
A Fallen Girl, A Skylark Perched on a Drooping Branch
败女,云雀压枝垂
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 473k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban Everyday
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
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Must Have One Female Lead
Are there any novels with one female lead where the protagonist doesn't flirt with anyone else at all?
Looking for Japanese-Style Slice-of-Life Romance. There Seem to Be So Few Books Like This 🍅
Too Many Losing Heroine Candidates
Looking for books like I Made My Move Before Old Ma Became a Loser. Please, please, please, please, please!!!!!! A loser heroine story about Old Ma. Write about Ma Titi Tian Aixing!!!!!!
Are Single-Female-Lead Anime Fanfics Dead? Why Are They All Old Stories?
I'm looking for books like The Maid and the Cool Young Master's Daily Life at Shuchiin.
There Are So Few Fan Fics About Too Many Losing Heroine Characters on Tomato
Looking for books similar to The Loser Girl Service Club! Loser girls only.
The Loser Series
I want books similar to Seriously, Bro? How Did You Become a Succubus Everyone's Dream Lover?
Japanese Anime Fanfiction with One Female Lead, No Other Love Interests for the Male Lead, and No Angst
Looking for books similar to Bocchi the Rock, and Being Neighbors with Bocchi. The male lead loves only the female lead, with no other ambiguous relationships. He has sound values and isn't a pushover. Everyday-life stories.
Slice of Life, Japanese School Life, Pure Romance, Anime Fanfiction Welcome
I'm looking for books similar to *A Youthful Monologue as a Witness, After Entering Kimi*. I hope the story flows well and the plot makes sense.
No Crossover Anime, Please, Just Stories About a Single Anime
Something like Oregairu or Classroom of the Elite. No characters jumping back and forth between worlds.
Looking for a Story with Anna Yanami from Makeine: Too Many Losing Heroines! as the Heroine
Reader comments 50
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It is a very "soothing" novel that blends emotion and plot very naturally. You can clearly feel the relationship between Fang Huyuan and Zhichui. Although there are still some shortcomings, for example, the development of the two protagonists feels a bit abrupt, maybe because the author has not finished explaining the entire story. So as far as I'm concerned, it feels like there's a lot between them. Empty window. I hope the author can optimize it later. (Of course, this is just my personal idea, and I still support the author to write at his own pace) I really like this natural rhythm. This is the first time I have encountered a book that makes me feel comfortable reading. Although it doesn't seem to be very popular, as long as the author keeps writing, I believe I will keep reading it. Finally, I wish the author can continue to make progress and write better and better. (Can the author update more every day? It's not enough to read haha) This is my first time writing a long review. Please bear with me if I write poorly. Thank you.
It looks good, I love watching it, and I want to watch it again. The heroine takes the initiative in flirting and never hides her lustful and possessive nature. He is capable in handling work and study affairs, but careless in handling housework. He has an imposing manner as the student president in front of others, and he is charming and charming in front of the forest (occasionally). The male protagonist is a bit arrogant but not awkward. Facing the female protagonist's continuous attacks, he accepts them one by one and returns the affection. He refuses the female protagonist's embrace on his 16th birthday. When he turns 18, he really feels like a clown. Fortunately, he overcame his pseudo-male mentality during the summer vacation. He understands that the real responsibility lies not in adhering to the 18-year-old legal limit, but in whether his body and mind can support a future with her. He bids farewell to his virginity and becomes a man. Regarding the setting of the male protagonist rescuing people and being reincarnated in 19 years, the author uses a special code to narrate the story of the male protagonist's previous life. The father of a Chinese music family wanted to prove his incompetence with the Western music piano, so he pressured the male protagonist to learn piano. In order to free the male protagonist and show off his talent, his sister trapped herself in a prison, making the male protagonist feel guilty. Later, while swimming with his sister, she accidentally fell into the water. The hero froze in shock and missed the chance of rescue. The hero felt sad and guilty, closed himself off, and went into self-exile. When he vented his anger on the piano, he hallucinated his sister's smiling face, and then he fell in love with the piano to comfort his feelings. In the year 19, the same sympathy happened again. This time the hero successfully rescued the little girl and was reincarnated. The little girl accepted his love and passed on his piano. Therefore, the male protagonist is 19 years old physically but still a child mentally. After reincarnation, he becomes a special child. It is normal for him to be manipulated by a child king like the female protagonist.
The writing style is really good. Although it is a bland and classic plot, it makes people want to read it. Nowadays, many unconventional novels are cliché in themselves. This novel makes me feel refreshed now.
It has the flavor of a Japanese light novel, and the characters are consistent with the original work. The protagonist is three-dimensional but lacks logic in getting along with Hibari Kindergarten. There are no major flaws in the look and feel. It reads smoothly, but the number of words is not enough. Generally speaking, it is a high-quality fan romance novel. (Maybe I'm too sensitive? It's a bit like AI in some places, but the writing is still good)
The narrative language is very plain, but very charming. I can't help but read it. How should I put it, it feels like a Japanese light novel. The male protagonist is a bit more accepting and a tsundere. I have almost never seen it (maybe it's because I have too little experience). The female protagonist is a strong female character. The emotional line is also very bland, but it just feels like there are deep underlying emotions. All in all, it's very beautiful and worth watching. I would also like to thank the author for always liking my comments 💕 💕 💕
Well, it's pretty good among the romance novels I've read. It reveals the beauty in daily life without any artificial saccharine feeling. No matter, it suits my taste anyway. Come on, author 😘😘😘
An excellent work, but unfortunately it was stabbed in the back
It's okay. It can be regarded as an excellent fanfic. Although there are some shortcomings in various aspects, it looks very good overall. I hope it can keep it up (to be honest, it's a bit difficult). Ah, no matter what, come on, author.
After discarding the setting that the male protagonist was reincarnated at the age of 19, Let's see the male protagonist as a musical genius, arrogant, weak, and a child, and his impression will be much better.
As someone who often finds faults, this is one of the few works that I can't find fault with. The plot, characters and writing are all very good. The male and female protagonists are contrary to the secular concept. The male protagonist is weak and the female protagonist is strong. No one is perfect. The author left flaws for the male and female protagonists that can be compensated by each other. This not only enriches the characters, enhances the authenticity, but also creates a sense of a match made in heaven. In addition, the author writes extremely skillfully, rationally using various perspectives to depict the plot, and showing the thoughts of men and women with different thinking. The author also prepares a concise and poetic summary at the end of each chapter. In short, if I write like this, I will definitely get a 9.0 Or higher. If I can not be limited by the romance between young men and women, I can write a more profound connotation and it will be even higher.