament and talent in writing, as well as hurry up and update. I have been living on you this week.

There is no system, not a golden finger in the traditional sense. There is a plot, but it is necessary, and there are only the first few plots, and there is no long description of the drama. The author also changed the cases in the drama based on the story direction in the book. In short, the plot is just a minor embellishment. There is a plot with Fang and Di, but it is also just an embellishment. This is inevitable for the development of the story, but the author has deleted the cumbersome plot. The highlight of the plot with Fang Di and Fang Di is the author's original work, but it is absolutely wonderful. The protagonist has always been Li Lianhua × Li Lianye. The foreshadowing is so cool! When I saw the foreshadowing slowly revealed later, I had a feeling that I had vaguely guessed it, but as it was slowly revealed, I suddenly realized it, and I was completely involved! There is no bloody "misunderstanding or love" in the traditional sense. The author perfectly combines the profound theory of "cause and effect" since ancient times with the heroine's time travel. The plot is not cliché and it is hard to guess what the next plot will be. It is a good explanation of "the reincarnation of cause and effect, and you and I are both players in the game."

I have been following it for several days. It is very well written. The first-person perspective directly brings us closer to readers. We are immersed in the situation. The plot is natural and logical, and there are some metaphors. Among them, Lotus Ye is ordinary but extraordinary. I personally feel that Lotus Ye loves life and respects life just like us ordinary people, but at the same time she has some qualities that make her able to break out of the rules and judge the rules. The author, and she can also look at the same thing from different people's perspectives. This is something I don't have now. I hope I can have it in the future. It's very beautiful. It's not a loss for everyone to invest in it. Recommended. The lotus described by DaDa is also very good. I can't describe it well, but after reading DaDa's article, I think Li Lianhua should be like this. I hope DaDa can update it more! I wish you peace and success, all the best, good health, lots of inspiration and constant updates every day. The flowers and leaves will live a long life. ✧*｡٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و✧*｡

This book is the first book about Lotus Tower that I have read. This book is written in detail from the emotions of the male and female protagonists, and contains a lot of foreshadowing. It is really very interesting to highlight in the follow-up. From the cautiousness and fear in the early stage to the slow bud of new love in the later stage, the heroine also slowly walks in. In the world of Lotus, the heroine is not a weak person, she is also very brave, very smart and cute, and the master wife who wrote about Lotus from the later stage cares about the heroine. The real author here will also update it every day. The heroine she created has a really good heart and emotion, and it is really beautiful. I like this book very much. The author also replied to me and explained every reader's doubts about this book in detail. This Lotus Tower is the best I have ever read. There is not much nonsense. Everyone is well portrayed. I highly recommend you to read it. The author updates 20 chapters a day [laughing]

Fans who read Lotus House before skipped the middle ten years directly. This is the first book that I have read seriously. The author's writing style is delicate and real, and full of warmth. It seems good if Huahua and Lotus Leaf can continue to live like this. Their relationship was slowly cultivated in ordinary life. In such days, Li Xiangyi gradually became Li Lianhua. I hope that at the end of the story, they can live such a life again.

The author's writing style is delicate and easy to fall in love with. This book is not only the best among the Lotus Tower fanfics I have read, but also the best among the fanfics I have read. It is not a cool novel, but it easily arouses people's desire to read. It is very good ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧

It's very detailed and flowing, and there are many details that make people explore. The author is so smart that he can actually think of the combination of Tai Chi and Yangzhou Slow. I never thought of it before, but after seeing it, I felt it was particularly harmonious.

The story progresses step by step, without force-feeding sugar, and has a strong sense of immersion. It is the daily life Li Lianhua wants. After reading it, I feel that Li Lianhua is really alive. The characters don't deviate from the personality, they are very good-looking, recommended! ! !

I read 100 chapters in one go. It's very interesting and the content is very eye-catching. But I also have some small suggestions. I think the description of the heroine's character in the early stage is relatively open. I don't think too much about the relationship. Just describe it appropriately. Another point is that I think the pace is a bit flat now. It's good that Li Lianhua can live such an ordinary life. But at present, there is nothing that attracts the interest of reading. I think the pace can be tighter to enter the main plot to attract readers~ The above are just some opinions and suggestions from my personal perspective. The writing is great. I really like this kind of author who pays great attention to details. I think I can finish it very quickly with my reading speed, so I will remind you to update it in advance [please update]

I really like the author's writing style. This is my first time writing a book review. It's purely my own experience. If I don't understand something well, I hope you can give me some advice. I am a three-minute fan, so I often stop reading novels after reading a few chapters. But when I read this novel, I felt deeply, as if there was a magic force that attracted me to read it. More than the delicate writing style, I admire the author's broad values. The lotus leaf is like a little sun. Although she is purring loudly (very cute), her world view is vast and shocking (I like the heroine so much [adoration] [blowing kiss]). My understanding is similar to that of the author. The essence of Lotus Tower is a process of growth, self-rescue and reconciliation. After the war, Li Xiangyi saw the complaints from the people, the accusations from all around, and the death of his master. Let Li Xiangyi, who was originally the proud man of heaven, begin to regret his arrogance. Gradually, Li Xiangyi became like a shackle and became the lock on Li Lianhua's heart. The heroine Lian Ye is just as the author said, she is a helper, not an intervenor, and what she does gradually provides Li Lianhua with a warm environment for self-growth and the material to unlock the key to his heart. The author's emotional descriptions are so delicate. Sometimes the interaction between Huahua and Xiaoye is too sweet, not stiff at all. Finally, I politely urge the author to update, which is not enough. Finally, I hope that the author will be happy every day, and don't be afraid of being tired and update quickly @ This Tao [flying kiss] [love]

Night shift opened this fan fiction and remembered that I had recently rewatched Lotus Tower. I feel that such a powerful Li Xiangyi should not have such a tragic ending. In this book, someone accompanied him, someone went to find him after the East China Sea War, and accompanied him through this sad and dark day that was not shown in the play. It would be nice to have someone with him. In fact, why should we worry about the heroine knowing the plot development and not reminding Li Xiangyi. Will reminding me definitely stop the plot from developing? Everyone's destiny is connected in series. No matter how you try to stop it, the direction of the story and the fate of people will not change. Just like Li Xiangyi will definitely be poisoned by Bicha and turn into Li Lianhua. Lotus, lotus, this is the Lotus Tower. And this time Li Lianhua was no longer alone. I hope that in the end, Li Lianhua can live well and happily. Thank you to the author for creating this fan work. Very nice. Support support

The author is very careful to polish every detail. When someone doesn't understand something, he will explain it [laughing]. It's so cute. The whole process is more logical, but the disadvantage is that it is not finished. The author will update it soon.

This book is very ambiguous, the pinnacle of pure love. I dare not read the remaining dozens of chapters. I feel like I have to say goodbye to the book after reading it, so I keep going forward to review every ingenious thought and foreshadowing written by the author in series. The structure is very complete and fills in a lot of pitfalls [almost crying] [almost crying]

Super, super, super super good-looking♡=•ㅅ＜=) I don't have any good words to comment, but what I look forward to most every day in school is to come back from school right away and read a large text. In the past, I would only update 3 to 4 chapters at most. I also enjoyed watching it on New Year's Day. I will love you forever, Tao Zi. It's hard work writing so much! But after all the hard work, Tao Zi still has to continue writing novels for us づ♡ど

Wow wow wow wow wow wow it's so pretty [shy][shy][admired][admired][admired] Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it's so pretty! [Adoration] Author, do you know that "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Standing at thirty: It means updating thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are your destiny, and the entire website praises you. Sixty and easy to listen to: that is, when you can update 60 chapters a day, everything you say will be easy to hear, including readers. When you are seventy, just follow your heart and do not go beyond the rules: if you can update 70 chapters a day, you can do whatever you want! Update soon! ! ! [Smile][smile]

The writing is really good. This book incorporates the helplessness of an ordinary person into it. Whether it is Li Xiangyi or Li Lianhua, he has gathered all the conditions to become a black man and seek death. If he is still alive, he is actually very powerful. Especially in the creation of the theme, he did not mess up the situation, how powerful it was, how powerful it was, but brought it into the whole book from the perspective of an ordinary person or a person from outside the play. In other words, he knows their ending, but he is powerless to change it, but she will use her ability to try to persuade this ending to change for the better.

Oh my god! ! ! I like this one so much! ! !

The heroine Li Lianye fell from the sky and hit Li Xiangyi. From then on, he was suspected to be a person with peerless martial arts. Later, when he was taken into the Sigumen, Xiao Zijin became the bad guy on the surface, and Bhikkhu Yun became the bad guy secretly. But after all, Li Xiangyi trusted them too much and was poisoned. The master died and became Li Lianhua. Only Li Lianye went to find him in Donghai. From then on, the two accompanied each other.

It's so beautiful, it makes me want to show off.

If Li Lianhua knew that the heroine knew all the plot, wouldn't there be any problems between them?

It's really good to read. I started reading it when he got to more than 90 chapters. I finished it in a few hours and I kept reading. It's one of the only two books I've followed. The writing is very good, the story is very detailed, and there are foreshadowings. I highly recommend it. This is the first book in the Lotus Tower series I read. After reading this, I always felt that it was almost boring to read other books later. The heroine has been with Huahua since Li Xiangyi's period. Although she doesn't know everything about it, the five or six years of getting along with him also made him and Huahua have a good relationship.

Before I became Li Lianhua, I felt the writing was a bit awkward. After Becoming Li Lianhua, the writing is very good, and the life scenes are very interesting to watch. I feel like I will be criticized for three things. 1: Li Xiangyi's master Qi Mushan is no longer there 2: Person issue. Many people can't stand the first person pronoun. Me too, I've watched a lot, so I'm a little used to it. 3: It's a bit strange that the heroine is set before the battle in the East China Sea. Even though I know that the plot has not changed, the author may have other settings for this. After reading Chapter 64, the explanation is indeed quite realistic. After time travel, the first thing I think about must be myself, and I must live first.

The protagonist described by the author is the perspective I stand in. It is very objective and true. I didn't want to stay here just because I traveled through time. Besides, I was a very ordinary, normal little person who traveled in and didn't think about what I wanted to do to change the world. Perhaps the biggest wish is that Li Lianhua lives a long life

The writing style is very delicate. What I am writing about now is Li Lianhua's ten years. I look forward to the follow-up [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [sending heart]

It's so sad that I have just read such an authoritative book.

Seeing that a very ordinary life is the life that Li Lianhua wants, I feel very happy, as if his path should be like this.

I think it's very beautiful. I hope the author will update it one day. It's so beautiful.