A Defeated Girl, a Skylark Weighs Down the Branches

It is a very "soothing" novel that blends emotion and plot very naturally. You can clearly feel the relationship between Fang Huyuan and Zhichui. Although there are still some shortcomings, for example, the development of the two protagonists feels a bit abrupt, maybe because the author has not finished explaining the entire story. So as far as I'm concerned, it feels like there's a lot between them. Empty window. I hope the author can optimize it later. (Of course, this is just my personal idea, and I still support the author to write at his own pace) I really like this natural rhythm. This is the first time I have encountered a book that makes me feel comfortable reading. Although it doesn't seem to be very popular, as long as the author keeps writing, I believe I will keep reading it. Finally, I wish the author can continue to make progress and write better and better. (Can the author update more every day? It's not enough to read haha) This is my first time writing a long review. Please bear with me if I write poorly. Thank you.

It looks good, I love watching it, and I want to watch it again. The heroine takes the initiative in flirting and never hides her lustful and possessive nature. He is capable in handling work and study affairs, but careless in handling housework. He has an imposing manner as the student president in front of others, and he is charming and charming in front of the forest (occasionally). The male protagonist is a bit arrogant but not awkward. Facing the female protagonist's continuous attacks, he accepts them one by one and returns the affection. He refuses the female protagonist's embrace on his 16th birthday. When he turns 18, he really feels like a clown. Fortunately, he overcame his pseudo-male mentality during the summer vacation. He understands that the real responsibility lies not in adhering to the 18-year-old legal limit, but in whether his body and mind can support a future with her. He bids farewell to his virginity and becomes a man. Regarding the setting of the male protagonist rescuing people and being reincarnated in 19 years, the author uses a special code to narrate the story of the male protagonist's previous life. The father of a Chinese music family wanted to prove his incompetence with the Western music piano, so he pressured the male protagonist to learn piano. In order to free the male protagonist and show off his talent, his sister trapped herself in a prison, making the male protagonist feel guilty. Later, while swimming with his sister, she accidentally fell into the water. The hero froze in shock and missed the chance of rescue. The hero felt sad and guilty, closed himself off, and went into self-exile. When he vented his anger on the piano, he hallucinated his sister's smiling face, and then he fell in love with the piano to comfort his feelings. In the year 19, the same sympathy happened again. This time the hero successfully rescued the little girl and was reincarnated. The little girl accepted his love and passed on his piano. Therefore, the male protagonist is 19 years old physically but still a child mentally. After reincarnation, he becomes a special child. It is normal for him to be manipulated by a child king like the female protagonist.

The writing style is really good. Although it is a bland and classic plot, it makes people want to read it. Nowadays, many unconventional novels are cliché in themselves. This novel makes me feel refreshed now.

The narrative language is very plain, but very charming. I can't help but read it. How should I put it, it feels like a Japanese light novel. The male protagonist is a bit more accepting and a tsundere. I have almost never seen it (maybe it's because I have too little experience). The female protagonist is a strong female character. The emotional line is also very bland, but it just feels like there are deep underlying emotions. All in all, it's very beautiful and worth watching. I would also like to thank the author for always liking my comments [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

It has the flavor of a Japanese light novel, and the characters are consistent with the original work. The protagonist is three-dimensional but lacks logic in getting along with Hibari Kindergarten. There are no major flaws in the look and feel. It reads smoothly, but the number of words is not enough. Generally speaking, it is a high-quality fan romance novel. (Maybe I'm too sensitive? It's a bit like AI in some places, but the writing is still good)

Well, it's pretty good among the romance novels I've read. It reveals the beauty in daily life without any artificial saccharine feeling. No matter, it suits my taste anyway. Come on, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's okay. It can be regarded as an excellent fanfic. Although there are some shortcomings in various aspects, it looks very good overall. I hope it can keep it up (to be honest, it's a bit difficult). Ah, no matter what, come on, author.

An excellent work, but unfortunately it was stabbed in the back

After discarding the setting that the male protagonist was reincarnated at the age of 19, Let's see the male protagonist as a musical genius, arrogant, weak, and a child, and his impression will be much better.

As someone who often finds faults, this is one of the few works that I can't find fault with. The plot, characters and writing are all very good. The male and female protagonists are contrary to the secular concept. The male protagonist is weak and the female protagonist is strong. No one is perfect. The author left flaws for the male and female protagonists that can be compensated by each other. This not only enriches the characters, enhances the authenticity, but also creates a sense of a match made in heaven. In addition, the author writes extremely skillfully, rationally using various perspectives to depict the plot, and showing the thoughts of men and women with different thinking. The author also prepares a concise and poetic summary at the end of each chapter. In short, if I write like this, I will definitely get a 9.0 Or higher. If I can not be limited by the romance between young men and women, I can write a more profound connotation and it will be even higher.

Nb After reading the latest chapter of the original work, I came back and found that the fanfic is more delicious than the original work [Petrochemical]

I found that the quality of the authors who wrote about the lost dog fanfics was surprisingly good. Their writing was very natural and artistic. I really like this style.

You are mine, I am yours, who One more look, one more look will explode Get closer, get closer and you'll melt I want to take you as my own, babybaby No matter where I go, the person I think of is you, youyou Oh, am I crazy because of you? Oh, my heart is always uneasy Because you become a strange person

Only after reading the ninth volume of Lost Dog did I understand the value of this book [face-covering] [face-covering]

Very good work, but the original author was stabbed [face covering]

Well, I didn't realize it was a fanfic until I read Chapter 17, and I'm a bit of a southern clam (ps: I haven't read The Lost Dog) But the writing is very good. Although it is mentioned as a time traveler at the beginning, the male protagonist is not the kind of time traveler who knows the plot. I feel very good about this. I really like this kind of purity of soul. I like Hibari not because I know the plot, but because Tsukijo Edaru likes Hibari Torabara, that's all.

It's good to watch, but the ending is a bit rushed, and I personally think the travel chapter is not very good. After leaving the stage of Shi Yu, it is difficult for me to put the image of Hu Yuan in my mind, and the emotional description in the later period is not as delicate as it was at the beginning. I hope the author can continue writing, and I look forward to Mengzi's fandom, but with the popularity of the heroine, I'm really afraid that the author will suddenly stop updating [face covering]

Very cool. The writing is very smooth and delicate. Although it is a fanfic, it doesn't matter if you have never read The Lost Dogs. Moreover, the characters in The Lost Dogs are all vividly portrayed. So far, the plot advancement has been very reasonable, and the characters' psychology and emotional lines have been developed a lot. I doubt that the author is a light novelist who secretly changed his skin to write fan fiction. But this is indeed one of the best light novels written by Tomato.

It's great, no need to read it as a fan. It is a story that belongs entirely to Skylark on the Branches. The delicate brushstrokes create light emotions and three-dimensional characters, and the haiku at the end of the chapter is very interesting. Rather than being said as casual thoughts on the branches, it is more like the love words of the author who describes their story step by step (I am not making up rumors, it is a love letter I said💌).

In July 2026, he was severely backstabbed by the original author.

The writing style is quite good, almost like reading a light novel [Thinking]

It's very well written. Forgive me for being stupid and I don't know how to describe it, but it's really sweet. I feel like my body is so warm that it's almost melting. Big cheers for the author! ! ! [Like][Like][Like]

I have read this book before, but now that I heard other people talking about the ninth volume, I don't dare to read the ninth volume at all.

Why is it 6.8? I think it's okay.

It looks good, but I don't know why the score is so low

The characters are really described in a three-dimensional way, and the author's writing is really great [blowing kiss]

It's good to read. Apart from light novels, it's the first time I've read it in first person. Among Chinese authors Ouchi, the author should write an article about the heroine of Zhixiwu. I can do anything [crying]

My sister almost cried when she gave me a knife

Very good article, highly recommended

No, buddy, I thought you had entered the palace, but you are here.